初中英语作文评分视频【一】
Last Saturday,with all my classmates and teachers,I went on a trip to the nature park .We departed from school at about half past seven and spent about 40 minutes travelling to our destination.When we first entered into the park,all of us were shocked by the natural beauty and the hamonized ecosystem of the park.Then,happily we were playing games on the sand; swimming in the pool and taking with our friends on the grassplot.After lunch break,our programs were continued with an contest of story narating held and each of us was immerging within the funny stories We left the part at about 5 o'clock,and unitl now,most of us are still haunted by the beautiful memory of that trip.
初中英语作文评分视频【二】
中国在解放后迅速发展，然而汽车也走进了寻常百姓家，虽然汽车给我们带来了很多方便，但是汽车也携带的一定的危险性。当我看到死于车祸的人时深深的叹了口气，司机只要注意这么一下，悲剧就不会发生。
我记得电影里有一幕特别悲惨。一个客车司机在一条高速公路上连续跑了三、四个来回还坚持不肯休息，就在高速公路中间的一座桥上，汽车冲出了围栏，倒立在河床上，车上的.人无一生还;死者的家人在黄色的棺材边哭泣。那为司机只要注意自己的身体，那么这活生生的几十条生命就不会这样白白断送。
往往出车祸的就人就是不遵守交通规则的，那部电影里有些就是着样事例。他和几个朋友去喝酒，喝完酒，准备开车回家，因为人数多，车辆已经严重超载了，那个人又没驾照，就这样开上了山，一不小心从山上冲到了山下的石厂，车上的人无一生还。
车轮是无情的。其中就有一个小女孩，她妈妈去上班，到了中午，她发现妈妈忘记拿钥匙，连忙送去，可是就在交差路口，一辆汽车冲了上来……等她醒来时，她的腿已经不能动了，造成终生残疾，她出去也只能坐在篮球壳里了。在最后那小女孩以一句话再次想我们敲响了警钟：“叔叔、阿姨们，当你们开着汽车在公路上奔驰时，你们想想，想想我这个将终生坐在篮球壳里的小女孩。”
在结尾，我还看到一个触目惊心的数据，数据上说：我国2003年用于车祸直接济损失就有33.5多万元,估计平均每分钟就有6人死亡;2004年我国用于车祸经济损失就有15.5多万元，平均每分钟死于车祸3人。
这部电影让我联想到了在马路上玩耍的孩儿、不看红绿等就横行的人和车辆、在马路上横冲直撞的摩托车;这都是极端危险的。如果你看了这部电影，你还会贪杯吗?你还会在马路上横冲直撞吗?你还会在马路上玩耍吗?你还会闯红绿灯吗?我是再也不会了，我宁愿麻烦一下自己也不愿去图那一下方便。
如果我们能注意一下，谦让一下，小心一下就不会发生这样的事情;你要是不这样，就是点燃了那支死亡的蜡烛。
初中英语作文评分视频【三】
In haimen there is a park. it’s a big and beautiful park. it has two gates. they are the north gate and the west gate. many people park their bikes in front of the gates.
There is a shop at the north gate. when you go into the park through the north gate, you will find a large square on your right and you will see lots of trees and flowers around you. in the west of the park, there is a playground.
Sometimes some children fly kites on it and some people sit on the grass and chat. in the middle of the park, there is a lake. there are many boats on it. there is a hill in the east of the park.
The park is very beautiful. i love it very much. will you come to visit it some day?
