初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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每当我看到鲜艳的红领巾在胸前飘扬,我就会情不自禁地为自己而自豪。自豪自己是一名中国人,自豪自己是一名少先队员。
为什么红领巾是三角形的?原来是因为红领巾是五星红旗的一角,又随之想到为什么红领巾这么红呢?原来他是英雄的鲜血染成的,革命烈士面对敌人的屠刀懂得微笑,毫无畏惧,他们用自己的一腔热血成就了我们的新中国。每每想到这,我就会更加爱护红领巾,因为爱护红领巾就等于爱护国旗。
少先队员是祖国未来的花朵,也是祖国的未来,我深知要做到一名少先队员的不易。在平时我都严格要求自己,但也不忘记帮助同学们。曾经看到有一位同学不太理解一道数学题,看到这儿我本想不用去管它,但是看了看胸前飘扬的红领巾是我想到了我的责任,团结同学,共同进退,我立马转过身说:“我来教你!”走到她身旁,耐心地给他讲了几句我的思路,没想到他立马领会了,其实他只是把顺序错了,只要细致地梳理一下自己的想法就好。赠人玫瑰,手留余香。我和红领巾一起笑了。
每当看到红领巾在胸前飘扬,我就会自豪,自豪自己是一名光荣的少先队员!
每当我高声歌唱“我们是共产主义接班人……”时,心中的自豪感就会油然而生。我骄傲,我是光荣的少先队员。
我是光荣的少先队员,我自律、勤奋、好学。我有良好的学习习惯、能遵守各项行为规范、以身作则。每一堂课我都能专心听讲、每一次作业我都能认真自觉完成。我常常告诉自己:学习是我自己的事,不能依赖老师和家长督促。从一年级到现在,我每年都被评为“星·三好学生”,并第一批被推选为“武进区好少年”。
我是光荣的少先队员,我有爱心、有责任心,并乐意为班集体服务。我团结同学,热心公益。老师布置的每一项学习以外的任务,我也都会尽心尽力完成。比如:手抄报、黑板报素材、排节目等。三年级时,我作为学校的值岗队员,每星期都到五六年级教室检查卫生和眼保健操,认真负责的态度得到表扬。
我是光荣的少先队员,我多才多艺,每天都在成为更好的自己。我会跳舞,曾经去上海参加过多次舞蹈演出;我会唱歌,曾加入学校合唱队参加武进区合唱比赛;我会写书法、也会弹琴,我还特别喜欢阅读和旅行。从小到大,我能积极参加校内外各项活动,先后获得了“讲故事比赛一等奖”、“好书推荐一等奖”、“江苏省数学小论文一等奖”、“百词达人”、“计算能手”等许多荣誉。但成绩只能代表过去,“欲穷千里目,更上一层楼”,我会在今后的每一天都一如既往地不懈努力。
戴着鲜艳的红领巾,站在庄严的国旗下,我宣誓:“我是光荣的少先队员,我会时刻准备着!”
我回忆起上小学一年级的那段时光,真是令人难忘。那时的我还是个懂事不多的孩子,我在班上学习成绩可棒了!当时老师决定在同学中间选一批少先队员,这时班上的同学跃跃欲试,都想争取第一批加入少先队,我也不例外。
为了这第一批的少先队员,我每天都在努力着。每一次作业我都精益求精;每一堂课我都认真听讲、积极举手发言;每一次考试我都尽最大努力考得最好。终于,我成了第一批入选的少先队员。为了获得这一荣誉,我经历了许许多多,有一件事令我久久难以往怀。
一天我们班上来了一位年轻的男老师,他姓何。听说他是来教我们英语的\',我一听惊呆了,因为我最害怕学英语,生怕学不好,何况还是一位男老师。所以每次上何老师的课我都会紧张无比,甚至连呼吸都急促些。一天何老师郑重其事地告诉大家,要进行单元测验了,同学们听到这个消息,心都提到了嗓子眼,我也害怕极了,赶忙抓紧时间复习。这一天来到了,老师像往常一样,抱着一叠试卷走进了教室,教室里鸦雀无声,同学们吓得声都不敢出,因为这次考试的好坏直接影响到评选少先队员的结果。我虽然害怕但是沉着应战,终于认真完成了答卷。
没过几天,卷子发下来了,当同学把一张九十八分的试卷搁在我的手上时,我的心里比吃了蜂蜜还要甜,因为我考得很不错啊。我就要戴上鲜艳的红领巾啦!
没过多久,我和许许多多的好伙伴们一起戴上了我们最渴望的红领巾,它那红彤彤的颜色映衬着我的脸庞,我感到无比的骄傲和自豪。
你们知道吗?我的弟弟是怎样的人?你们看了我的介绍一定会知道的。
我的弟弟长得像瓜子的脸,爸爸说他是“帅哥的标准脸。头发乌黑光亮,一双眼睛又黑又圆,扁扁的鼻子,像狗一样什么都能闻到。
他是一个尊老爱幼的孩子,记得有一次我和弟弟去玩,看见一个盲人阿姨过不了马路,弟弟看见后赶紧过去帮忙人阿姨扶到马路对面,盲人阿姨非常感动,说:“谢谢你,我虽然看不见,但我想问你叫什么名字。弟弟说:“阿姨,好人不留名,你就叫我红领巾吧。“真有礼貌啊。盲人阿姨夸到,我也对弟弟说:“你真棒。我真佩服他呀!
他也非常的\'调皮。有一次,我刚回到家,他就立刻来到我的旁边,说:“姐姐,陪我一起玩吧!我叹了一口气,说:“不行,我已经很累了。他蹲下身子,抱住我的腿说:“姐姐,你不陪我玩,我就一直抱着你。我真是没有办法了,只好答应了,他却蹦得一跳三尺高。我和她玩的是“孙悟空,我当的是“妖怪,他当的是“孙悟空,他拿着他的“金箍棒,我拿着我的“大刀,他便向我说:“妖精,快把我师傅放出来!我说:“没门,我还要等着吃他的肉呢!她听完我的话,他便直接拿着一“金箍棒向我敲来,我也不甘示弱,也向他发起攻击,经过一系的回合,我和他打了几百大战,他忽然一个金箍棒打中我的腰,我便倒了下来,他看见后,欣喜若狂。我说:“既然你赢了,那我就可以歇息了吧!他说:“嗯,好的,不过下次我还要玩,这个游戏太好玩了,我太开心了!唉,真是的!
他也非常爱学习。有一次我叫他出去玩,他却说:“我的功课还没有做完,你先去玩吧。过了一两个小时,我去看看他把功课做完了没有,却看见他在在看书,我说:“你完成作业了吗?他说:“完成了。“那不去玩。我生气地说。他说:“对不起,我忘了。听了他的话,我想到了一个四字词语“废寝忘食。
这就是我的弟弟,你们想跟他做朋友吗?
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