初次见到这个马蜂窝我觉得十分恶心,不之不觉我全身的鸡皮疙瘩都起来了。我越看越觉的不顺眼,决心与马蜂“决一死战”。我赶忙将全身武装起来。向你们介绍一下:我头戴头盔,身穿战袍——雨衣,脚穿战靴——雨鞋,手拿“金箍棒”。
走近蜂窝旁,我将手中的“金箍棒”一挥击中蜂窝要害,我心中暗暗自喜:蜂儿们可能还不知出了什么事就被我打落了“悬崖”了,哈哈!可是出乎易料的.事情发生了,那些马蜂见我把它们的家给端了,纷纷找我来报仇。还好我未卜先知早以设下埋伏了——烟熏。我急忙跑到了一边去看着一只只马蜂落入了地板的怀抱——昏死过去。看着我的计划逐渐走向成功我心里洋洋得意。
不一会儿整个阳台上对满了昏死过去的马蜂,我担心这些马蜂会再次醒来去重建“家园”。于是我拿出早以准备好的***虫剂往马蜂身上一喷,终于搞定了!过了一会儿我拿出畚斗、扫把来清理“现场”。
就这样马蜂被我一网打进了,我高兴的一蹦三尺。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
鉴湖是平静朴实又不失美丽的,游走于她之中,总令人流连忘返。
曾见过黄河呼啸飞溅的场面:惊涛澎湃,浑水急流,仿佛一个有无穷力量的大力士,震出的惊天巨响想把人吞噬。可我却总觉得单调,无趣,似乎少了些什么,觉得黄河的表演只不过在作秀。
鉴湖却不相同,平静的水流中不失一份淡雅,清澈的湖水里更多一份情趣。她不似黄河般激昂奋游,震天撼地,吞天沃日。她只是静静地流淌着,如小巧的美女睁着大眼睛好奇地望着你,似笑非笑却含情脉脉,更让人体会到一份闲适,一份优雅。
鉴湖之美更美在夜晚。到晚上,鉴湖之水流淌地更加缓慢,如玲珑小溪一样缓缓向前。湖水叮咚,如一首欢快又轻盈的乐曲,鸟儿歌唱,如一段美丽动人的乐章。人们也被这美妙的歌声陶醉:岸边,有闲坐垂钓的老人,有嬉戏玩耍的孩童;湖中,有游泳的青少年。笑声、歌声与水声,编织成一首绵长悠扬的交响曲,回旋环绕,发出鉴湖的声音。
鉴湖四季也大相径庭。春天,万物复苏,柳条抽枝,鉴湖也跟随着这柳条的摆动,叮咚欢快地流淌,如欢快的美人;夏日,草木繁盛,她受到日光的感召,急速流淌,像个活泼大方的美人;秋日,万物成熟,她变得深沉,淡泊,更有了一份自己的思索,她是个忧郁的美人;冬日,万物凋零,她却用冰做的双手,拥抱在她身上滑冰的客人,她是个外表寒冷,内心温暖的美人,让人留恋,沉睡在其中。
我总爱在四季之夜悄悄来到湖边。不做别的\',只是静静地凝望着鉴湖那潺潺的流水,偶而把手指伸进湖中,感受那流淌的湖水的澄澈,更感受在湖中跳跃的从不改变的平静与朴实。
离开鉴湖,我心中总是充满了坚定,更多了一份朴实和平和的精神。我内心平静,所有的不快与烦恼也无影无踪,正如这旁边的鉴湖。
这鉴湖,含蓄而优雅,朴实又不失风度,美丽又纯朴,不如叫做“素美人”吧。
It ______ ______ ______ the train will be late.
答案:is likely that
2. It is likely that the typhoon will sweep across the island.
The typhoon ______ ______ ______ ______ across the island.
答案:is likely to sweep
3. I think trying to stop the couple quarrelling will be of no use.
I think it's ______ ______ ______ to stop the couple quarrelling.
答案:no use trying
4. Every time I was in trouble, he had no hesitation in helping me.
Every time I was in trouble, he came to help me ______ ______.
答案:without hesitation
5. He never hesitates to help if I have any problem.
He always helps me ______ ______ if I have any problem.
答案:without hesitation
6. I crossed the street so as not to meet him, but he saw me and came running towards me.
I crossed the street to ______ ______ him, but he saw me and came running towards me.
答案:avoid seeing
7. It seems that the students in that class have all passed the qualified exam.
All of the students in that class ______ ______ ______ ______ the qualified exam.
答案:seem to have passed
8. It seems that the boys of the class are playing football on the playground.
The boys of the class ______ ______ ______ ______ football on the playground.
答案:seem to be playing
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
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