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第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
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第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
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第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
人生就像剧场,时时刻刻都在上演着不同的一幕,唯有那一幕,我难以忘怀。
今年年初,一场疾病夺去了舅舅的生命。寒假的最后一个星期天,我住在同学家。“喂,妈。”为了不让父母担心,我给妈妈打了通电话。你在哪啊?”我漫不经心地问道,“在医院。”“啊,怎么了?”我急切地问。“没什么,是你舅舅。”“哦。”我松了口气,以为真的是无关紧要的小病,却忽视了如果真那么简单为何跑到北京那么远去治?
终于放寒假了,我决定住在姥姥家。看着周围人焦急的表情,我隐约觉得有些不安。舅舅从医院回来了,什么都瞒不住了,舅舅得的是肝癌,没多长时间了。
我怎么也不敢相信这个事实,瞪大了眼睛看着眼前面瘦如柴的舅舅,怎么也联想不起来往昔那个身强力壮的他。
终于,在新学期的第一个星期天,舅舅没能经受死神对他的考验,离我们而去了。
我踏进姥姥家的小院,想起这里的欢声笑语。那时,舅舅总会给我们摘柿子吃,领着我们做游戏,慈祥的笑容像春天的阳光一般温暖。可惜,那样的笑容只能存在记忆中了,再也见不到了。
我看着眼前的院子,枯***柿子树上挂着白色的纸条,它们孤苦无依的在凛冽的寒风中飞舞。堂厅中,舅舅的棺材被人刷上了黑漆,还未完全消散的漆味涌进我的鼻子,刺激着我麻木的神经。眼所能见到之处皆为白色,白色的纸条,白色的丧服,白色的舅舅。这一幕,深深烙在我的脑海中,我的心中,我的骨血中。
啊!舅舅!我知道你去了一个美好的地方,你一定要过得开心!抛除人生的一切烦恼、痛苦、包袱。
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
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