中考英语作文课评课【一】
评课既是教研活动，又是科研活动。它都在教学实践和教学理论之间架起一座桥梁。它既是一个验证理论，指导实践的过程，也是一个实践操作、升华为理论的过程。在听评课中可以学习吸收大量的教学理论、经验和先进的教改信息，在执教中去运用。也可把自己的经验总结概括形成理论。如此循环反复，教师的教学业务素质必然会有很大的提高。
另外，评课也是教育同行进行教材分析、教法研究、教学经验交流的一种好形式。一位哲学家说：“你有一个苹果，我有一个苹果，彼此交换以后还是一个苹果；如果你有一个思想，我有一个思想，彼此交换以后，每个人就是两个思想。”所以，教师之间开展听评课活动，就能达到交流教学经验、切磋教艺的目的。
中考英语作文课评课【二】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
中考英语作文课评课【三】
要很好的达到教学目标就要求老师在课前认真的做教学设计。好的教学设计就是达到教学目标的正确道路。教师要灵活运用教材对教材可根据实际删减或增加。这句话说的容易，我们不但要了解自己的学生，更要深度吃透文本和挖掘文本。例如Unit 9 What can I do? 《湖南少儿出版社》如果学生的程度一般就以What can I do?You can...。为主来进行处理。如果学生的程度高就可以扩展到PART G What shall we do with…联系生活，告诉学生当别人遇到困难时怎么办。如老奶奶过马路，同学生病等。倡导能力所及的见义勇为。这样一堂课学生收获良多。老师也不会觉的无话可说。同时课文PART G得到了深度挖掘，灵活运用了教材。在第二章第七节（鲜明的教学特色）里，看到了刘老师在一堂Read and Write课型中，只要生掌握 home、room、school、classroom四个单词，内容简单而又枯燥，但刘老师对教材进行整理时结合学生的生活实际，使教学内容生活化，学生们感到很亲切，有实实在在的东西可让他们参照，可让他们表达，而不像我们平时上课时只用几张图片了事，教学效果相差很大。从课例中可以看到刘老师在备课时的灵活性，使教学内容更贴近学生生活，成为学生关心的、感兴趣的话题，使教学获得了满意的效果。又如通过对邱老师和王老师两堂课例的对比，使我懂得了一堂好课不仅仅满足于学生知识的获得，更要充分发挥师生双方在教学中的主动性和创造性，选用有效的教学方法，培养学生积极的.学习态度，改变“死读书，读死书”的问题，促进学生自主学习。
中考英语作文课评课【四】
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第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
中考英语作文课评课【五】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
中考英语作文课评课【六】
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第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文：
第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论：
第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
