今天早上,当我看到老师拿着上星期我们的试卷走进教室时,我心里忐忑不安,心里正想着:会考多少分呢?要是考不好怎么办?不,一定会考得好的,我在心里自己安慰自己。突然,我听到老师叫道:“徐世新。”我一听,心像揣着一只兔子似的“砰砰”跳着。我满怀信心地跑上了讲台。
当看到我的试卷上的分数时,我惊呆了!竟然才65分。我伤心到了极点,“怎么会没有考好呢?是不是老师改错了?”我来来回回的看着自己的考卷,千方百计的想找出可以给自己加分的地方,可是,找了半天也没有找到,只发现自己没有考好是因为有很多地方都是因为错别字被扣的分。
下课了,我心里幻想着:是不是很多同学也像我一样考不好呢?于是,我小心翼翼地问同学:“你考多少分?”同学说:“80分。”我心想:不是吧!难道其他同学的分数都比我的分数高?我一脸羞愧地从同学身边悄悄地走开了。
我暗下决心:以后一定要把写错别字的毛病改掉。认真的学习,争取考出一个好的成绩。
今天到校,老师把我们的期末卷子发下来,我心里非常害怕考不好。等把卷子发下来以后,我一看语文只考了70多分,我心里难过极了,别的卷子我都考了90多分。
爸爸接我回到家,我慢慢走进屋里。妈妈看我不高兴,知道我肯定没考好。妈妈的神情严肃了,她就知道是语文没考好,让我把卷子给她,妈妈一看我考了70多分,妈妈就生气了,大发雷霆,打我,骂我。其实我心里更难受。你不止一次对我说过,以后再也不打骂我了,可是妈妈说话不算数,您又说谎了,可我为什么不能说谎呢?
我知道在考试前您给我巩固了很多知识,复习了很多语文资料,可是我还是没考好。妈妈请您再原谅女儿最后一次,今后我一定要更加努力,争取下次取得好成绩!
《十万个为什么》是一套科普系列丛书,它里面的资料数不胜数。大到《神秘宇宙》,小到《生活百味》,咱们提的问题它几乎都能回答,并且回答的很全面,也很有科学道理。它能帮我们增长知识。真是一位”好帮手”!
小的时候,我不明白八大行星是怎样构成的,于是我便翻阅了《十万个为什么》,书上说太阳系中其实有九大行星,此刻改成八大行星是因为冥王星很小,有些科学家不认为它是九大行星之一,所以定为了八大行星。在很久很久以前,太阳发生了巨大的爆炸,陨石四处飞溅,最终组合了起来,成了九个大土球……
《十万个为什么》还向我们讲述了鸟儿为什么要唱歌是因为它们要向同伴发出自我要所表达的……北极熊为什么不怕冷原先是它们的皮毛能够把阳光转化为热能给自我取暖啊!《十万个为什么》还给我们介绍了一些趣味的自然现象,比如说一年中的“四季”是怎样构成的海底下是什么颜色海水为什么发蓝……从中我发现了许多科学的道理,解开了我心中的一些谜团。
在这本书中,我最感兴趣的一篇文章是《打蛇为什么要打三寸和七寸》,书上说的是打蛇打三寸是因为三寸的地方是蛇的脊椎骨是最容易打断的地方,所以,一旦被打断,后面的器官也被破坏。打七寸是因为七寸的`地方是蛇的心脏所在部位,心脏被打碎,蛇当然就没命了。
《十万个为什么》还给我们揭开了为什么晚上要刷牙因为晚上不刷牙的话那些食物残渣会在嘴里发酵……皇帝为什么会怕史官因为如果自我做了不光彩的事,会被记载流
传下去,让后人都明白自我的丑闻……
《十万个为什么》是我的良师益友,它让我认识了这个丰富多彩的世界,让我明白了许多新知识,也让我明白了知识的力量,知识的价值。《十万个为什么》就像一叶小舟,它带着我驶向了知识的大门,驶向了世界……
《十万个为什么》是我终身的益友!
要发语文测试卷了,我心里既高兴又紧张,很矛盾的。听说我考了九十六分,可又怕他们说的是假的。
发试卷了,教室里的每一个人心情随着分数而高低起伏,有的一脸沮丧,头埋的低低的,有的则洋溢着成功的喜悦。
“曾柏然,97·5分!”“哦!”教室里一片惊叹。曾柏然满脸笑容的拿到试卷,微缩着身子,走着碎小是步子回到座位,这样迎来了全班他们的一片笑声。
冷玉林看起来似乎悲伤至极。“死得惨哦”“看来不怎么样。”同学们小声议论,“回去有笋子炒肉吃了”
拿到试卷的人有的伸长脖子到处问“你考了多少分?”有的带着讽刺的语调夸人家“你考得好好哦!”还有的后悔的说:“早知道就不该改答案呀”。
解小雨气得把试卷揉成一团,觉得不妥,又打开,这时试卷就像焉菜一样。
用不同的态度对待就会有不同的收获,人生也一样吧!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
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