我曾经看到过这样一则公益广告,令我印象深刻:一个盲人正顺着盲道走着,但是前面的地上却躺着块香蕉皮,眼看着他就要踩到了,这时一个青年男子过来捡起了香蕉皮并丢进了垃圾桶里;一群孩子们正在开开心心的溜冰,但是他们谁也没注意到前方有口未盖好盖子的窨井,这时有位阿姨急匆匆的.跑来为他们把盖子盖好,没过多久,那群孩子们就安全的从井上滑过去了。 看了这则广告后,我想如果没有那两位叔叔阿姨的及时帮助,那将会产生多么糟糕的画面啊!
我们的社会在发展,我们应该人人讲文明,老师也经常教导我们,要从小养成文明的习惯,做个文明好学生。但是联想我自己,我却有些不文明的行为,我感到很惭愧。每天上学,都是妈妈开车送我去学校的,我偶尔会带盒牛奶在车上喝。喝完后我会不经意的把牛奶盒扔到车窗外。现在想想,我这一举动是多么的不好啊,如果人人都象我这样乱扔垃圾,不仅弄脏了马路,而且还给环卫工人带来很大的工作压力。这样,文明城市就给我们破坏了。于是我决定改正这个不好的习惯,做个文明人。
在我们身边还有许多不文明的行为:我们小区的大门口,有个漂亮的喷水池,池水清澈见底。每当夏天的夜晚,大人们和小孩们都会聚集在水池边纳凉、聊天、嬉戏。但是有一天我却发现了水池里的水已经变得肮脏了,水面上飘浮着塑料袋、矿泉水瓶、吸管等一些垃圾。原来都是居民们随手扔的。后来我看到一个保安拿着一个长长的网把垃圾一个一个都捞上来了,水池又变得干净了。于是我就告诉邻居的小朋友不要再往水池里扔垃圾了,我们要爱护小区的环境,做个文明的好孩子。我也要向大人们发出呼吁:你们是孩子们的榜样,你们应该要比他们做得更好。
为了我们的城市变得更美,我们每个人应该从小事做起,改掉不文明的行为,一同创建文明城市。从现在做起,从小事做起。要发扬主人翁意识,从文明出行、遵守交通秩序等小事做起,为畅通我市的文明交通工程,建设有序、安全、畅通、文明的交通秩序贡献自己的力量。
现在社会不断进步,人们的文化水平在不断的提高。但是,仍有许多不文明现象在我们身边发生。比如:随地吐痰,乱踩踏草坪呀,随地扔垃圾,随地大小便,都会影响我们城市的环境和美观。
现在,我们许昌正在争创全国文明城市,我们作为许昌市的一员,有义务为许昌市的荣誉而尽自己的一份力量。我们要从自身开始,不做不文明的事,看到他人做了不文明的,有损许昌市的环境和美观的事,要勇于劝说,善于劝说。为了做到文明我建议大家做到三管六不:
一、管好自己的嘴。不随地吐痰,不讲粗话脏话,不在公共场所吸烟。
二、管好自己的手。不乱扔乱倒垃圾,不乱泼乱倒污水,不乱贴乱画乱摆,不损害公共设施。
三、管好自己的腿。不乱穿马路闯红灯,不践踏花木草地。
创建文明城市的工作进展得如火如荼,我们每个人也要行动起来,为许昌市争创卫生城市出一份力。
让我们行动起来吧!
“文明城市”称号为城市赢得了更多人的肯定,有了更多的机会去发展经济,有了更好的形象去面对全世界。城市建设力度增强,教育水平也在不断升高。就拿一所高中学校来说,“文明城市”对它的影响十分巨大。临沂三中作为临沂一所高中老校,在育人方面已经很成熟,校园环境也十分优美,经过“文明城市”的创建,把校园五大常规要求落实地更彻底——干干净净、整整齐齐、安安静静、板板正正、平平安安;严格遵从“为学生提供最优质的教育服务”的办学宗旨,施行从细、从严、致高、致远的管理理念,将文明城的创建推向了一个新的风口浪尖。临沂三中被山东省评为“省级规范化学校”、“临沂市先进单位”等一系列荣誉称号。临沂三中的校徽采用对比鲜明的红色和蓝色,象征着热情和智慧。蓝色图案形如纷飞的鸽子,自由奔放;又如奔腾的海浪,生生不息;又似一只张开的手,托起冉冉升起的太阳,象征着发展中的临沂三中必将红红火火,蒸蒸日上,就像发展中的“文明城市”——临沂,也必将红红火火,蒸蒸日上。
“文明城”的创建使我们每个人感受到城市的.热情,城市的无限魅力,让每个人生活在文明和谐、积极向上的环境中,沐浴最灿烂的、最温暖的阳光。着便需要我们每一个人齐心协力,努力拼搏来完成。
其实,我们不需要做多伟大的事,只要从身边小事做起,从自己做起。随手捡起一片废纸就可以为创城做贡献;随手关掉一盏费电的灯,就可以为创城出一份力;只要一件很小的事就可以显示你品行的高尚,体现你道德的规范,同时体现的是城市的整体素质。让我们携起手来,为创城添光添彩,为创城团结力量。
文明城市的创建需要文明的教育,文明的经济,文明的卫生,更需要文明的我们。让我们一起“创文明城,做文明人”!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
深圳是我最喜欢的城市。她年轻富有活力。我在这里居住了10年。我爱这座城市的海鲜和美丽的风景。夏天来的时候,我可以去海边看日出,或者去享受冰爽的海水。在周末的时候,去公园散散步。深圳是我的家。等我长大了,我要为这所城市作出贡献,让她变得更好。
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