to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
大家好,我是一只麻雀,我每天都穿梭在人类的世界里,他们说人类是这世上最聪明的物种,可在我眼里,他们简直愚蠢之极。
你看那山坡上,那寸草不生的土地没有一点绿草红花的点缀显得那么荒凉,一切的源头都是那上坡顶上的化工厂。你看它烟囱飘出来的浓浓黑烟。破坏着地球的臭氧层衣服。我向化工厂飞去。看到的一只同类,我飞了过去。只见它奄奄一息的对我说”快走,这烟有毒“我看着它,依依不舍的飞向远处。我相信那些愚蠢的人类会受到惩罚的。我用恨恨的眼光审视着那化工厂。可惜我只是一只麻雀,力量微小。
几个月过去了,化工厂依然运行着,但是人类却已经为他们的所做所为付出了代价。你看那都市里的雾霾。是地球觉得人类已经迷失了么?然后放出雾霾提醒人们么?
所幸,人们已经知道错误,有不少人都在保护环境。但是泼出去的水还装的会来么?人类只能为自己的行为付出代价了,如果人类还不知悔改,那么地球灭亡之日也是人类灭亡之时。
人类该有所反思,行动起来,让环境变回从前的模样。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
美丽中国,众所期待。党的十八大提出建设美丽中国,为生态建设、环境保护确立了新的目标。如果中华大地被雾霾笼罩,如何看见她的美丽?”当“美丽中国”迅速成为高频词之时,曾有网友如此发问:“雾霾笼罩,是危机,亦蕴藏转机!”党的十八大把生态文明建设与经济建设、政治建设、文化建设、社会建设并列,作为建设中国特色社会主义的总任务。一场覆盖百万平方公里的雾霾,更使生态文明建设的重要性、迫切性前所未有地突显出来。
坚持环保为民,应对雾霾带动深层次污染防治。
面对大范围雾霾天气,多部门紧急行动起来,首先将灾害天气对公众的影响降至最低。1月28日,中央气象台历史上第一次专门针对霾发布了预警;环境保护部及时发布部分城市大气环境质量状况,要求各地做好监测预警工作。
对于憧憬美丽中国的人们来说,雾霾是当头一棒,更是一记警钟,公众需要透明的数据,更需要一个澄澈的天空。建立长效机制、全力做好污染物减排,我们还需付出更多努力。2月6日,国务院常务会议确定实施“国四”柴油、“国五”汽、柴油标准的时间表,解决长期难以突破的车油不配问题看到了曙光。不仅如此,各地正在积极行动起来,以唤回蓝天为突破口,加紧推进大范围、深层次的污染防治。
推进绿色转型,改变生活和生产方式刻不容缓。
无论在哪里过年,今年春节人们普遍感觉鞭炮声少了。民间的“禁鞭”活动,折射出全社会的环保意识正从抱怨污染走向自觉践行低碳、环保的生活方式。从我做起,从现在做起,从点滴小事做起,这些意识和行动是建设美丽中国最最需要的。
建设美丽中国,还有更大的拦路虎。除了环境污染严重,资源约束趋紧、生态系统退化的`形势也很严峻。2011年,我国GDP占全球的10.48%,却消耗了世界60%的水泥、49%的钢铁和20.3%的能源。加快转变经济发展方式,优化产业布局,大力推进绿色发展、循环发展、低碳发展,必须只争朝夕。
实现永续发展,在发展中保护,在保护中发展。
美丽中国什么样?山清水秀但贫穷落后不行,殷实小康但环境退化也不行。
我国是世界上最大的发展中国家,推动经济社会发展始终是第一要务。我们用几十年发展走过发达国家一两百年的工业化之路,也同时积累了人家一两百年遇到的环境问题,解决这些问题不是要停下发展的脚步,而是要通过转型解决发展中的问题。建设美丽中国,必须坚持在发展中保护,在保护中发展,发展与保护并重。
建设既富强又美丽的中国,不仅要增加GDP,也要提高人民生活质量,这就要有清新的空气、清洁的水、茂密的森林、广袤的草原。虽然实现这一目标还有很长的路要走,但是,只要我们沿着十八大指明的方向踏实迈进,就一定能早日驱散雾霾,迎来生态文明的美丽中国。
Recently, the topic of air pollution has again aroused more and more attention since pollution haze, a kind of weather, has appeared increasing frequently in our cities. Just as the picture showed, when pollution haze comes, the whole city was covered with suspended particles which can breath into our body causing heavy problem to our health.
Due to the bad effect from pollution haze, a green and clear environment, rather than anything else, turns to be an important role and a urgent issue in our daily lives. Meanwhile we just live in only an earth, if we didn’t try to protect our common hometown, we would have no place to settle.
Thus, we should take effective measures to rebuild our beautiful environment of the cities from now on.
In my opinion, law and regulations should be enforced by the government and authorities to control the emission of polluting gas. To ourselves, we should enhance the awareness of environment protection and choose a green lifestyle to make contribution to our earth day from day.
一出门,我就看见漫天大雾,周围五米内都是像蒙着面纱的`建筑物,一切都树立在朦胧的雾中,像仙境,好有诗意。但您说雾霾天气引发呼吸道疾病,叫我戴上口罩。哇好像我还不太了解“雾霾”这两个字了吧!
我上网查了一下。雾霾天气是心血管疾病患者的健康***手尤其是有呼吸道疾病和心血管疾病的老人,雾天最好不出门,更不宜晨练,否则可能诱发病情,甚至心脏病发作,引起生命危险。
雾霾天气遇到冬季寒流,导致本市各大医院门急诊患者中,呼吸道感染的患者比例同比明显上升。据北京市儿童医院统计,1月5日至11日,北京儿童医院日门急诊量最高峰曾达到9000多人次,呼吸道感染占到内科病人的50%左右。
雾霾是雾中悬浮着大量的烟、灰尘等微粒而形成的混浊现象。据环保部遥感卫星监测:1月29日中国范围内有130万平方公里的地区被雾霾笼罩,空气质量严重污染。
很多家庭都拥有小汽车,我们的出行更便捷了,但汽车的尾气排放污染空气;电厂、炼油厂、化工厂在我们的城市里“大显身手”,但夜以继日地不断排放出煤烟和灰尘;绚丽的烟花爆竹让人目不暇接,但空气中烟雾腾腾,变得非常混浊,空气质量急剧下降,PM2。5、PM10指数直线上升,这些都是造成雾霾的主要原因,它们在带给我们快捷方便、赏心悦目的同时,也悄悄给我们带来了意想不到的后果。
雾霾的天气,我们呼吸的是混浊的气体。空气中的霾会引起肺炎、咽喉炎、气管炎、心脏衰落等疾病。1952年,英国伦敦的那场大雾似无形的***手,在短短五天内就夺取了4000人的生命,在之后两个月内有夺去了8000人的生命,可见大雾的威力,也该给我们敲响了警钟。
我们要的是清新的空气,要的是健康的体魄。请不要以牺牲健康为代价,而换来所谓的美好生活。少开车,绿色出行,多种树,保护森林。治霾,从我做起。
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