作文范文社会类叙事

作文范文社会类叙事

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作文范文社会类叙事

作文范文社会类叙事【一】

大家好我是一棵原本在森林里生活的自由自在,无优无虑的小树。我发表这篇文章就是为了呼吁社会:不要在乱砍乱伐了。我们的家园曾经是温暖的。原先的家园是这样的。

公鸡哥哥首先醒来。喔喔喔,大家起床了;鸟儿也起床了,它开始啼啭它那悦耳的嗓子;花儿也绽放它那娇媚的容颜,微风轻轻拂过令花儿频频点头好像迎宾小姐朝客人点头。在森林里没有硝烟有的只有祥和,没有尔虞我诈,大家都有一个纯洁的心。鸟儿在大树上安家,蝴蝶和蜜蜂被花儿所吸引在林中所飞舞。知了也在树上安了家,青蛙、蚯蚓、小白兔、蛇……都在这安了家。可没想到我们这快活自在的生活被一天的早晨给打破了。

一群人类来到了我们温暖的家园他们拿着斧头开始砍伐树木,捕捉小动物。令我们的家园变成了一片充满死寂的森林,鸟儿、公鸡、蜜蜂、蝴蝶、白兔……都被捉走了,有的也不愿在这安家了。没想到灾难并没有就此结束,他们在森林上方建了个垃圾场他们把所有的垃圾都往森林里丢污水向森林里袭卷而来,从此我的家园臭气熏天。

不过人类也因此得到了报应,泥石流来了他们没有我们森林的阻挡畅通无阻的冲垮了人类的家园。

如果你们不想被泥石流冲垮家园就请你们好好爱护森林,多种植树木把!

作文范文社会类叙事【二】

外婆买了好多柱香去拜佛祖,说佛祖会让我们的学业“芝麻开花——节节高”。我们大家都找外婆要了香,但我是“醉翁之意不在酒”,把外婆给的香拿去放鞭炮,附近的一棵大树下,有三两只蚯蚓在那里游手好闲。于是我就让这几只蚯蚓吃吃我的“轰天雷”。我趁一只小蚯蚓正在小憩,就把“轰天雷”塞到这小家伙身下。“轰”的一声,炮仗炸开了花,我上前一看这小蚯蚓竟然能大难不死。好,有毅力,我再让你小子吃一下两颗“混龙炮”的威力,看你怎么吃得消。

又是“轰轰”两声,“混龙炮”炸出了巨响,“两拳难敌四手”,毕竟也是一只乳臭未***小蚯蚓,怎么受的住三颗炮仗的威力,小蚯蚓被我炸的面目全非。哎呀,这下糟了,我看到小表弟把外婆拉来,嘴还咿呀的说着。外婆指着我说:“我给你几柱香是让你拜佛,你倒好,非但没拜佛,还借助它在佛门圣地伤害有益的小动物,气死我了!”小表弟跌跌撞撞的走过来,朝我背上拍了一掌,然后就跑开了。最后是“司马昭之心——路人皆知。”

作文范文社会类叙事【三】

在当今社会,许多人误认为“社会已经没有爱了”。其实不然,在这个被众人贴上“冷酷无情”标签的社会里,其实到处充满爱,它正如一股暖流,在不经意间淌入人们的心底,滋润人们干涸的心灵。

在一个寒冷的冬夜,我下课回家独自走在漆黑的小道上,伸手不见五指,树叶被风吹得沙沙作响令我毛骨悚然,但就在这突然间,一个磕绊,我重重地摔倒在地上,手脚都擦破了皮,正当万分痛苦、不知所措的时候,有一位好心老奶奶将我扶起,给予我无微不至的关怀,最后她还为我亮起手电筒,点亮了我回家的路,陪我走出这段阴森小道,那是一份来自陌生人的关爱,一股暖流悄然涌上心头,之前的恐惧害怕一下子荡然无存。

记得有一次在图书馆里,几个淘气的小朋友在阅读后,将书籍随意摆放,弄得满地乱七八糟,让人无法落脚,寸步难行。这时,只见一位读者,默默地将那些书一本一本的捡起来,又蹲下又起来,如此反复,最后将那些书籍全部放回原位,我瞥见她不停地用衣袖拭去头上的汗水,但她的脸上依然洋溢着灿烂的微笑,不抱怨不嫌弃,默默无闻地做着也许与她无关的事情。作为旁观者,我深深地被这一幕无声的爱所打动,她这种“赠人玫瑰,手留余香”的举动涤荡了我的心灵,让我心中的敬意久久挥之不去。

后来我壮着胆子去问她:“那些书和你无关,你完全可以视而不见,为什么你愿意牺牲自己那么多宝贵的学习时间去收拾整理那些书呢?”她平静回答道:“因为我仅仅是为了大家能在阅读时候有一个干净舒适的环境,若是到处乱糟糟的,估计大家都难以忍受,我只是为了给大家一个方便而已”。

“给大家一个方便”,这句平实朴素的话语一下子揪住了我的心,加上她刚才一起一蹲的动作和瘦小的身影,我已深深地被打动,同时我也深深的意识到,这个社会并不是“冷酷无情”的,它应该换个标签,“爱心洋溢”也许才对。

原来社会充满了爱。我们更多的人应该像那位老奶奶和姐姐一样,毫无吝啬地献出自己的爱,哪怕是一个小小的善举,都会让这个社会处处充满爱,让这个社会更加祥和美好。

作文范文社会类叙事【四】

【习作题目】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

1.学生给老师打分已很普遍;

2.人们对其持不同态度(肯定或否定的态度);

3.你的看法。

【习作解读】

显然,此任务是写一篇议论文,主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论,开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况,从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活,但有一定的语言难度,也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作,也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下,也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。

此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙,写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时,也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思,学会换位思考,这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。

【习作展示】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.

If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.

In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.

【习作点评】

作者观点明确,赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师,就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样,不仅对学生、学校有利,而且对老师本人也有利。这样,老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己,看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可,这将是对自己的一次鼓励,为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高,老师就应进行反思,调控教学方法和教学态度。这样,教学质量肯定会提高。作

者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据,内容充实,贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用,是短文结构清晰,层次分明。最后,最值得一提的是,文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式,给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述,这是一篇不可多得的佳作,值得向大家推荐。

二、写作模板

此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下:

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ;Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people 

Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.

There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.

Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.

三、写作指导

写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象,然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响,最后提出解决问题的办法,或者得出结论,或者提出个人看法,或者预测前景。

论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张,论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据;论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说,议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多,但最常用的是因果分析法。即:分析事实与论点的因果关系,指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点,从而达到论证的目的。

在近几年的高考中,议论文的比重占得越来越多,议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样,有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型,但文体实际是议论文,而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是:

1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。

2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,不同层次之间要分明,过渡清晰自然。

3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。

4. 一般采用一般现在时。

5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。

四、巩固练习

1.【练习题目】

2010年上海世界博览会期间,上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作,请你谈谈对此现象的看法。

【参考范文】

During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.

It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.

Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.

In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?

2.【练习题目】

某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文,列举吸烟的危害,并提出建议。

【参考范文】

I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.

First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.

Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.

What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.

So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.

3. 【练习题目】近年来,越来越多的中学生出国学习,出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。

1)良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。

2)拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。

3)传播各民族间的不同文化。

参考词汇:媒介,中间人:mediator

【参考范文】

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.

There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad.First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods.Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.

Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.

4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展,道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解,谈谈自己的观点。

【参考范文】

With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.

I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.

In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.

作文范文社会类叙事【五】

已是元旦,寒风瑟瑟,冬天的空气清冽,风有点大。

在家长陪同下,我们到永宁福利院看望孤儿,精彩的表演后,我把精心挑选的书及蛋糕送给他们,希望他们今后的生活就像这块五彩缤纷的蛋糕一样鲜艳。我们把包水饺的材料拿到餐厅里,一起包着,有的像小蛇,有的像笑脸,还有像信封。放进盘子里,想到这一个个饺子是和着我们的爱心和希望,我更加小心翼翼。

接着,我们带着春联来到二楼看望一些行动不便的孤儿,房间里静悄悄的,没有一丝阳光,我蹑手蹑脚地走进去,生怕带出一丝声音会惊动他们,一张窄小的床上躺着个白净的小孩,眼睛半眯着,我伸出食指碰了碰他的小手,他居然抓着我的手不放,身体奋力地想向左翻,似乎想跟我走,我不禁一阵心酸,站在床边一直摸着他的手,这时一个叔叔走进来说:“这个孩子是从医院里带回来的,患严重的脑瘫加心脏病,不能抱出去晒太阳,怕随时会被细菌感染,生命有危险。”“哦,原来是没有晒太阳才显得肤色白,那为什么得脑瘫呢?”“是因为生出来的时侯缺氧,出现大面积的脑死亡。”“那他几岁呢?”“嗯—大约8岁吧。”“看起来只有一两岁啊!”我吃惊极了。我对他们更加怜爱,就把春联送给照顾他们的婆婆,“婆婆,感谢您对这些孤儿的无私照顾!”我握着婆婆的手说道。“不,应该感谢政府的政策,感谢你们对这些孩子的关爱,这比什么都重要!”婆婆和蔼地笑道。

我们在福利院度过了一个难忘的元旦,围在孤儿们的身边一片欢声笑语,热闹极了,温暖极了!在热闹的人群外,我突然看见有一个孤儿正在旁边津津有味地捧着书看,似乎沉浸在书的世界里,这是多么美好的一幕啊!在我们走出福利院时,又有一批大哥哥大姐姐们说说笑笑走了进来,听说,每周自愿到福利院陪小朋友做游戏是他们自发起的必修功课。社会在前进,行善做志愿成了社会的新时尚!

风刮得越发越猛烈了,望着夕阳下的“婷婷福利院”几个大字,我却觉得寒冬不冷!春天到了,我还会来这里的,因为我也在冬天埋下了行善的种子!

作文范文社会类叙事【六】

每次回家,会看到一面墙上记录着我几岁时的身高,望着它们,似乎它向我诉说着我的成长。一个小孩,一阵小跑到墙前,吵着让爸爸为我在墙上作下记号,再对着那根横线感叹道:“我又长高了!”

记得刚出生时,一张泛黄的照片见证我的快乐:一个胖乎乎的小孩,用稚嫩双手拎起所谓“沉重”的纸袋子,尽管小脸涨得通红,不过脸上仍挂着成功的喜悦。当然,拎东西,对于走都走不稳的我,无非是一个挑战,而如今的困难解决了,能不为自已的成功而欣喜吗?所以成功对于一两岁的我,代表着拎起袋子。当然随着成长,我也不满足于拎袋子,为考研的爸爸在夏季拿西瓜,也成了我的必修课。

到了五六岁的时候,一个“庞然大物”来到了我家,把我吓得满屋子打转儿,但又经不住好奇的心情,便走到它的面前,踮起小脚儿,用小手按住个长方形的白色键,一个清脆而响亮地响声灌进我的耳朵,把我吓了一跳,于是,电子琴走进了我的童年。初次课,只教了“do“,兴奋的我,按着那键,摇着头,扭起身子,有模有样的自弹自唱,一副小音乐家的`样子出现在琴前。对于七、八岁的我,我似乎又体会到一两岁拎起纸袋的成功的喜悦,也许是电子琴给我的启迪,使我童年的生活多了音符,少了枯燥。

在一次丰盛的生日会上,美丽的大蛋糕印着硕大的十字时,我有些恍然大悟:我已经走过了十个春秋了,十年了,为了感谢父母对我的培养,我该有一些改变吧!时光如流水,从爱看《猫和老鼠》到迷上罗纳尔多,从玩过家家,捉迷藏到会上网看新闻,做电子贺卡……我把成功与失败都镌刻进生命,我要在狂风时做卷起的浪,平静时做闪亮的波,绿色时做亮丽的花,金色时做迎风的果。向世人展示——我成长,我快乐!

成长的快乐,是咖啡那深厚的韵味。

成长的快乐,是果冻那宜人的滑润。

成长的快乐,是海洋那舒畅的广阔。

成长的快乐,是绿洲那勃勃的生机。

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