1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
导入:
第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。
难得的一次参观污水处理厂的机会,突然降临在了我们班。这不,今天下午,我们就要驱车前往第一污水处理厂参观啦!
一路上,同学们欢声笑语。我激动不己的心也久久不能平静。
不一会儿,几个硕大的装满水的池子渐渐映入了我的眼帘。红白相间的大楼整齐划一,“淮南市第一污水处理厂”几个大字在阳光的照耀下格外显眼。我们下了车,整齐地排好队开始参观。水厂工作人员王老师做我们的向导。
在王老师的.带领下,我们来到了沉砂池。突然,一股恶臭扑鼻袭来,同学们紧锁眉头,掩住鼻子。经王老师介绍,我们知道了沉砂池是还未处理的污水经过的第一道工序,它的作用不可低估,是去除污水内所携带的砂、石与其它的大块物体,防止造成设施淤砂,影响设备正常运转。哦,原来是这么回事,我开始了解一些眉目了。
细格栅到了。这是比较重要的一个环节,也是最脏的一个地方。污泥飘满了整个水池,隐约还能看见一些恶心的藻类。牙刷、瓶盖之类的东西在这里通过截流,排出在工序之外,以保护后续水泵管线正常运行。
紧接着,王老师带领我们登上了阶梯,参观氧化沟。它是污水处理中的重中之重。我站在阶梯上眺望,就数它的场子最大,几条水道交替相连,污水正滔滔不绝地涌来。听了王老师的讲解,我明白了它的主要作用是通过活性污泥中的好氧菌,慢慢地把污水中的大部分污染物当作美味一点一点地吸收,从而达到分解的目的。我高高踮起脚仔细地听王老师讲解:“氧化沟处理后的水源源不断流入了终沉池,在那儿得到彻底地净化处理。”
说到了终沉池,大家三步两步地冲了上去,叽叽喳喳地说个不停,把池子围了个水泄不通。这里的水清澈见底,让人恨不得想上去喝上几口。可是,听了王老师的介绍,那几个跃跃欲试的同学立刻变乖了,因为那只是活性污泥沉在池底,并通过管道及各种手段使污泥和水分解,水是水泥是泥,然后它们就各奔东西了,所以根本没得到彻底净化,当然也就不能饮用。经过了这四道工序,污水处理差不多快结束了,我们又参观了水经过的污泥缓冲池,经过中水监测室的监测就成为实实在在的“中水”了。中水源源不断地流入淮河,使淮河变得更加清澈、洁净,造福子孙后代。
短暂的参观就要结束了,我真有些依依不舍呢。再次回望这令我深思、感叹的地方,我深深感到今天的科学技术正在日益进步,在为我们造福。我相信,不久的将来,我们的城市一定会更加洁净繁荣。
今天,风和日丽,我们小记者来到了钱江污水处理厂。
一进门,一朵朵杜鹃迎面开放,散发着扑鼻的清香,一排排大树唱起歌曲,好像在迎接我们的到来。
随着蜿蜒的小道,首先我们来到了监控室,那里的监控大大小小,琳琅满目。老师告诉我们,污水处理广有266亩,而这里的污水来自每家每户的下水道,而这些污水,来到这里,首先进入的是粗细隔删,把肉眼能看到的小东西挑出来,接下来是沉沙池,沉沙池让泥去了泥的地方,水去了水的地方,之后便到了二沉池,二沉池就是检查水中是否还有泥沙或垃圾。最后消毒变成了干净的自来水了。
老师带我们去参观了好氧池,一进入,一股溪水的气味扑鼻而来,那水十分浑浊,看不到一丝的干净,有时还发来一阵阵恶心的臭味,我心想:如此浑浊的水要变成干净的水,那可真是个大工程啊。
时间过的很快,一下子就流失了,我们又乘着车回去了。
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
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