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雅思真题小作文类型归纳【一】

此类例子往往缺乏客观性和说服力，由于第一人称的局限导致所叙述事件难免“鸡毛蒜皮”。要明白，个人不代表整体。

例：I keep my dog to avoid my loneliness and I find a lot of fun.

这样的例子让人犹如在看记叙文，和议论文很不搭调。

雅思真题小作文类型归纳【二】

虽然来源于身边社会，但不可让描述方式变的太鸡毛蒜皮，拿不上台面。其实这点非常容易办到，只需要把事件中某一个具体的你，我，他，变成是客观群体，比如说people across the globe, students, they之类的人称即可。

举例的常见表达方式：

for example,/for instance,（后加句子）

Such as/ like （后加词组）

Take... as an example,

A case in point is that......

其次，在举例时还应注意尺度。

1. 应避免使用第一人称和第二人称，为了加强客观性，应将人称写成第三人称。

改正：Those people who raise pets, such as dogs and cats, are more likely to gain happiness and relieve their loneliness.（那些养宠物，例如养猫和养狗的人往往更容易获得快乐并且缓解孤独感）

2. 应避免引用一项调查研究，并同时伴有过多数据。应将数据去掉，用含糊的方法表示。

改正：There is much evidence to show that the number of people smoking has increased at an alarming rate in China. （大量证据表明。。。）

3. 应避免将例子局限在一个国家，尤其是中国。应将范围放至全世界。

改正：Many children around the world like to sit in front of the screen for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.（在全世界，许多孩子在屏幕前待太久，导致了他们的视力减弱。

“全世界”的表达方式：around the world, all over the world, across the globe

【写作真题】The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it necessary, because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

【名师献计】This aid is essential to the homeless and useful in helping recipient countries return to their normal state after major disturbances. For example, with the humanitarian relief obtained worldwide on an annual basis, victims of natural disasters (such as tsunami, drought, flood throughout the world can recover rapidly and rebuild their homeland.

雅思真题小作文类型归纳【三】

前两天，妈妈从市场上买回来一只小乌龟，我高兴极了。

小乌龟的样子十分可爱。它的背上有一个坚硬的壳，壳被几条细细的纹路分割成一块块有规则的六角形，壳的颜色呈铝灰色，中间还夹杂一点绿色。它的肚皮是金黄色的，通过肚皮的颜色我猜测它应该出生时间不长。小乌龟长着一个三角形的脑袋和一条短短的尾巴，四只脚上长着尖尖的脚趾。小乌龟的脑袋上长着两只圆鼓鼓的眼睛，前端有两个孔状的东西突出来，你一定以为那是小乌龟的嘴巴吧，错了，那是小乌龟的鼻子，藏在下面的才是小乌龟的嘴巴呢。小乌龟有时把头伸得很长，好像很威武的样子，但一遇到危险，就会迅速把头缩到硬壳下面，还真用上那个词——“缩头乌龟”。

小乌龟的饮食十分有趣。每次我都喂一些虫子给它吃，它一看见虫子就会迅速游过来，张开大口，一下子把虫子吞了进去。但小乌龟也比较挑剔，它一般都是吃活的虫子，死虫子是不屑一顾的。

小乌龟比较讲究卫生。每天我都要给它换一次清水。如果盆里有食物残渣或者它的排泄物，它就会爬在盆里一动不动，就是你给他食物它也不一定会吃。但如果你给它换上清水，它马上就像换了个人似的，在盆里爬来爬去，好不快活。

小乌龟，你可爱、调皮，你给我们全家带来了欢乐，我非常喜欢你！

雅思真题小作文类型归纳【四】

这类考生往往缺乏刨根究底的精神，总是在主旨周围绕圈子，不达中心。这也是中国考生的通病，看似八九不离十，却总也不愿把话点破，让考官怎能不又急又气。

在所有的扩展方式之中，因果推理法是最受用也是最透彻的方法。凡事先追溯到其原由，再扩展其结果，这是将主题阐述清晰、论述有力并且具有逻辑感的最佳手段。例如在“出国留学利弊”这一题目之前，若考生单纯说“有可能会使青少年学坏”，难免缺乏说服力，但若紧接着扩展“因为孩子高中毕业后思想上还不成熟，若认识不好的朋友会难以抵抗社会上不好的诱惑”，那么此论点一定会让考官眉头舒展，点头认同。由此可见，善用此推理法会让议论文如虎添翼，事半功倍。

引出原因的表达方式主要有：Because../Since.../As....

引出结果的表达方式主要有：so.../Therefore,.../Consequently,.../Accordingly,... /As a result,.../In this way,.../result in.../Thanks to.../Due to.../ Owing to..

【写作真题】Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or ate out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss.

【名师献计】It is important to note that imports are now increasingly affordable to the general population. Thanks to the rapid development of the freight transport industry, air travel has become an economical mode of transport, resulting in the subsequent decrease in the cost of importing. Meanwhile, technical advance in the food processing industry has made it much easier to preserve fresh fruits and vegetables over a long-haul air flight. Because of the wide availability of imported crops, there are more varieties...