每天发生在我们身边的事,并不总是愉快的,有的就像满天的乌云,虽然太阳一来会消失得无影无踪,可是有一天它还会再次出现,使人心情不适。前不久,就曾经有一片乌云不停地在我身边环绕。
那是一个星期六的下午,我的朋友找我来写作业,我便和他一同在我的卧室晨写起了作业。
“快点,快点,改正带借我一下。”“你干什么呢?都三次了,你浪费呀!”我便侧过头去看了他的本子一眼,有一道答题纸上已经盖上了白被子,他不好意思地一笑,皱着眉头说“怎么想不出来呢?对了,这道题你做出来了吗?”嗯。我回答了一声。
在我刚要给他本子的一刹那,我又转念一想:不行,这是我好不容易才想出来的,这么告诉他我就亏大了。于是,我马上捂上了作业本,随即说了一句,我也不会,还没做呢。他看了我一眼,没说什么只是对我说了一句“我们接着一起想吧”便又埋下了头。
“想出来了,想出来了!”第二天上午,他兴高采烈地、气喘吁吁地跑到我家,我刚一开门,他就兴奋地说:“我想出来了,我真的想出来了。”我一边拉他进了我的卧室,连忙问:“什么东西你想出来了?”他连忙摇着我说:“昨天那道题呀!”我漫不经心地说了一句:“我早就想出……”顿时,我感到事情不妙,一不小心说走了嘴。
我低下了头,为自己当初的行为所羞愧,当我抬起头时,他却没有责备我的意思,而是笑着说:“原来你想出来了,那太好了。那你懂了吗?没懂的话我给你讲讲。”我马上点了点头,他便指着那图形讲了起来,我便在一旁听着他讲那道我已经懂了的题,经他一讲,我更加明白了。
现在,这朵充满悔恨的乌云已经渐渐散开,乌云后面的太阳,也像一块闪闪发光的金子,吸引着我,让我不断地向着他努力,向他奋斗
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
发生在我的这个新班级的有许多事,可留在我脑海里的最深处的一件事是姚其昌那天拿火钳子夹垃圾的事,让我给你讲讲吧。
记得那是一个阳光明媚的上午,老师在上课的时候说后面的玻璃下都是垃圾,夏天会生虫子的,有谁能把它夹上来。这时,同学们脸上都挂满了欣喜若狂的表情,都在说我拿夹子夹,我拿跳绳钩等等。可到了第二天没有一个人拿东西来夹垃圾。等到第三天,还是没有人拿东西夹,这时,我仿佛看到了老师不耐烦的一面,可老师还是缩了回去,心情糟透了。到了第四天的时候终于有人拿火钳子来了,这个人就是姚其昌。他三下五下的用了一天的时间把我垃圾夹完了,这时,老师脸上又充满了活跃感。老师还在班会上表扬了他,这时我顿时心酸了,心里想我怎么没有拿呢?
这篇文章让我知道了自己有快乐要和别人分享,不能做自私的人,这就叫“有福同享,有难同当”。
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
一次,我和妈妈在路边闲逛,忽然吹过来一阵秋风,冻得我直打哆嗦,好象这些风都钻到了脖子里。
这时,妈妈对我说:“晚上给您做炖菜,现在我们去菜市场买菜。”说着,拉起我的手就走,我可还没答应呢,唉……
来到菜市场口,我看到一个小女孩在路边大声吆喝:“白菜,新鲜的白菜。”我和妈妈被她的喊声吸引过去。我发现这是一个八九岁的女孩,她的脸冻得通红,手被冻出了一道道裂纹,耳朵冻得红红的,身上穿得也很单薄。
妈妈开始挑白菜,那个小女孩开心地说:“阿姨,您要几棵白菜呀?我们这都是好白菜,没有烂叶子的。”还真是的,这些白菜都挺新鲜的。由于拿不了那么多,妈妈挑了一棵大白菜,小姑娘称了称,一共2。5元,妈妈给钱时,在2。5元中多加了一张5元的钞票,小姑娘仔细清点后,把那5元钱又还给了妈妈。看到这儿,我不禁感动了,因为像有些商贩,客户多给一元钱也不说,而是心安理得的装进自己的`腰包,好象没有这回事。比起这些商贩来,小女孩要高尚地多。
今天,我学到了小女孩的高尚品质,那就是不能不劳而获。
近期在我身边发生的事真可以说是惊天地,泣鬼神呀!
前天江老师说:“我们班的顾浩然同学放在铅笔盒里的20元钱突然不见了,如果有谁找到请还给他,还有一件事,我们班的陈子豪同学的铅笔盒不翼而飞,铅笔盒里还有要交给英语老师的10元钱,如果大家看见了这两样东西,请物归原主。”听见江老师讲这件事我也想起了一件丢钱案件,当天中午我在学校吃饭,我把钱包放在了书包的夹层里,等我和姚语琳吃完饭后在教室外面玩了一会,那时班上已经来了几个同学,等我回教室的时候放在钱包里的5元钱就不见了,我想起这事我就气,到底是谁***呢?
前天下午的环保课因为没有书,所以没上课,然后同学们就在教室里“大闹天宫”。盛俊然本来坐在自己的位子上吹气球,后来不知道怎么回事盛俊然就坐到夏宇坤旁边了,在那打打闹闹,搞得我的桌子一摇一摇的,都没法写作业了,只好坐到徐蕾旁边。
上一篇作文的名字叫:我最喜欢的革命影视作品,我们班的顾浩然写得很好,江老师让他上讲台读,在读之前江老师让他发表一下获奖感言,他说:“我的心情从多云就转晴了。”逗得江老师哈哈大笑,如果让我讲,我会说:“现在我的心情非常的冲动,我的心情从多云就转晴了,这事为什么呢?因为今天阳光明媚,今夜多云转晴,我一定让我的作文水平犹如洪湖水,浪打浪,长江后浪推前浪,一浪更比一浪强,让前浪全部死在沙滩上。
因为近期在我身边发生的是太多了,所以惊天地,泣鬼神。
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