学生修改完英语作文应该怎么办【一】
【以灵山六峰山游记为例】
引导孩子你到六峰山景区玩，在山脚下你看到了什么?有什么感想?——到半山腰时你看到了什么?听到了什么?你做了些什么?——在山顶你有什么感受?你看到了什么呢?
学生修改完英语作文应该怎么办【二】
these young people are wrong. in my opinion every student should have a knowledge of housework. after all, they will have a family of their own, and they should do their part in keeping a good home. boys should also learn to do housework, for what will they do if they remain single? though not all boys remain single, yet they will be very helpful in the family if they know some housework. anyhow they will not lose anything, but, on the contrary, they will gain something useful.
for what i said above, we can find some eamples of our fellow-students studying abroad. all young men do housework as girls do. someone would argue that we can employ servants. this is true. however, what shall we do if the servant leaves us and all things are left to ourselves? we just cannot leave our clothes as they are and let worms and ants eat them up. and what can we do it we go and study in a foreign country where servants are out our means to employ? we must work for ourselves. why not start to learn to do housework now or else it will be too late? everyone should learn to do housework. what do you think about my idea, boys and girls?
学生修改完英语作文应该怎么办【三】
白天的六峰山和夜晚的六峰山有什么不同?它给你的感觉如何呀?
【范例】
夜晚的六峰山灯火璀璨，那些五颜六色的.光让六峰山看起来像个元宝一样。白天的六峰山看起来十分的高大，抬头仰望，那郁郁葱葱的树木给这座山增添了几许生机。
学生修改完英语作文应该怎么办【四】
终于登顶了，此时你的感受是怎样的?累?兴奋?开心?
怎样表现你的感受?大声喊叫?大笑?交流?
向山下眺望你看到了什么?
【范例】
历尽千辛万苦，终于到山顶了，我气喘吁吁地跑到亭子的栏杆边靠着，迫不及待的在这享受高峰之风。一边平息内心的兴奋与激动，一边向下眺望，灵山全景尽收眼底，仿佛我在天上,灵山在地下。我心中的话一吐而出：“会当临绝顶，一览灵山小!”
