真情类作文议论文

真情类作文议论文

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真情类作文议论文

真情类作文议论文【一】

记得那是一个阳光明媚的上午,我正走在回家的路上,一排排摆放整齐的自行车映入我的眼帘。这是,一辆蓝色的自行车突然倒了,一位年轻的\'阿姨走了过来,对我说:“小姑娘,这车是谁的啊?”我想了想,对那位漂亮的阿姨说:“我不知道是谁的,但是,这些自行车都是读三中的哥哥姐姐们的!”

就在这时,一位大哥哥走了过来,对我们说:“我的自行车怎么倒了,是不是你们弄得?”那位漂亮的阿姨甩过她那长长的头发说:“孩子,不是我们弄得,我来帮你把自信车扶起来吧!”说罢,便立刻把哥哥的自行车扶起来。那位哥哥立刻说:“哦,是这样啊,刚刚我误会您了,谢谢!”

在这一刻,阿姨身上仿佛散发出了金色的光芒。让我到了:真情,其实也体现在了许许多多的小事之中“只要人人付出一点爱,世界将会变成美好的人间”这首歌人人都知道,让我们永远都记住这首歌,为人们作出贡献。人间自有真情在,宜将寸心报春晖。世界中有很多真情,只是人们没有用心去体会而已让我们一起去寻找真情,创造真情吧!

真情类作文议论文【二】

【习作题目】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

1.学生给老师打分已很普遍;

2.人们对其持不同态度(肯定或否定的态度);

3.你的看法。

【习作解读】

显然,此任务是写一篇议论文,主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论,开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况,从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活,但有一定的语言难度,也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作,也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下,也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。

此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙,写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时,也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思,学会换位思考,这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。

【习作展示】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.

If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.

In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.

【习作点评】

作者观点明确,赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师,就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样,不仅对学生、学校有利,而且对老师本人也有利。这样,老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己,看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可,这将是对自己的一次鼓励,为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高,老师就应进行反思,调控教学方法和教学态度。这样,教学质量肯定会提高。作

者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据,内容充实,贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用,是短文结构清晰,层次分明。最后,最值得一提的是,文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式,给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述,这是一篇不可多得的佳作,值得向大家推荐。

二、写作模板

此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下:

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ;Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people 

Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.

There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.

Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.

三、写作指导

写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象,然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响,最后提出解决问题的办法,或者得出结论,或者提出个人看法,或者预测前景。

论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张,论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据;论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说,议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多,但最常用的是因果分析法。即:分析事实与论点的因果关系,指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点,从而达到论证的目的。

在近几年的高考中,议论文的比重占得越来越多,议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样,有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型,但文体实际是议论文,而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是:

1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。

2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,不同层次之间要分明,过渡清晰自然。

3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。

4. 一般采用一般现在时。

5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。

四、巩固练习

1.【练习题目】

2010年上海世界博览会期间,上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作,请你谈谈对此现象的看法。

【参考范文】

During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.

It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.

Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.

In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?

2.【练习题目】

某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文,列举吸烟的危害,并提出建议。

【参考范文】

I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.

First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.

Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.

What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.

So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.

3. 【练习题目】近年来,越来越多的中学生出国学习,出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。

1)良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。

2)拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。

3)传播各民族间的不同文化。

参考词汇:媒介,中间人:mediator

【参考范文】

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.

There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad.First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods.Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.

Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.

4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展,道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解,谈谈自己的观点。

【参考范文】

With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.

I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.

In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.

真情类作文议论文【三】

朋友是什么?顾名思义,朋友就是互相帮助,互相关心,一起成就大事。在这个世界上,有了朋友,你才能拥有快乐;有了朋友,你才能塑造一个灿烂的人生......

总之。朋友是重要的,没有朋友,你将不会有什么大的作为。当然,朋友也是分很多种的。有的是\"狐朋狗友\",有的是“酒肉”朋友,有的是最“真诚”的朋友。所以,在交朋友时一定要慎重。据有关报道,有些年轻人为了追求时尚,在网上交友,结果被敲诈,还有的人去见"网友"而被拐卖,甚至遭遇了不幸,这不正是一个最好的例子吗?所谓的“朋友”就是要坦诚相对,用自己的真心去换取别人的信任,同时,在他们有困难的时候,我们要尽自己的全力帮他们渡过难关,为他们排忧解难。 记得小时候我和同一个院子里的一个小女孩玩的非常要好,可谓称得上是“有福同享,有难同当”。有一次,期末考试,由于晚上复习到十一二点,所以早上起得特别迟。于是我不管三七二十一,只要是书和文具就都塞进书包里,这下可“万无一失”了。我掂起书包就冲出去,等赶到学校,还有几分钟就要开始考试了,我舒了一口气,心想:总算没有迟到。可就在欣喜之余,我突然发现忘记带尺子了。

“这可怎么办啊?没有尺子怎么行呢!”我焦急地说道。再看一看周围,平时和我玩的差不多的人居然没有一个人理我,好像没有听见似的\'。只有她,急急忙忙朝我跑过来,问我怎么了,我心急如焚地说:“都怪我太着急了,居然把尺子落在家里了!”说着说着,我那不争气的“金豆”便忍不住的流了下来。他见我急成这样,便毫不犹豫地跑回座位把自己心爱的尺子折成两段,然后跑过来对我说:“诺,送给你啦。快别哭了,就要考试了,赶快回到座位上准备吧!”

说着便把那断尺递到了我手上。我激动的不知道说什么好,只听见他说了一句话:“咱俩是好朋友吗,那么见外干啥呀!”这时,上课铃响了,我赶快坐回座位,开始认真答题。虽然这只是一件十分平常的事,单曲蕴含着他那颗对朋友“两肋插刀”的心,这才叫做“患难见真情”才配称得上是“真正”的朋友。

真情类作文议论文【四】

在一切都向钱看的社会中,让我感到迷茫与无助。现在的女人结婚不是将自己的\'幸福托付给男人而是托付男人手里的给金钱。仿佛世界上最亲的只有钱。只要男人手里有房子、车子和票子,再差的男人也能找到漂亮的女人做老婆。现在的人都是以钱来衡量一个人的能力,有钱就是“好男人”,没钱一切无从谈起,社会就是这样现实!

现在谈恋爱的情侣,纵使两人的感情再好,要想结婚,男方必须要有房子、车子和票子,如果没有,千万别提结婚。

现在的人都一切向钱看,把世界变的残酷无情。有钱就意味着有幸福吗?

不,不是这样的!虽然金钱能给我们物质上的享受,会有很多人想要巴结我们,但是这样能给我们精神上的愉悦吗?

用钱换来的感情决不是真感情,金钱决不是万能的。如今,人世间的真情流向了金钱,万恶的金钱!我们的社会还需要多长时间才能变成世外桃源呢?

亲爱的朋友,别让金钱迷失了我们的幸福与真情!

真情类作文议论文【五】

母爱是什么?是小鸡遇险时,母鸡护着的翅膀;是在融冬时,母亲为孩子打毛衣冻红的双手;是母亲头上一根根增多的头发。母爱是关心,是呵护,是疼惜……

而在今天,《爱心》这一电影,让我见到了不同一般的爱,让我知道了爱的真谛。

面对儿子的不懂事,电影中的母亲坚决把他赶出了家门。因为她已被确诊得了晚期肝癌。而儿子也在她的安排中一天天的长大了。

看到这儿,我的泪水止不住的涌出了眼眶,热热的,是有温度的。因为我被这位母亲的爱所感动。清清楚楚的听到电影中这样一句话:“母亲的责任是辛苦的,艰巨的”。当时的我不由得想起了自己的母亲。我想我的母亲,乃至天下所有的母亲都是如此。

母爱,是伟大的,是圣洁的,是让我无法用任何词汇描绘的。我只知道母亲的`爱,如同天使的羽翼,纯洁的一尘不染。这种爱,不需要回报,甚至不需要说一声谢谢,只因为我们是母亲的孩子,她心甘情愿的去为子女付出,为子女奔波劳碌。但母亲却爱得这么无私,这么圣洁……

你们可曾想起,在唐山大地震时,一位母亲咬破手指,用鲜血持续了一个婴儿的生命。

你们可曾知道,一只硕鼠在患了绝症仅剩三天时间,却坚强地活到了第六天,为什么?因为她的孩子如果不喝她的奶,就会饿死。

……

不管是人还是动物,不管是出于何种方式的爱,只要是母亲,就有这世界上最圣洁的爱——母爱。想想自己的母亲头上的缕缕银丝;想想自己的母亲满是皱纹的手;想想自己的母亲日渐弯驼的背……我们有什么理由不被母亲的爱所感动,不为自己的母亲流下真挚的泪水。

我只想大喊一声:“人生真情,圣洁的母爱!”

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