1.If all those factors are contemplated, the advantages of... carry more weight than those of... From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that...
2.No doubt that we can’t control the problem... unless there is an immediate action... The chance is very good that...
3.From what I have mentioned above, we can see clearly that violence on TV has (a great influence on young adults’ behavior. Therefore, one can naturally reach this conclusion that...
4.In conclusion, .../In short, .../All in all, .../By and large .../To summarize...
5.In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of... Only in this way can... in the future.
6.Taking into account all these factors offered above, we may carefully reach the conclusion that...
7.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...
8.This fact provides strong reason for thinking that..., thus... is actually preferable to ... rather than the reverse.
9.Judging from all given evidences, we can safely come to the decision that...
10.With the two opposite opinions discussed above, it is clear that neither of them is reasonable. As for ...I think, the latter... .If, on the other hand, the former...
改写括号中的内容,使其句式整齐,韵律和谐。
醒来眼里布满了泪水;(大病之后我疲乏,依依不舍的离别,旅行途中的辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实,)都到心上来了。
分析:这是一道典型的语言运用试题,在近年中考语文试卷中经常出现。这类句式修改,一般要求句式整齐,语意连贯,可调整个别词语和句子顺序,但不得改变句子愿意。
句式整齐,语意连贯,其实就是修改为整句。整句是什么呢?整句就是把结构相同或者相似的一组句子整齐地排列在一起。整句形式整齐,音律和谐,气势贯通,能够把内容表达得鲜明集中,有利于突出作者的思想感情。
本题的实质是将原句修改为排比句(排比句就是整句的一种),但在题目中并没有明确指出,意在降低试题难度,只要句式基本整齐,意思和原句差不多都能得分。
查看本题中要修改的部分,我们很容易发现,出现了“大病之后”、“旅行途中”、“到家后”三个时间状语,只要第二个短语“依依不舍的离别”可以修改为时间状语修饰,句式基本上就整齐了。“依依不舍的离别”就是离别的时候依依不舍呀,“离别时”不就是一个时间状语吗?
看看,这样修改后就变成了“大病之后我疲乏,离别时的依依不舍,旅行途中的\'辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实”
是否还需要进一步修改呢?同学们在修改中也要试着读一读,看看还有不有别扭的地方。我们很快就可以发现,第一个短语和后三个是不同的。我们只需要把第一个短语也修改成的字短语修改的偏正短语就行了。
“大病之后的疲乏,离别时的依依不舍,旅行途中的辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实”
这已经非常不错了,当然,你还可以进一步美化。
“大病后的疲乏,离别时的不舍,旅行途中的辛苦,到家后可能的恐怖的事实”
前三句字格式、字数完全相同了,最后一句是不能改为“到家后的事实”的,也不能改为“到家后的恐怖事实”,因为去掉“可能”,就改变原句的原意了。
Nowadays,thanks to the reform and opening-up policy, great changes have taken place in countryside. Now let me introduce some changes in details.
如今,由于改革开放政策,在农村发生了巨大变化。现在让我介绍一些具体的变化。
Inthe past, farmers used to live in the huts which were in poor quality. Theywould be destroyed easily in the heavy storm. But nowadays, most farmers havetheir own houses and flats. Some houses are even bigger and more marvelous thanthe ones in the city.
过去,农民们常常住在质量差的小屋。这样的小屋在暴雨中很容易会被破坏。但如今,大多数农民都有自己的房子和公寓。有些房子甚至比城市里的更大、更不可思议。
Inthe past, farmers usually starved to death in disasters, because they hadnothing to eat. But nowadays, farmers can plant many corps to live with or sellthem. No wonder that most of them are wealthy.
在过去,农民通常饿死在灾难中,因为他们没有东西可以吃。但现在,农民可以种植很多庄稼来维持生活或者拿来出售。难怪大部分都是富有的。
Inthe past, farmers were hardly to see the outside world, since they had to trampover the mountains if they wanted to go out. But nowadays, many high ways andtunnels have been built, so it’s convenient for them to go out. Moreover, mostfarmers also have their private cars. Therefore, they can go anywhere theylike.
在过去,农民们很难看看外面的世界,因为如果他们想出去的话,他们不得不徒步翻山越岭。但现在,建立了很多高速公路、隧道,人们出去是很方便的。此外,大多数的农民也有自己的私家车。因此,他们可以去任何他们喜欢的地方。
Inthe past, farmers always suffered from the diseases, because there was nodoctor at all. But nowadays, many hospitals have come into being in countryside, so they can be cured in time.
在过去,农民经常遭受病痛,因为根本就没有医生。但如今,在农村里也有很多医院了,所以他们可以及时得到治愈。
Inthe past, it was difficult for children to study in countryside. Butnowadays, as there are so many schools in countryside, more and morechildren can get a better education.
在过去,农村的孩子很难去上学。但现在,因为在农村有很多学校,越来越多的孩子可以得到更好的教育。
Whata wonderful life in countryside. Maybe countryside will be morethriving than the city in the near future.
在农村的生活是多么美好啊。也许在不久的将来农村会比城市更加繁荣。
1.So far as I know, such a phenomenon comes up as a result of the following facts. To begin with, ... And more than that, ... Last but not the least,...
2.So far as I know, some factors that contribute to the above tendency may be summarized as below. First of all, ... What’s more, ... The last one is ...
3.Some people favor... as..., and they argue that.. It seems to be so at the first sight, however, on reflection, we are convinced that it is just another coin with two sides. Firstly, ... is, of course, valid as far as it goes, and we can benefit from this point... However, we must be fully aware of its potential danger, taking into account the risk resulting from...
4.As far as I know, the above tendency may inevitably give rise to some effects as follows.
5Considering the social atmosphere today, it is not a time to... It is high time to... The fact that... is what should be emphasized. Those who object to this idea forget a universal truth that... As I remember... In addition... An instance that accompanies this reason is that... On the other hand, ... Finally...
6.There are several significant reasons as follows. Firstly, ... Secondly, ... Thirdly,...
7.It would be possible to think that ..., but it would be more foolish to claim that..., and it would be more foolish to believe that...
8.We all know that... plays an important role in... However, many people believe that... depends on two aspects of... The first is... The second is... A further argument is...
9.In many cases, however, there is something beyond our expectation: yet we can compare and contrast all the relevant factors and find a way out /in/ between.
10.There are, I think, at least two possible ways to cope with it. The first way to tackle it is to appeal to the authorities to take drastic measures to (do... The other policy that is worth adopting
is to work out new regulations to (do ... Only in this way can we succeed in dealing with the problem in the near future.
1.Nowadays, a heated debate/discussion about... is under way in China. Some people believe that... whereas others argue that...
2.In recent years/In the past few years, there has been a growing (widespread/general realization( awareness/feeling towards that...
3.Nowadays people in a significant/increasing number are beginning (getting/coming to realize/believe that..
4.Although everyone believes that..., I doubt/wonder whether the argument bears much analysis.
5.This is a very conventional issue, but we can approach it from a new angle/a new point of view.
6.This problem is a much-debated one in that it affects everybody in their daily lives. People may prefer one to another, although some have no opinion about it. But if I am concerned, I can only disagree with the title statement and the reasons are given below.
7.There is a general discussion today on the issue of... Those who criticize... argue that... They believe that... but people who advocate...claim that… They hold the opinion that…
8.In a modern society, people have the freedom to choose... or... Although they normally coexist peacefully, they deserve some close examination. If the third criteria were taken into account, by comparison, people would prefer...
9.When we talk about..., we usually mean that..., or even that... The true... is not..., but that...
10.Contrary to widely held ideas, I believe that...
I like to travel so much. When holiday comes, I will make travel plans. My friends like travel, too. So we make up the group. Travel means a lot to me. On the one hand, I can broaden my vision. Every city has its own feature and lifestyle, so I can experience different lifestyles. Books can provide us theorical knowledge, but if we go to the place to witness the real scenery, then what we learn from the book will be useful. On the other hand, travel can bring me the new mood. If I live in the same place for a long time and do the same thing every day, my life will be boring. But travel can help me to refresh my mood. When I come back, I am full of energy again.
我喜欢旅游。一到假期,我就会制定旅游计划。我的朋友也喜欢旅游,所以我们会组队一起去玩。旅行对我来说有很大的意义。一方面,我可以拓宽我的视野。每个城市都有自己的特点和生活方式,我可以体验不同的生活方式。书本可以给我们提供理论知识,但是如果我们去那些地方见证真正的风景,我们从书本上学习到的才是真正有用的。另一方面,旅游可以给我带来新心情。如果我很长一段时间一直住在同一个地方,每天做着同样的事情,我的生活就会很无聊。但是旅行能帮我重塑好心情。当我回来时,我就又充满活力了。
© 2022 xuexicn.net,All Rights Reserved.