嗨!大家好,又跟大家见面了,今天我要向你们介绍一位新朋友,它叫“大毛球”,它有着一身白绒绒的长毛,都快要拖到地上了,圆圆的头上,两个三角耳朵已经被长长的绒毛遮盖住了,黑黑的眼珠滴溜溜的转着,散发出狡猾、贪婪的光。它浑身上下都是肥肉,足足有五六公斤,我都快抱不动它了。
记得两年前它刚到我们家的时候,小小的,放在爸爸的手心里刚刚好,探着个小脑袋使劲儿往外钻,那可爱的样子,真逗人喜爱。我们全家人都喜欢它,对它好得不得了,给它喂鱼、喂奶、喂肉,一家人轮流抱它,甚至晚上还和它一块儿睡觉。“小毛球”慢慢长大了,成了“大毛球”。我们一家人都盼望它做个捉鼠英雄,可万万没有想到,它竟在我们的精心呵护下成了一只大懒猫。一天到晚不是吃就是睡,也不爱串门,成天躲在纸箱里守着它的小食盆儿,最多就是在门口晒晒太阳。日子长了,它变得脑满肠肥,整个身子圆鼓鼓的,从远处看就像一个“大毛球”。照这样下去,哪儿还能捉老鼠?不行,我们一家决定给它减肥,首先从食物开始改革,每天给它吃白饭,最多拌上几勺鱼汤,不给他吃鱼了。
本想这样应该可以给它减掉几斤,可没想到的是,给它称体重,竟然还重了一斤。原来,那一段时间不给它吃鱼让它减肥,它就开始偷鱼,每次吃完饭还不等收拾它就如闪电般的速度跳上餐桌,用那锋利的猫爪子,抓起两块鱼肉就跑。食物改革就这样失败了。
有一天晚上,我突发奇想:运动可以减肥,人家遛狗,我何不溜猫呢?心动不如行动,于是,第二天我就开始“溜猫”。一放学,我就带着“大毛球”去街上散步了,可是它太肥了,磨蹭了半天也没走出几步远。
我一手牵着绳子,一手还要遮一下自己的脸。这不,大街上的人都在笑话我把猫当狗养了呢!唉,要不是为了给它减肥,我才不会带它出来丢脸呢!
我老家有一只可爱的猫咪名叫炭灰描,又叫四脚鸡!
今年秋天,树上的果实都熟子,爷爷从街上买回来了一只可爱的小描,它一身雪白,可是仔细一看,才发现它的后尾巴上有一些黑色的斑点,可爱极了。
到了冬天,小描渐渐地长大了,可是它身上的毛?变色了?这是为什么呢,这是因为小描它成天到晚都在火炉旁边烤火、睡懒觉,它全身就被火炉多炭灰沾满了那雪的毛就变成了炭灰描。
那它为什么又叫四脚鸡了?那是因为小描它从不吃我们放在它碗里的饭,而是偏要和成群的鸡一起在地上吃饭。因此,鸡和猫就经常会因争食而打架,逗的我们全家哈哈笑。别看小描的个子小了点,就很弱,可是他的爪子还是很厉害的,即使那个高个子的大公鸡也得让它三四分。所以我的爷爷就把它叫四脚鸡。
可我还是喜欢他的,因为小描是捉老鼠的高手。记得有一次咬住老鼠后就跑到我们的床前来喵喵大叫,那也是早上六点多钟了。爷爷起床后就特地为小猫煮了一个大鸡蛋,表示奖励。之后我们每次听到小猫来从前喵喵大叫,就知道他咬住老鼠来领赏了。小描每次来叫时我们就只到是六点多钟左右这下好了,有了小描,我就可以按时起床了。小描真是一个机器闹钟描。
啊!我家的小描真是很乖,我爱我家的猫咪。
从前,在西哩呱啦的大森林里,住着一只懒惰的小猫,它在猫妈妈的精心培育下十分健康、强壮。但是,它不像别人在茂密而深绿的灌木丛中蹦来跳去的玩耍、嬉戏。而是沐浴在阳光明媚的青草地上懒洋洋的躺着,等待妈妈给喂食物,因此,森林里的动物都叫它“懒猫”。它的同类见了这种情形,说:“妹妹,你不去练习捕鱼、爬树等本领,将来怎么面对这危机四伏的大森林呀!”懒猫不但不听同类的劝告,还怒气冲冲地大叫道:“这是我的事,不要你们管!这里是我的地盘,不允许你们进来!”它的同类们只好无可奈何地离开了那块还剩最后一缕阳光的草坪。
有一天,老虎对它的`午餐猎手命令:“你,去把那只又肥又胖的猫捉来!”于是狐狸带上在森林商场买的墨镜,穿上棕色的皮大衣,开着小汽车,以百分之百的速度来到那块草坪上,拉好拉链,拽了拽袖口,对懒猫说;“小家伙,快醒醒,叫声狐狸绅士,我带你去‘食物洞’。”果真,它立刻醒了,说:“狐狸绅士,真的吗?”“当然是真的,我大名鼎鼎的狐狸绅士还会骗你?”懒猫信以为真,一摇一晃的跟着狐狸绅士走了。
到了那儿,倒是有山洞,可上面画着老虎的面像,写着“森林之王”几个字。它大惊失色,转身就逃。可是,它又肥又胖,才跑了几步就被捉住了。
懒猫因为贪吃、懒惰的坏毛病,使它那天生的本领没有练成,结果成了老虎的午餐。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
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