Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
在我的相册里,有一张我和好朋友思思的合影,那是7岁在麦当劳过生日时照的。到今天整整过了4年了。可当时的情景我至尽仍记忆犹心。
思思和我同岁,只比我大两个月,可型号足足比我大一圈,人长的白,在加上他那憨憨的样子,真是人见人爱。我和思思是好朋友,更关键的是他有着宽以待人,不计较得失的良好品质。
望着照片,眼前浮现出当时那感人的往事。
生日,对我们每一个小朋友来说都是让人高兴和兴奋的一件事。记得当时在麦当劳过生日,除了爸爸妈妈以外,还邀请了几个院里的小朋友,思思当然是第一人选。那天,我们兴致勃勃地来到了麦当劳,一进门,那诱人的香味就扑鼻而来,只听思思说:炸鸡腿的味真香。我笑着,心里想:这小胖子就是食欲好,一会儿让你吃个够。我们来到了提前预定好的生日席,服务员阿姨把香喷喷的麦香鸡、麦香鱼、还有炸鸡腿、炸薯条一一的送到了我们的`面前,我的几个好朋友都毫不客气的开吃了。我惊讶地发现,只有思思拿着一杯可乐在慢慢的喝着,连他平时最爱吃的炸鸡腿,此时都被他冷落了,仍然完好无缺地放在了一旁。你怎么不吃啊?我不解地问思思。没事没事,我不饿思思有些堂塞地说,嘴里好像含着热茄子。这时,其他的小朋友也觉得有些纳闷,一边吃着,一边笑着说:不对吧,这可不是思思的风格呀!思思听着大家的话,只是不停的微笑,什么也不说。还是妈妈观察得细,他把思思叫到身边,是不是不舒服。妈妈说着,还一个劲地摸思思的头。就这样,思思在众人的轮番逼供下,最后,不得不招供了。
原来两天前,思思不小心嘴摔在了床梆上,牙把嘴硌坏了,鲜血直流,后来上医院大夫给他缝了两针哪。所以为这,思思付出了连饭都不能吃的代价。今天是我的生日,如果思思不来,他怕扫了大家的兴,更怕我不高兴,所以一直瞒着大家。
那天,我为思思的仗仪所感动,也为他有这种憨厚的品质所钦佩。我们俩个人站到了一起,同时两棵心也连到了一起。爸爸拿起相机,为我们拍下了这一感人的瞬间,也为我记下了这个难忘的生日。
从那以后,我们两个小伙伴就像秤杆不离秤砣总在一块儿。事情过去四年多了,我们也渐渐地长大了,但我们的友谊有增无减,我们俩现在是铁哥们,好得穿一条裤子还嫌肥。我会珍存这照片,更珍惜这友谊;我想:如果没有友谊,世界仿佛失去了太阳,你们说对吗!
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼,多休息,避免过度劳累,不吸烟,勤洗手;注意个人卫生,打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁,使用消毒液清洗的地毯,避免使用难以清洗的地毯,保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁,确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通,应每天开窗换气两次,每次至少10分钟,或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生,进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟,加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯,搞好厨房卫生,不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时,在户外洗手不方便的时候,可以使用免洗洗手液,随身携带,随时随地隔离病菌,呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时,应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热,100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
友谊是一笔宝贵的财富,它比钻石更耀眼更璀璨。
跌倒时,友谊给人们阳光般的援助;迷茫时,友谊给人们星光般的鼓励;失落时,友谊给人们清风般的慰藉;无助时,友谊给人们波涛般的勇气。从那一刻起,我懂得了什么是友谊;从那一刻起,我领略了友谊的真谛。一颗小小的钻石也有它自己的光芒,或许现在被土掩埋,终会有一天,它会发出璀璨的星光。
那天下着雨,忘记了带伞的我在走廊里漫无目的的徘徊心想着淋湿就淋湿吧。正当我要冲到雨里时手臂被猛地拉了一下,手臂被扯得生疼。我刚想发火却看到你把伞放到我面前只身一人冲到了雨水里。第二天你没来上学我很担心你会不会有事,问了好几个同学终于打听出来你家在哪。一放学我就跑到了你家,推开门我看见在你苍白的脸,手上还打着点滴,我想她是因为没有打伞淋雨才生病的吧?泪滑到嘴边咸咸的,你当时可以打着伞走掉,你当时可以不必理会我的感受,可是你没有。
上晚自习你来了,一脸的憔悴,我问你为什么把伞借个我?你说‘我’家里学校很近啊,不用打伞还有我身体比你强壮又淋不坏不是吗?泪水又一次不争气的流下来。谢谢你,谢谢你下雨天为了不让我淋湿冲向雨里的背影;谢谢你为了不让我担心说出善意的谎言。
友谊是帮助,帮助你度过人生中的坎坷;友谊是安慰,在伤心难过的时候给予问候;友谊是朝阳,在冬天带来阳光般的温暖;友谊是糖果,带走生活中浓郁的苦涩;友谊是……
一次,我读了《夏洛的网》这本经典的故事书,使我记忆犹新,就像是汹涌澎湃的惊涛,让我心中久久不能平静。
故事是美国的E.B.怀特所着,故事主要写了弗恩拥有一只落脚猪,等小猪威尔伯长大了,不能再待在弗恩家里了,她便把威尔伯送到了舅舅的谷仓里,小猪威尔伯和蜘蛛夏洛建立了深厚的友谊,可是命运并没有想象的那么简单。威尔伯将要成为熏肉火腿,但是夏洛在网上织出了文字,改变了威尔伯的一生,让它成为了王牌猪。
有一天,夏洛告诉了威尔伯,他将要离开威尔伯,恐怕再也见不到对方了。威尔伯悲痛万分,想尽一切办法帮助夏洛,他把卵袋交给了夏洛。
从这本书中,我感受到了每一个生物之间也会有着浓厚的友情,在彼此有困难的时候,会支持帮助对方。在威尔伯失去沸思很孤独时,是夏洛不知疲倦地陪伴着他,在威尔伯生命垂危是,也是夏洛在网上编织出了字,保护它。那“谦卑”一字承载着夏洛对威尔伯真诚的赞扬。威尔伯从认为夏洛是一只狠毒的蜘蛛,到成为最好的朋友,经过了多少的沧桑岁月,多少的风风雨雨,也高数我们,想跟任何的人做朋友不是一天两天就行的,先要了解对方,真心相处,“有福同享有难同当”这一句话,简短地语言,却充分说明了朋友该做的。
虽然夏洛的生命已经结束,但夏洛的子女,孙子女,曾孙子女,也都成了夏洛的好朋友,它们的友谊是那么的深厚,有时那么的忠诚。夏洛用蜘蛛丝织起了一张爱的大网,创造了奇迹,夏洛在威尔伯心中的地位是为人能取代的你,这份友情挽救了威尔伯的生命,正靠的是夏洛只求付出不求回报的精神,激起了无尽的爱和温暖。
《夏洛的网》要靠我们手拉手,心连心,共同织下去,织起一个美好的家园,架起一座友谊的桥梁,像夏洛一样真心待友。同时也要做一个知恩图报的人,要像威尔伯一样。
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