作文the weather in my city【一】
要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
作文the weather in my city【二】
This afternoon I went to the park which was built recently near my home.In the park,I saw many beautiful flowers and trees.The air was quite fresh and brids sang happyly.All the people there were singing,dancing and playing games.What a lovely place!
今天是五天。我去公园与我的家人庆祝这个节日。那里是许多人在公园里。他们中的一些人被拍照，别人是去观光。多么幸福地看着他们。
今天下午我去最近建成的我家附近的公园。在公园里，我看见许多漂亮的`花和树。空气很新鲜，鸟儿地歌唱。所有的人那里是唱歌，跳舞和玩游戏。多可爱的地方！
作文the weather in my city【三】
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She，s very active and smart. She has tress. She，s young and pretty. She，svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He，s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
作文the weather in my city【四】
Malaysia has been a hot tourist country in recent years, because people from all around the world were so attractive by its beautiful islands, which were green water and blue sky. But as more and more tourists come to visit its islands, problem comes. The media exposed the picture of full of trash in the island, which was so different from the tourist information. This is just one of the classic examples of tourist industry. People call for the clearness of environment. Both the tourists and government have the duty to do something to protect the environment. For tourists, they need to form the good habit of taking away the stuffs they bring and the government needs to take some action to deal with the trash. No one expects to see dirty scenery, so it needs us to do something.
马来西亚近年来成为了热门旅游国家，因为世界各地的人都被其美丽的岛屿吸引，那里有碧绿的水和蓝蓝的天空。但随着越来越多的游客来参观它的岛屿，问题也随之而来。媒体曝光的照片中，岛上到处是垃圾，这与旅游信息所展示的不一样。这仅仅是其中经典的旅游行业的`之一的例子，人们呼吁赶紧的环境。游客和政府都有义务做一些事情来保护环境。对游客来说，他们需要形成拿走他们带来的东西的好习惯，政府需要采取一些措施来处理垃圾。没有人想要看到脏乱的风景，因此需要我们做些事情。
