导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成\"总—分—总\"结构
老师为了对我们进行法制教育,今天,组织我们在多媒体教室观看《法制教育》这部碟片。
这部碟片是讲青少年犯法问题的,这些花季少年,本来应该和我们一样,过着快乐的阳光生活,可是,由于种种原因,他们却走上了另一条不归路。他们有的***了人,有的抢劫,有的赌博。每一画面都令我们触目惊心,心惊胆战。纵观这些少年犯罪的道路,他们都是一步一步的陷下去的,他们便赌气离家出走;与社会上的小混混到一起;有的抵制不住不良倾向的诱惑,痴迷于网络游戏和不健康的书籍录像等,最后抢劫;有的人仅仅因为一是之努不能克制,就伤害了一个无辜的生命……这其中的教训太深刻了。受了在场法制教育,我深深感到我们小学生正处在学知识,长身体的黄金时期,我们的判别能离和控制能力还很弱,因此,我们一定要严格要求自己,从我做起,自觉抵制不良社会现象的侵蚀,自觉遵守国家法规,防微杜渐,做一个遵纪守法的`小公民。
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
星期五,我和爸爸妈妈一起看了一个法制节目,这使我受到了很大的启发。节目中的很多很多的青少年,他们犯了法。他们现在被关入大墙之中,后悔莫及。当他们见到自己的亲人后,一直在听他们的教育。当然现在听已经太晚了,如果当时听一下他们的劝告,也就不会落在这个泥潭之中。他们没有一个人不关心家里的,没有一个人不后悔的,没有一个人不想好好改造后到大墙外面去,获得自由的。如果再给他们最后一次机会,他们一定不会再犯罪的。其实,在我们身边也有很多的例子,比如:一个同学把另一个同学的橡皮弄没了,那个同学肯定会去找他算帐,就难免打架。在玩的时候,有人只是开个玩笑,拿一下别人的东西,而那个人以为他是故意的,就上去打架。现在很多少年罪犯都有一个规律是:辍学——流失——染上恶习——犯罪。往往也有很多人都不想***人,而是在自卫时都误***了他人。很多青少年犯罪的原因:他们没有把精力放在学习上,而是在社会上闲逛或去上网吧结识一些坏人。我们平时要把精力放在学习上,不但要把数学、语文学好,更要把思想品德学好,要从现在开始,从我开始,和人相处要团结友爱,相敬如宾,做到宽宏大量,不要为一点小事而斤斤计较,要有正确的思想观,不但要德、智、体全面发展,更要做一个有很好心理素质的新新人才,心理的健康,能使青少年犯罪降低到零。让我们都重视起来吧,杜绝犯罪,特别是青少年犯罪!争做一个优秀的少先队员。
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