太多专业数据会给人捏造的痕迹,缺乏真实性。考官会质疑数据的出处。
例:A survey indicates that the number of people smoking has increased to as high as 65 percent in China.(一项调查显示。。。)
"65%"让文章看起来有些假,有捏造的嫌疑。"A survey"又不够具有代表性。
在这个句子中,我们先选择advertisements,influences, people这三个词汇,然后开始准备扩句。
不能过于空洞,也不能脱离现时,否则就失去了举例的意义。
Most female consumers shop unwisely.
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