How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
参加社团活动的日子终于到了,我和几个同学一起来到了操场上。我准备看看有什么新鲜事。果然,过了一会儿老师来了,一位男孩也跟着过来。老师对着我们说:“他是二年级的,所以跟我们一起练篮球,大家以后要和睦相处,互相礼让。”老师又对我们说:“现在我们来学拨球,也就是手上的篮球从这边拨到那边,从那边又拨回来。我们先要做到,四指向天,大拇指朝自己,用这个姿势拨球,知道吗?下面自己练一会儿。”
接着要学高空抛球,就是把球扔到上面,然后再接住。只见大家都一次又一次的扔上去,然后接住,可我呢,我每次都接不住,老师在扔球上去的同时,还让我们拍几下手。“一下、二下、三下、四下、五下。”可我却一次也没有接住,所以老师让我去旁边练。老师还让我们转一个圈然后接住。
从那次开始,我便开始慢慢地讨厌篮球。我不但讨厌篮球,而且还怕篮球,每次只要到星期三,我便会想尽方法逃避,可每次都逃不了,因为和我一起去参加篮球社的`人都会把我拉去。没办法,只能跟妈妈商量退出篮球社吧!晚上,我找到妈妈,对她说:“我想退出篮球社。”但妈妈并没有对我说好吧!而是很生气地对我说:“不行,篮球社是你自己报名进去的,我坚决不同意,而且篮球还是学校的特色,有些人想进去还进不去呢!既然你选择了篮球,就不能随便放弃。要是以后你去报名,去工作。你要是不喜欢,难道要辞职?”妈妈简短的几句话让我明白了:既然你选择了这条路,就必须得走下去,不管有多少风风雨雨,走人生的路也一样。
又是一个星期三,我兴高采烈地去篮球社团,这是同学问我你怎么不讨厌篮球了呢?我不理他们,仍然向前走。我们一起到达了篮球场上。这次我们女篮和男篮进行了强烈的拼搏,虽然女篮有些落后,但也毫不示弱,没过多久便超赶了他们。轮到我了,我的心“砰砰砰”跳不停,我前面那位过来了,我一下子上去了,这是心里只有一个字了,那就是“冲”跟我对的那一位,他在中间,球居然跑了,我一下超过了他,这一局我们女篮胜了。
在我回家的路上,我感觉到天仿佛比以前高出许多,也仿佛更加蓝了,路上的小鸟歌唱着,好像在庆祝我成功。虽然这对别人并非新鲜事,对却我意义非凡。
to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
假期里,爸爸妈妈带我去安徽天柱山游玩。我们的车子沿着弯弯的山路开着,只见远处青山叠翠,千山一碧,令人心旷神怡。我们来到第一站,全国攀岩基地之一的玉龙关。到了这儿我们才知道这里还是拍七仙女的影视基地呢!山上还有许多奇形怪状的石头,有的像月亮,有的像金元宝,还有的像一本厚厚的书。忽然,我看见一条银光闪闪的带子,啊!那是多么美丽的小溪。我们到达了攀岩的地方。只见那陡峭的石壁上,规律地排列着一些石孔,那是用来攀岩的。这时大人们在一边你推我,我推你,都不敢上去。而我却是初生牛犊不怕虎,走出来并大声地说:“我上。”保安叔叔给我系好安全带,把我带到石壁下,我一看见那石壁这么高,心里就有些害怕了,心想要是爬到一半上不去了怎么办?保安叔叔像看透了我的心,忙对我说:“小朋友别害怕,叔叔会保护你的。”听了这句话我就勇敢地开始了攀岩。我手脚并用向上爬,很快就爬到了中间。这时石壁上的石孔越来越小了,我的力气也越来越小了。当我正想退缩时,下面传来了妈妈的加油声,我想坚持就是胜利,不管再累也要爬上去,于是我就继续向上爬。经过努力,我终于到了山顶。接着大人们也一个个地爬了上来。之后,我们又开心地向天柱山出发了。
对我来说,去金仓湖骑车,可是第二次了。那时,我刚上大班,爸爸妈妈带我去金仓湖骑自行车。在上桥的时候,我不小心将一档调成了六档,结果力气太小了,自行车到了桥中间就不动了,我连人带车摔在桥上。从此,我再也没有去金仓湖骑过车。
这次,我想要挑战金仓湖,冲过那座高桥。
一到金仓湖,我就兴奋地跳上了车,和哥哥比赛骑车。我们约好了谁先骑到租车处,谁就赢了。我调了一档起步,等到速度渐渐加快时,我调到了六档。我用脚用力地踩,耳边传来了呼呼的风声,就像飞机起飞的声音,自行车像汽车一样在赛道上飞驰。等到了人多的地方,我减慢了速度,在人群中穿行。最后我赢了,大概因为我比他先学车,而且我还在吴羡那学了点骑车技术。
接着,我们就向金仓湖的高桥冲过去。这次,我满怀信心地向前冲,我想:我一定能冲上高桥,挑战金仓湖的。我飞速地踩着车子,像火箭一样冲了过去,等快到高桥的时候,我赶紧调了一档,我加足了劲,这次车子冲得更快了,嗖的一下子就冲到了桥的\'中间,前轮刚碰到向下的坡度,车子就往下冲了。我的心里很高兴,我终于挑战成功了。我还得意地做了一个胜利的手势。
冲过了一座高桥,下面的高桥我就不再紧张了。最后,我冲过了所有的高桥,环绕了金仓湖骑了一圈,夺得了胜利。
看来,爸爸说的是对的,失败并不可怕,只要勤学苦练,坚持到底,胜利就在眼前。
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