20XX年6月1日,我很早就起床了。穿上昨晚就准备好了的衣服,吃过妈妈精心准备的早餐,我兴高采烈地来到学校。
经过其他班教室时,看见里面布置得很漂亮。我心想:我们班应该也很漂亮吧!走进教室,我不禁惊住了:教室上空对角拉起两条彩带,上面挂着许多装饰物品;前后两块黑板上画着五彩缤纷的图案;两边的玻璃窗上贴着同学们编织的手工艺品。
不一会儿,班主任赖老师笑咪M咪地走进教室,她说:“今天是你们的节日,祝你们节日快乐!我还有一个好消息告诉你们,那就是我们中山市的市长要来学校慰问大家,跟我们一起过‘六一’儿童节。”同学们立刻欢呼起来!我想,平时只是在电视和报纸上见过市长,这次总算可以亲眼看到市长了。
军号声声响,军鼓咚咚敲,同学们欢呼雀跃着:“市长来了!” 我们踮起脚、抬起头望着市长一行人走过来。市长来到我们面前,大家异口同声地说:“叔叔、阿姨好!”市长他们笑容满面地向我们点头致意。突然,大队辅导员梁老师把我和另外几个同学叫出来,说:“你们几个代表同学们去接受市长的慰问。”我们一听,高兴得跳起来。辅导员对我们交待完毕,把我们带进一个六年级的.教室里,只见陈市长正在给同学们讲话。面对这么多人,我们心里挺紧张。接着,市长要为我们赠送慰问金和礼物了。我们几个上到前台,陈市长笑盈盈地把慰问金送到我手中,我激动地说:“谢谢市长!”市长拉着我的手说:“好好学习!”并且和我们一起合影留念。此时,刚才的紧张一扫而光,我感到非常光荣,非常自豪!
“六一”很快过去了,可那天的情景一直在我脑海里浮现,我一直忘不了陈市长对我说的话。我一定会好好学习,天天向上,用最好的成绩来报答市长对我们的关心。
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it's so late, almost 11:00 at night. have you entered into the sweet dream yet? i haven't seen you for a long time. i miss you so much. can you hear my sincere words? maybe you'll never know i miss you so much!
do you still remember the happy days when we were all together? during those days we were full of sunshine. you and mum often took brother and me to the park. we always saw the ice-cream tear. sometimes, you stayed at home and cooked some delicious food for us. we often waited for you and played with you. you could lift me very high. we always had a good time. you also concerned about my lesson. but you have never chastised me and lectured me. you were full of thoughts for me. what's more, you were my best father in my heart. you were the envy of my friends. i was happy for a long time.but now, all things have changed. you can't take care of me. you aren't at home all day. sometimes, i go to bed late, but i still can't see you. are you busy? no! you often play cards with your work friends in the factory. so you can't go back home early. i'm angry to hear that! do you know? if you don't come back, we'll worry about you. i often see you and mum should divorce in my dream. i'm very scared, because i want to have a happy family. i can't control my tears and often suffer from insomnia the whole night.
dad, i want to see you and talk with you. but i have no courage to tell you. but i hope you can care our family. dad! could you hear my voice?
hope you keep healthy and best wishes.
your lovely daughter
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