Yesterday, our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to school. 25 students of our class agreed with it, because they said that it is convenient for them and it could take less time to go to school. If they took bus, sometimes the bus come late and it might make them late for school. But the other 35 students didn't agree with them. They said it is not safe for the junior students to get to school by electric bicycles, for they are too young. They also said in the morning the traffic was very busy and the students couldn't ride electric bicycles quickly. Besides, there are too much electric bicycles in the street now, they can get hurt easily.
昨天,我们班讨论了关于中学生是否该骑电单车上学的问题。班上25位同学表示赞同,因为他们认为这样比较方便而且更省时。如果他们坐公车,有时候公车来得晚就有可能使他们迟到。但是,另外的'35位同学不同意他们的看法。他们认为中学生骑电单车上学是不安全的,因为他们还太小了。他们还认为早上交通繁忙,学生骑车不能太快。而且,现在路上的电单车太多了,他们很容易受伤。
these young people are wrong. in my opinion every student should have a knowledge of housework. after all, they will have a family of their own, and they should do their part in keeping a good home. boys should also learn to do housework, for what will they do if they remain single? though not all boys remain single, yet they will be very helpful in the family if they know some housework. anyhow they will not lose anything, but, on the contrary, they will gain something useful.
for what i said above, we can find some eamples of our fellow-students studying abroad. all young men do housework as girls do. someone would argue that we can employ servants. this is true. however, what shall we do if the servant leaves us and all things are left to ourselves? we just cannot leave our clothes as they are and let worms and ants eat them up. and what can we do it we go and study in a foreign country where servants are out our means to employ? we must work for ourselves. why not start to learn to do housework now or else it will be too late? everyone should learn to do housework. what do you think about my idea, boys and girls?
亲自体验让学生拥有了第一手生活素材,同样,自然界的一草一木、社会上的各种人物也是我们取之不尽的素材富矿。我们可以组织学生走进大自然,走进社会,参加公益活动,开展社会实践,让学生有意识地积累活生生的写作资源。
比如,在双休日,盆景园里学生们仔细聆听园艺师傅讲解盆景的制作过程;社区服务站的“学生义工”在慰问下岗工人、退休老人;文化馆里,“小书画家们”在挥毫泼墨并对艺术家喋喋不休的询问肯德基、必胜客门店,同学们在做“钟点工”,对各种类型的顾客进行观察调研;教师节表彰大会上,“小记者”在做人物专访。街道、社区、广场、商店等到处都有学生活动的身影,他们根据自身兴趣爱好在实地考察、专项调研,积累自己个性化的写作素材。
这些写作素材,完全从生活中来,学生对某行业某领域有真切感受,并且人人不同。因而写出来的作文也是极具个性,绝无雷同,更不会是“流水线制造”的。
学生们在生活中都经常使用到手机,以至于我们都依赖手机。而我们时常能看到许多的学生利用手机查阅资料,或者是浏览新闻。在学习中,或多或少会存在玩手机游戏的现象,但却无法杜绝。但是,倘若学生们都没有了手机,他们的生活就像少了一种东西一样,他们不能方便的查阅资料,或者观看一些信息。这让生活很不便利,手机联通网络,是一部收集千万资料的工具,若是没有手机,他们便要拿起一桌子的书籍翻阅,极其的麻烦。
若是,学生身上没有了手机,无法联系外人,当朋友间发生紧急情况时,老师也不在附近,那该怎么办?所以说,手机也是最有用的防救工具。
所以,手机与生活日益密切,因此不能被请出校园。
前面解决了写什么的问题,接下来就是解决怎么写的问题。学生亲身体验生活,实地调研,搜罗生活中的轶闻趣事,爬罗剔抉,分类汇总,形成体系完备丰富多样的素材库。如何将这些素材契合题意进行运用,组织成文,是最为关键之处。
其实,文有章法,自古皆然。老师在进行写作指导时要有计划有步骤地实施,指导学生根据素材的差异,形成个性化且有章法可循的创作思路。比如,如何在记叙文中塑造某个小人物形象。这种作文可采用欲扬先抑法,开头即可以简洁凝练之语特写人物,或设置人物出场的特殊环境:主体部分根据文章中心预设出详略之处,详写人物意料之外的行为进行设疑,接着借助次要人物出场解疑,升华主旨:最后回扣点题。也可在主体部分设置对比,可将主要人物与次要人物对比,或将主要人物的今昔作对比,以此凸显主旨。
再比如,以某种工艺或物品为写作素材,在确保广泛积累相关素材的基础上,找出此素材与中心勾连紧密之处,作为升华主旨的契合点。在文章的思路设置上,则以时间为轴展开续写。依据“走近该物——细致观察——设疑思考——解疑再品——升华主旨”的思路,或托物言志,或借物喻人。若欲以植物入文,亦可参照此法。
i think students should share some housework with their parents. the reasons are as follows. first, doing some housework can enable the students to have some sense of responsibility. there is a lot of housework in each family. as a member of the family, each one should do his or her share. since a student is a member of the family, undoubtedly, he is of no eception. in the second place, doing some housework can give the student opportunities to get to know his parents better. by doing housework, a student will know how hard it is for his parents to go to work everyday while raising a
family. he will make even greater efforts in his study later on. finally, doing some housework can give the student a chance to do some physicaleercises. since the student has to sit studying most of the time, this is certainly beneficial to his health.in light of the above, i strongly recommend that those who are not in the habit of doing housework start doing some right now. your parents will be pleased and you will learn something from it.
生活作业,又可以叫做“实践作业”。我们知道,作文尤其是记叙文写作,是实践性很强的活动,而培养这种能力的主要途径也应是实践。所以在学生放假作业的`布置上,我坚持每次都布置生活作业。让学生每个周末实践一个项目,周日晚上撰写该活动的过程、思考、感悟,形成周记。
比如说,周末放假让同学们到市场买菜,周日晚以《今天我买菜》为题写一篇周记。对于这项作业,同学们热情高涨、兴趣浓厚。写出的周记更是精精彩:典型的场景描写,有生动的语言描写,有传神的细节描写,还有真切的人生感悟。再比如说,放假布置一项生活作业;整理我的房间。同学们写的周记让人感动;很多同学是人生第一次整理房间,摸索了半天才整理好,享受到了劳动的快乐,知道了父母的艰辛有的整理出了儿时的物件儿,回想起童年的快乐往事;有的整理了自己的房间,顺带整理了父母亲的房间,有了感恩的实际行动。
类似的生活实践作业,学生有了自己的亲身体验,让学生有话可说,有料可写,有情可抒,是解决学生无米下锅的有效方法。
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