我和陈明是好朋友。
一天,我们把在手工小组做的小木船拿出来玩,陈明一不小心把它摔在了地上。争执中,陈明把它踩坏了,我非常生气,一把争夺他的小木船,火冒三丈地喊道:“既然你把我的小木船砸了,我要你付出代价。”话音刚落,我把手一挥,朝地上砸去,只见他的船砸成两块了。这时他也不甘示弱,他的脸面红耳赤的\',又将我的船踩了几脚,又踢到一边去了。我大喊道:“你没有资格这样对我的船。”他立即反驳道:“谁让你砸了我的船,我又不是故意把你的船给砸了。”我们俩吵得不可开交,要不是同学们拉住我们俩,我们都已经打起来了。
后来我们已经断绝一切关系了。虽然我们上下学是一条路的,但是,我们见了对方就如同对方不存在似的。事后,我冷静地去想,这件事我也有不对的地方,陈明只是不小心砸了我的船,而我却是故意砸他的船。我开始后悔了,十分沮丧,自己失去了一个好朋友,任何办法都不能帮我恢复我和陈明的友谊了。
几天之后,在放学的时候,我遇上了陈明,我感到对不起他,想赶快溜走。结果他叫住了我,他把头低下去,沉默了足有一分钟,他才吞吞吐吐的说:“那天……我太冲动了……不该与你吵架……我们还能成为好朋友吗?”我一听,大吃一惊,随后连忙说:“那天我也有不足之处,我们还是好朋友。”话音刚落我们不约而同的把新的小木船拿了出来,我们十分开心。从此以后我们再也没有吵过架,成了最好的朋友。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
我和陈明是好朋友,我们经常一起玩耍,有什么好东西都会分享,如同亲姐妹一般,可我们的友谊没有经住一件小事的考验,我气愤的和她绝交了。
一天,我们把在手工小组做的小木船拿出来玩,陈明一不小心把我的摔坏了。争执中,陈明又把它踩坏了,我非常生气,一把夺过她的小木船,狠狠的扔在地上,又使劲把它踩烂了,还大骂道:"你这个坏蛋,自私鬼!我永远不理你了!"她慌了,抓住我的手说:"听我说呀!我真的是不小心弄坏的,我不是故意的,对不起。我们怎么能因为这样的小事分开呢!"我愤怒地甩开她的手:"用不着向我道歉,更不用解释,我不需要你这样的朋友!"我生气的走了,而陈明伤心的哭了。
之后,我把她视为仇人,不论如何我都反对她,有时也静下心想过是不是用不着生这么大的气,但越想越觉得她以前做过那么多对不起我的事。我对以前那么多美好的回忆满不在乎。当她微笑着走来时,我会停止笑声,扭头就走;开辩论会时,我一定反对她的观点······我没有过她的感受,只是想:她是个坏透了的女孩。
这学期很快结束了,放学典礼那天,老师突然说要开一个欢送会。我很诧异,谁要走了呢?这时,只见陈明眼泪汪汪的走上讲台,哽咽着说:"同学们,我马上要走了,要随家人往纽约去,有可能再也不来了,7月2日的飞机······"这时好多同学都哭了,我却有点幸灾乐祸的表情。这时,陈明走到我跟前,递给我一个精致的崭新的小木船,说:"我很对不起你,我想在临走前把它送给你,希望你能原谅我。"我嗯了一声,把小木船塞进书包,可仍没原谅她。看着她离开的背影,我突然觉得自己好自私,也许,我心里早就原谅她了,可她也永远不会知道了。
之后放暑假了,我在七月一日写完了作业--因为之前我已经基本做完了,然后我美美的睡了一觉。第二日,也就是7月2日,当我睁开眼的一刹那,就突然想起什么。
我穿好衣服,急忙拨通了陈明家的电话。"滴···您拨打的电话已停机···"我惘然若失,泪竟不知不觉的流下来。我拨打了无数次,可总是这令人倍感失望的回答。
我缓缓的从书包里拿出那个小木船,痴痴地望着,心里有说不出的感受:我想到我见不到他了,也许是永远永远,又想到我们在草地上玩耍,在泳池中嬉戏,在花园中舞蹈······
我突然想起那架飞机马上要起飞了,陈明也许已经开始办登机手续了。我冲下楼,跑出院子打了一辆车,往机场赶去。
直到现在,我还清清楚楚的记得,我亲眼看到陈明乘坐的那架飞机疾驰过跑道,飞向了蓝天。
我伤心极了,拼命地喊着;"陈明,陈明!"可惜她听不见了,我哭了,泪一股股的往外冒,我心里有说不出的后悔。我对着蓝天,对着白云,对着清风,对着一切发誓道;"陈明,不论你在哪里,即使在大洋彼岸,我和你也永远是好朋友,永远永远!"
陈明,你听到了吗,我那发自内心的呼唤,他胜过最最真诚的道歉,我恨自己,我为什么要为小事斤斤计较。我相信,你听到了,你此刻在默默地抹泪,你正在说,我早就知道了,你在心里已经跟我和好了。
回家后,我把那小木船放在了床头,看着它,我突然控制不住情绪,放声大哭起来,那小木船里,包含的是那永不消逝的,最真诚的友情!
从此,我只要看到那小小的木船就会落泪,就会思念起,我那大洋彼岸的永远的好朋友······
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Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
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