一天,来了一位病人——火星。我热情地问它:“你好,火星,你有什么不舒服的地方?”
“我……我”咦?它说话怎么吞吞吐吐?随后,我继续问道:“没关系,说出来,我会帮你解决的。”它指给我看,全身伤痕累累,到处被污染了。“是……传染给我的!”传染?看来不只一个星球受伤害,我先开了几副药,然后用自己研制的草药贴在火星身上。
晚上,我百思不得其解:火星说话结结巴巴,身上的伤痕,污染……到底是谁传染的呢?
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
第二天,来了一个病人——木星!和火星同样的,始终不肯说出是谁传染的,木星比火星的伤重一些,木星精神恍惚,惧怕人类,只要见到人类就哆哆嗦嗦,脑子里是否藏着一个不为人知的秘密呢?让我疑惑不解,我有一种预感:传染给木星和火星的是同一个星球!难道……
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:
互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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当深深的失意困扰,便推开窗户,缓缓吸入新鲜的带着泥土芳香的空气。雪白的鸽子盘旋飞翔,流淌下一串悦耳的哨音。就像儿时,带着惊喜,小心的捏住蒲公英的细须,鼓起两腮,吹散降落伞似的蒲公英的孩子。闭上眼,真诚的许个愿,再睁开双眸,盛满了欣慰和憧憬。
当无赖的.厌倦涌来,便离了家门,在远远的山坡上,注视夕阳壮丽的沉没。风声虫鸣,过滤心中的杂音,如同儿时,夜晚,在自家的小院,静静地蹲在花圃里聆听金龟子的歌声,扳着手指数天上闪烁的星星。
于是,嘈杂的世界渐渐隐去,拥有了一颗宁静的心……
清楚的记得那次月考,语文成绩一向很好的我,这次月考因为自己的马虎大意,成绩直线下降,而同桌的`高分,如晴天霹雳,重重的打击着我,回到家,竟然家人们都在,这样的成绩让我怎么样去面对现实,于是,我无奈地走进房间,拿着满是红叉的试卷子,面对如此的考试成绩,我不争气的落下眼泪,这时,父亲走进房间,看见桌子上的语文试卷,于是,我做好了充足的心理准备,心想会又是一顿恶骂,没想到父亲看见语文成绩,便坐了下来,拿起卷子慢慢的、仔细的端详起来,而站在一旁的我,手心直冒冷汗,吓得紧紧的抓着衣角。
就这样,僵持了好长时间,父亲终于开口说话了:“怎么回事,语文竟然考这么低,这可不像你啊!”我羞愧的低下头,接着,他又说:“没关系,我相信你,你看,这次的考试题并不算难,是不是上课没有好好听讲?”还没有等我开口说话,父亲便一一为我讲解试题,并告诉我下次要注意什么。看着父亲眼角的皱纹,认真的眼神和疲惫的面孔,我又不禁心疼得落泪了,泪水中,看着父亲模糊的轮廓,这一刻,我仿佛读懂了什么。
父爱不一定要轰轰烈烈,不想母爱温柔甜美,不想母爱那样无微不至,但父爱是独特的,有着表达爱的另一种方式,父爱是深沉的,有时又像一杯浓浓的咖啡,苦涩中永远带着一丝甘甜,有是有是令人捉摸不透的,但当我们真正读懂时的那一刻,它就具有无穷的力量,感化心中最深的冰雪。
在去年暑假的时候,因为奶奶去了离我们家比较远的姑姑家去住了,所以爸爸妈妈不放心爷爷,就把爷爷接来我们家住了。
每天早上爷爷总是会第一个起床,先去晨练,晨练过后就给我们全家做好早餐,等我们起床之后吃完早餐再把碗筷收拾了。尽管爸爸妈妈想要帮爷爷,但爷爷总说:“人老了,不动一动怎么行呢?”爷爷几乎每天都有做不完的事,但在他做这些事之前,他总是会先问问我和弟弟想去玩吗。我和弟弟总是会用各种理由来推托爷爷。得到我们的答案后,爷爷就会在家里忙忙这忙忙那,无聊了就在电视上听听戏,再要不就骑着他的黑色电动车从出去转悠。当然,这些在那时,我都无从知道。
有一天,还是上午九、十点的时候,一向闲不住的爷爷却躺在床上一动不动,也没有闭上眼睛睡觉,只是那样静静地望着天花板。这一刻,我的心突然狠狠地抽搐了一下。想:难道爷爷每天都是这样度过的吗?我和弟弟有电视电脑的陪伴,可爷爷只有一个人啊!他在我们这个小区里谁也不认识,有谁会陪伴他?我顿时感到了爷爷内心的孤单,不禁喊了一声:“爷爷!”爷爷立刻反应过来,做起来笑着对我说:“怎么了?想不想去玩?”我立刻点点头,回答到:“爷爷,我们出去打羽毛球吧!”爷爷立刻起身,准备好球拍和羽毛球,再戴上一顶运动遮阳帽,还挺像那么回事,于是我立刻叫上弟弟,我们换好衣服后,一起走出了家门,和爷爷“过起招来”。突然,我发现爷爷笑的很开心很开心,这一个笑容虽然布满了皱纹。但对我来说,它已经成为一个永恒的,最美的微笑保存在我的脑海里了。它深深地触动了我。
亲爱的爷爷,我知道您的.孤单,或许您想要的并不多,就是子孙平安,儿女幸福。而我的愿望,就是您能开心地度过每一天,快乐地享受您的晚年。
爷爷那一瞬间的笑容,是我永生难忘的,我觉得那是世界上最美的笑容,是无所能及的美丽笑容,无可替代。
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