小学五年级英语小作文myday【一】
我家附近有一个小公园，人称“舜北公园”。公园面积不大，但是一年四季风景优美，是小区居民们休闲娱乐的好去处。
春天来了，树木抽出绿色的枝条，小草从地下探出了小脑袋，好奇地窥探着这个世界，整个公园像披上了一件嫩绿的新装。山坡上，百花盛开，粉红的桃花、雪白的梨花、金黄的迎春花……散发出阵阵沁人心脾的花香。花下成群的蜜蜂嗡嗡地闹着，大大小小的花蝴蝶飞来飞去。明媚的阳光下，孩子们在小广场上快乐地玩耍，大人们则坐在广场边的石凳上看报、聊天。
夏天来了，公园里的树木长得葱葱茏茏，密密层层的枝叶像一把把绿色的大伞，遮住了炎炎烈日。树荫下，人们三个一群，五个一伙，有的打扑克、有的下象棋……夜晚来临，喧闹了一天的公园渐渐安静下来。这时，如果你到公园的池塘边散步，不但可以观赏皎洁的月光下亭亭玉立的荷花，还可以听到快乐的蛙鸣声。
秋天来了，公园里的小草被染上了点点金黄。夏天还绿油油的树叶被秋风染成了金黄色、桔黄色和火红色。阵阵秋风吹过，五彩缤纷的树叶像蝴蝶一样纷纷扬扬飘落下来。登上山顶的观景亭，公园的美景尽收眼底。蓝天、白云令人赏心悦目。
冬天来了，雪后的公园银装素裹。广场上，孩子们堆雪人、打雪仗，玩得可开心了，不时发出阵阵欢快的笑声。
啊！我爱舜北小公园。它景色迷人，空气清新，带给人们许多生活乐趣。
小学五年级英语小作文myday【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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小学五年级英语小作文myday【三】
在我家前面的不远处，有一个小公园。小公园可好玩了，它不仅带给人们乐趣，还是个热闹的世界。
小公园虽不是名胜古迹，也比不上那些游乐园。早晨，桂花散发着清清的芳香，给人们带来新鲜而清香的空气。有老人在练太极功；身穿白色衬衫的青年舞着剑；一群儿童跟着老师练习武术，只见他们腰上系着一根红带，有的翻跟头，有的头朝下倒立行走，动作惊险，真是让我大开眼界。中午，学生放学了，有的学生路过小公园，他们从公园里的独木桥上走过，边走边玩，脸上带着欢快的笑容，蹦蹦跳跳地往家走去。
到了晚上，小公园就更热闹了。露天舞场上聚满了人。他们大部分是中老年人，也有少数青年和儿童，人们一边跳着舞一边聊着天，很是悠闲快乐。小公园的走道上练习行走的人，有的慢如悠闲散步，有的快如奔跑。最好玩的是儿童蹦蹦床，儿童们在上面蹦呀跳呀，快乐极了。
这就是我们的小公园，它每天都带给人们快乐和美丽!
