上海六年级英语作文my trip【一】
要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
上海六年级英语作文my trip【二】
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She，s very active and smart. She has tress. She，s young and pretty. She，svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He，s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
上海六年级英语作文my trip【三】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
上海六年级英语作文my trip【四】
Hi! Boys and girls! My name is kelly,I am 12 years old. I am a student. I study at XiShan Primary School.I am in Class 1,Grade 5.I have three good teachers. They are Mr Lai, Miss Huang and Miss Lu.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She，s very active and smart. She has tress. She，s young and pretty. She，svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He，s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
上海六年级英语作文my trip【五】
八月的天气十分炎热，我拖着鲸鱼行李箱、背着小怪兽背包和姨爸姨妈兴高采烈地来到高铁站，乘坐G2366去往我梦寐以求的大城市——上海。
第一站
难忘的第一站——金茂大厦。金茂大厦是上海第三高的“摩天大楼”，有88层高，导游介绍说乘坐电梯只要45秒就能到达88层观光厅。在这里我透过玻璃看到了东方明珠电视塔和上海中心大厦，还看到了地面街道上比蚂蚁还小的来来往往的汽车和人群。
第二站
难忘第二站——上海海洋水族馆。在水族馆里，我欣赏到各种各样漂亮的鱼，红绿灯、七彩神仙鱼、彩虹鱼、大紫鲨、红针狮子鱼、水母、小丑鱼……好多好多我都能很快说出他们的名字。姨妈纳闷地问我怎么会知道这么多鱼的名字，我悄悄告诉她说，因为我在家里玩了一个叫做“开心水族箱”的游戏，游戏里面的很多鱼和水族馆的\'鱼长得一模一样。姨爸姨妈开心地笑了。我们依依不舍地离开了水族馆，早早地回到了宾馆，养精蓄锐，准备明天的迪士尼乐园之行。
第三站
难忘第三站——迪士尼乐园。我们乘坐地铁到达迪士尼站之后，拼命往前跑，可是一到广场发现已经有很多人在排队等候入园。我们大概等了一个半小时终于随着人群入园了。因为经验不足，本来可以领两个快速通行证的我们，在《飞越地平线》这个项目上就等了三个小时。最好玩的我觉得是《七个小矮人矿山车》，我们一大早拿到了快速通行证，在规定时间来到了游戏地点。这是一个小的过山车，坐上去以后先来一个下坡，然后左右摆动，突然在来一个下坡，进了一个山洞，继续向下，路上可以看到小矮人在挖矿，最后一个弯非常大，非常大，整个人都歪在一边，速度不是很快，又有点小刺激，太好玩了。紧接着，我们还去玩了《飞越地平线》、《蜜罐史迪奇》、《爱丽丝梦游仙境迷宫》、《旋转木马》。一天的时光匆匆流去，虽然没有把所有的项目都玩遍，但是我已经很满足了。
这次上海之旅真的是太开心了，下次我还会再来的。再见，迪士尼！再见，上海！
