初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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星期五,我背着书包走在放学的路上,把一个废塑料袋随手丢在了路边。一阵大风吹过,塑料袋便跟随这风儿去旅游了。晚上我早早地睡了,因为明天早上要早起回老家。
在睡梦里,我来到了一个陌生的地方,只见四周一片漆黑,隐隐约约看见一个不知名的东西在天空飘来飘去。一阵威风吹过,四周顿时亮了起来:我仔细一看,原来是我昨天丢的`塑料袋。它在天空中手舞足蹈,好像在对我说:“嗨,我们又见面了!”在天空中飘来飘去的塑料袋多神气呀!
这时,一只小鸟从这里飞过,一不小心被塑料袋罩住脑袋,小鸟看不见前面直往下掉,最后被活活地摔死了。我心里好不难过。都是该死的塑料袋惹的祸。塑料袋干完这件坏事后洋洋得意地飞向远方了。
在一个拐角处,一只小狗正在追赶小偷,不料塑料袋从天而降,罩在了小狗的头上,小狗看不见前面的路,撞在了大石头上,头破血流。小偷看见了,幸灾乐祸地对小狗说:“哼,你还想跟我斗,快点死了这条心吧!”
塑料袋像个得胜的大将军大摇大摆地离开了。它来到一个美丽的池塘上空,这时小鱼正露出水面高兴地吐这小泡泡,不料塑料袋落下来把小鱼整个给包住了。小鱼拼命地挣扎,想逃出塑料袋的魔掌,可怎么也逃不出去,最后被活活地累死了。
我看到这一切,气愤不已,忍不住大叫一声:“啊——啊!该死的塑料袋,我不抓住你誓不罢休。”这一叫,我立刻从梦中醒来了。原来是一个梦呀,让我虚惊一场。
小伙伴们,以后我们要管住自己的手,再也不要乱丢垃圾了,做个称职的环保小卫士。
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
走进房间以后,我正“沙沙”地写着作业,胳膊不小心碰着了橡皮,橡皮随即掉在了地下。当时,作业就快要写完了,也没顾得看,“哎呀,写错了。”我自言自语道,于是我开始找我的橡皮。
橡皮是绿色的,我的眼睛在急速的寻找着房间一切绿色的东西,我看见了灯台旁边那个绿色的`小东西,手伸去一拿,发现自己找错了,那是一个青蛙型的小钱包。心情失落极了,便去寻问妈妈:“妈妈,你有没有看见我的橡皮呀?”“你看,我叫你天天收拾东西,你就是不听,你现在东西丢了,我怎么可能看见……”哎,早知道就不问***妈了,又要听一阵唠叨,于是,我不耐烦地走进了房间,关上了门。我找来找去,找到了一堆带有绿色的物品,但都不是小橡皮。我头晃来晃去,一不留神,发现了掉在地上的小橡皮,把那个错字一改,作业就写完了。
以后,一定要注意整理东西呀!
秋风飘向了果园。它悄悄降落在苹果树的枝梢上,只一挥手,一个个硕大的苹果就成了高雅古典的红宝石,沉甸甸地垂在树上,摇摇欲坠。它又忽忽赶去,将橘树上晶莹剔透的露珠拂去,一个个艳艳的小灯笼挂在树上,可喜庆了。突然它又猛地扑向银梨树,顿时,茵茵绿丛中洒满了金色的喜悦。调皮的它好像想到了什么,快速窜动着,“唰”,一片嫩嫩的桃树叶被它夺走啦!小桃子可不开心了,使劲涨红了小脸,嘟起了鲜红的嘴巴,秋风只得慢慢抚摸桃子的小脸蛋,也把那一片秋的叶子放在桃树脚下。红枣结出了丰硕的果实,桂圆也相继成熟了,火红的杮子争先恐后地落地,板栗被扔进了一只只箩筐。人们望着这一张张美丽的笑脸,秋风的足迹就按在了果园里。
秋风跳入了田野。它小心地爬上了高粱,用力挥舞着高粱头顶的红缨,高粱这个红脸酒鬼,被秋风摇得更晕了,开始东倒西歪。它又一跃而起,在空中翻了个跟头,将头儿一低,身儿一摇,再猛地抬起,溅了秋风一身水,它只好赶紧逃,免得再被甩一身。它突然冲进麦田,与金麦一起沸腾、欢呼,麦子被秋风的热情感染,掀起了滔天麦浪,可谓是“一浪更比一浪高”啊。玉米秸的杆子十分结实,白菜的.叶子绿的发亮,萝卜变的雪白雪白,茶树也开始散发清香。人们望着这一张张美丽的笑脸,秋风的脚印就留在了田野上。
秋风溜进了森林。它伸出手,小心地点了一下松树,“啊!”风儿的手被尖利的松针扎破了,流出绿色的雪,松树就被染成绿色了,一直没有褪色。它又飞到枫树旁边,枫树为了迎接秋风,把自己的手拍得“啪、啪”响,巴掌都拍红了。它快速飞行着,忽然听见森林中“沙沙、沙沙”的美妙歌声,便放慢脚步,彬彬有礼地走到银杏旁边,它喜欢这位大自然歌唱家,便送她好多金色的小扇儿,银杏可开心了,优雅地扇了起来,可美了。秋风又变成鹿的知心好友,陪它一起散步,一起奔跑。秋风见松鼠从树上跌落,连忙托起了松鼠,将它安全放回地面。它和小熊撒娇,和小鸟歌唱。人们望着这一张张美丽的笑脸,秋风的身影就刻在了森林中。
秋风像一丝彩色的绸缎飘向了果园,像一位可爱的精灵跳入了田野,像一个调皮的孩子溜进了森林,当然,它还去了许多地方-……让我们祝福它,神奇的风儿哪!
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