英语青海中考作文

英语青海中考作文

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英语青海中考作文

英语青海中考作文【一】

今天早晨九点半,我们乘坐的列车来到了美丽壮观的西宁。

刚下火车,我具有一个感觉:凉!简直可以用冷来形容,凉风一吹,我浑身都起鸡皮疙瘩,冷得我直打哆嗦。这和河南相比简直是两个季节。我立刻向妈妈要了几件衣服,套了上去。啊,好多了。这时我才有心情向四周观看,西宁的楼房林立,比我们濮阳的楼房高多了,连原来在青海生活了十几年的妈妈都几乎认不出了,妈妈说:将近二十年没回来,变化可真大呀!我和爸爸更是感慨万分,因为我们两人是第一次来西宁。贝贝哥哥就在我们感慨的时候出现了,带我们来到了舅舅的车上,舅舅一边开车,一边给我们讲周围的景色,我感觉我的眼睛和耳朵都不够用了,很快就来到了舅舅家的小区——龙源叠翠小区。啊!小区可真漂亮,这么多的高楼,我觉得生活在西宁到人一定很幸福、很快乐。到了贝贝哥哥家,啊,他家的房子可真大呀,要是开生日派对肯定很壮观。

下午,我们去逛商场和超市,这里的商场也很大,货物琳琅满目、应有尽有,让人眼花缭乱,我们给贝贝哥哥买了一身运动服,还选购了一些别的物品。

今天,西宁给我的感觉可真好呀!

英语青海中考作文【二】

1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。

"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

英语青海中考作文【三】

导入:

第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.

正文:

第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因

第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势

结论:

第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ

英语青海中考作文【四】

导入:

第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题

正文:

第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法

结论:

第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法

英语青海中考作文【五】

导入:

第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题

As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对

The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下

正文:

第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由

结论:

第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构

英语青海中考作文【六】

这个暑假我去了青海,其中有几个地方非常有趣。

第一个趣事地点——门源

来到门源我惊呆了,门源不愧是油菜花之乡,油菜花特别多,而且我们四川的油菜花早开过了,连油菜籽也收了。门源竟然还有油菜花让我们观赏,太稀奇了!我还不停的赞叹道:“门源太美了,油菜花太漂亮了。”有趣的还不止这些,如果你从山上的观花台往下看,

下面被一些青稞和油菜花弄成了一个“盗版稻田迷宫”。太好玩了!

第二个趣事地点——青海湖

青海湖是陆心之海,也是中国最大的咸水湖。青海湖还有一些其他风景:中国鱼雷发射基地、西王母雕像……湖很大周长有三百六十公里。老爸说:“你看湖并不是蓝色的,在不同的地方、不同的角度、不同的季节,青海湖的颜色青或蓝或绿或灰,或赤橙蓝绿黄青紫……很多颜色,有趣吗?是的这是我第一次看见这种景象,太神奇了!

第三个趣事地点——小沙漠

西宁附近有个小沙漠,来到这里,就像来到沙哈拉大沙漠一样。我先爬上沙漠山,刚走了几步就有点怕,怕自己掉下去,后来渐渐不怕了。爬上山顶时我看见一座座沙漠山,树,还能看见青海湖。然后我又去骑骆驼。这只骆驼有两个驼峰,浑身长满了棕色的毛。骆驼的嘴巴时不时地动着,似乎在咀嚼什么东西。我从爸爸那里了解到,这是骆驼在“反刍”,很有趣。上山时我没什么害怕的.,下坡时我抓住驼峰以免摔下来,驼峰很舒服,爸爸还给我照了相。同去的叔叔不小心踩上了骆驼粪,沙漠上没有水,他只好把脚伸进沙漠里“干洗”!!

第四个趣事地点——观鸟台

在二郎剑有一个观鸟台,那里有鸭子看。我们登上观鸟台,从小窗口望去,看见黑灰色和白色的鸭子,人们怕鸭子飞走,就把鸭子的翅膀剪了,太残忍了!不过听说可以给鸭子喂食,所以我和朋友买了一包又一包的食物,但是黑灰鸭子吃我们投的食物,白鸭子不吃,只吃专门放在鸭食盆里的食物。我想:鸭子们吃的太多了,食欲比我还好,这叫鸭子吗?

你是不是动心了呢?那赶快来青海玩吧!

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