关于mydream的英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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关于mydream的英语作文五年级【二】
你好!
我是四川省德阳市实验小学五年级三班的一名男生,我叫敬良宇,今年11岁了，今天，我很高兴能给你写信！
在我们德阳，有很多好玩的地方，比如：世界闻名的三星堆、风景迷人的'东湖山公园、空气清新的石刻公园……个个让你陶醉，还有许许多多好吃的德阳特产，我真诚的邀请你来我家做客，到时候，我们就可以一起玩耍、一起学习……
我还有许许多多的兴趣爱好，比如：跑步、踢足球、打乒乓球……每次在学校举办的田径运动会中，我可常常进入总决赛呢，在决赛中获得前三名的好成绩。
对了，现在该讨论重点了，我觉得开展“手拉手”活动可以采取以下方法来举行：
1.通过写信的方式传递消息，可以在信上写上自己想说的话。
2.可以用打电话的方式，增进彼此的友谊，让大家成为好朋友。
3.可以通过上网，用QQ、微信来聊天，这样既节省了钱，传达消息又快，不过要有节制，不能在网上聊太久。
怎么样？我的建议还不错吧！如果你有什么更好的想法或建议，
请与我联系，期待你的回信。
祝
身体健康，学习进步！
你未来的朋友：***
2月25日
关于mydream的英语作文五年级【三】
曾经读过季羡林教授的一本《我的人生感悟》，让我对生活有了深刻的感触。生活在这个缤纷的世界里，我就是一个追梦人。梦与生活并存于我的人生当中。
生活永远是美好的，青春犹如绽放的花朵般美丽，忧愁算得了什么。在遇到生活的烦恼时，往往是理想战胜现实，微笑是最终的胜利。生活之余，喜欢幻想，幻想人生的美好未来和打算。更喜欢做梦，做梦也让生活有几分的向往和追求。
喜欢读散文。读那些名家写的人生感悟，读作者的'思想和生平。读过余秋雨的《霜冷长河》后，再读《文化苦旅》。要感受这位天才作家的生平，就再去读《借我一生》。用他那触及到哪里哪里就会发出光芒的神笔写下的作品，让人真的感触深刻，也略懂了生活会造就一个人。
喜欢养花。记得老舍先生很爱养花，写过一篇养花的文章，乐在其中。的确，养花的乐趣远远胜过欣赏花。虽然年轻，但很耐得住烦恼，这是养花教给我的。经过自己的艰辛努力，原本毫无生气的小院全被我绿化了。夏天的静夜，坐在小院欣赏我的杰作，真有种收获的喜悦。
喜欢追梦。读过郭敬明的《梦里花落知多少》后，也有增有减。我的人生有梦让我生活得快乐和自在，我就像大海中的鲤鱼一样时时想越过龙门。但是，回到现实，却又觉距离太远，因为我的梦有点长久，要花费我更多的努力去实现。不喜欢半途而废，因为我不想成为生活的弱者。
冰心说：爱在左，情趣在右，一路走来一路阳光相伴。这就是生活，阳光下的微笑永远是灿烂和美丽的，对待生活，我有足够的勇气和把握。读散文培养了我的生活情趣，养花磨练了我的耐心和意志，追梦让我对生活有了更贴近的感悟。还有什么不满呢？唯有的就是再去感悟生活。
人生因有梦而精彩，生活因有梦而充实。我的人生就是这样，在人生边上写些我喜欢的和感悟到的，供我茶余饭后去欣赏，也提供给文学爱好者，让他们去评价一下好与坏。
