要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
第一次和大家聊天是通过最原始的写信方式,说实话,我满怀期待也因此感到紧张。你们选择了模拟联合国,选择了我们这个大家庭,让我倍感荣幸和骄傲。
我们都是这样开始的——高中毕业,十七八岁的光景,背井离乡、只身一人来到兰州,开始探索一段新的旅程。今年有些不一样,少了军训,少了烈日下的暴晒,好处是免了“体肤之灾”,却也少了集体生活中的很多乐趣和磨练意志的机会。大学不再像原来那样,课程需要自己选择,课本需要自己去找,甚至需要横穿整个校园去上一节课。除此之外,课程时间的变动,课余时间的自由,饭菜口味的变化,也许一个个汇聚起来成为你们或兴奋或焦虑的原因,弟弟妹妹们,不要担心,这些都是你们在适应过程中的正常表现!加油,做好计划,一步一个脚印,也大胆的宣扬梦想,放肆的把压制在心里的兴趣、爱好、特长通通展现出来!
首先,祝贺你们经过了高考这座独木桥,正式成为一名大学生,确实值得开心,但这绝对不是终点,而是梦想真正启航的地方。进入大学,慢慢地,你会发现,很多事情变得不一样了,你原来所相信的也许也会一件一件的变得难以置信。越是丰富的生活越充满了新鲜事物和机遇挑战,但是不管你遇到什么情况,都请继续坚持你的梦想,相信你的梦想!
其实,抛开一切不如意,当你安安静静的走在校园里,会发现我们的西北民族大学充满了生活的情调。清晨,校园里的第一缕阳光在六点左右倾泻,后操场上有很多晨练的伙伴,金碧辉煌的图书馆自七点半开门就会涌进一批勤奋的学生;傍晚时候的校园是躁动的,人头攒动,川流不息,和夕阳相互辉映;夜幕开始降临的时候,月亮和太阳常常一起挂在天空中,一边是蓝空的蔚,一边是晚霞的红,很是浪漫;天黑了下来,清真一食堂前会有大波的人跳舞,锅庄舞、摆手舞这样的民族风韵或是各类流行金属电音协奏择日上演,水景广场镜(静)湖和图书馆中间的空地上会有炫影轮滑的同学在练习花式,好不热闹!呆久了,习惯了,会更加喜欢榆中这个急性子的姑娘,用最火辣的夏天迎接初来乍到的你们,用最安静的冬天送别各奔东西的.学长学姐;榆中的夜空干净到可以看清地转星移,繁星点点的夜晚很适合带上耳机漫步又或者三三两两的坐在草地上谈天说地;学校背后苍劲的白虎山是烧烤和露营的好去处,无论是等日出还是观日落都别有一番西北塞边的风味。描述这么多,其实我想说的就是,既来之则安之,保持乐观向上的心态,勇敢的去实现你的梦想!
将梦想进行到底,因为一颗向上的心,我们汇聚在模联的大家庭里。模拟联合国作为学校全五星社团中唯一的学术性协会一直以来本着和大家一起学习和进步的原则,培养出了很多优秀的领导者,在这里,我们不仅仅了解联合国,也学会交往、学会创造、学会展现自我。
想说的话还有很多,原谅我无法一一详尽。最后送给大家一首顾城的《羽化》,希望这首诗能让我们结下友谊,一起为真正的蜕变而努力奋斗!
因为一个过长的梦
我变成了蛹
在古木的皱纹间
度过严冬
我曾说过话
在那北风放歌的时辰
白色的水汽并未消散
凝成了薄薄的茧层
冷吗 不冷
太阳在越走越近
一阵温暖的微波
使我睁开眼睛
泪水放大了游丝
像一片交错的彩虹
不知名的幼鸟
在远处拔着高音
鞘壳绽裂了
翅翼在寒颤中延伸
蜷缩的时代已经过去
现在应当放松
飞呵,飞吧
春天多么透明
我要整个天宇
而不是星星点点的蓝空
张牧
2018年9月
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
Hi! Boys and girls! My name is kelly,I am 12 years old. I am a student. I study at XiShan Primary School.I am in Class 1,Grade 5.I have three good teachers. They are Mr Lai, Miss Huang and Miss Lu.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
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