文中运用了5句名言,将伤感、感慨、无奈的忧愁与澎湃激情、豪迈壮志的年轻之心进行正反对比,在对比中突出年轻人的心态特征。
The first day of high school life, I have some thoughts and feelings。 The passage of time can always give people some special things。
In the new environment, I feel a bit excited。 Be able to recognize the new students and teachers is my greatest gains。 In the next three years, we will learn、work and progress together to make our dreams come true。 I will have new friends, and share the joy and sadness with them。 The process of learning is also a growing process。
Similarly, I will also face many difficulties。 I might have difficulties in learning and getting along with classmates , bearing some pressure in life。 However, I will get stronger and get through every step of high school three years。
考生运用排比句式,先铺排了李煜、陆游、杜甫、李白四位诗人及其哭声包含的深刻思想,接着又铺排了苏轼、阮籍、李清照三位诗人的诗句并揭示了其中丰厚情感,尽显非凡个性。
此段开头采用了设问句,自问自答,引人深思;引用孟子的三句名言;文彩大增。
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