中考英语作文押题2023云南【一】
导入：
第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
中考英语作文押题2023云南【二】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
中考英语作文押题2023云南【三】
在一个晴朗的日子，我和老师、同学一起去云南民族村。这是我第一次去云南民族村玩，也是第一次和新老师。新同学一起去校外教学！
到了民族村，大家就像一只快乐小袋鼠。首先，老师带我们去玩『疯狂列车』，当我坐上车时，心里一直紧张的蹦蹦跳，当车子往下冲时，因为没做好心里准备，所以整个人都弹跳起来，接着转弯时，更是像整个人都要往旁边飞出去了呢！此时，在列车上尖叫声连连，最后下车时，觉得松了一口气。接着，我们去玩“醉酒罐”，刚开始时，我觉得它比『疯狂列车』轻松许多，但随着它愈转愈快，我开始紧张了起来，但我不敢看外面，因为这样会晕头转向，于是我就看着中间的方向盘，但因为同学一直往同一个方向转，结果下车时我还是有点眼花撩乱。
乐园里最令我印象最深刻的游戏是『苏丹王大冒险』，我和同学坐在一台列车上，车子慢慢地前往一条伸手不见五指的通道。通道里很恐怖，比如突然就冒出一个表情恐怖的人，他对着我们说：『如果你们继续往前走，就会受到我的诅咒』，让我担心会不会真的受到诅咒呢！还有龙在头上飞来飞去，感觉它就要把我吃掉了。虽然有点可怕，但也很刺激好玩，因为它会让我一直充满期待。直到冒险结束后，我对它仍意犹未尽，很想再玩一次。
这次的校外教学，让我玩了很多有趣的游戏，真开心！
中考英语作文押题2023云南【四】
暑假我随父母去了云南，那里山明水秀，风景如画。随着一路盘旋的山路，这位“蛮荒”的精灵在向我们诉说着他的沧桑。
最让我难忘的是玉龙雪山。据说他虽然不算很高，但却是我国唯一一座没有被人征服的山。远远望去，他被云雾遮挡着，而随着太阳的升高，渐渐撩开了他神秘的面纱，但还是犹报琵琶半遮面。
一路随着导游的介绍，我知道了这里有许多的少数民族，他们创造了自己特有的文化。古老的东巴象型文字、那怪异的图腾、吓人的刀山……让我有种回到了原始社会中，惊叹、目不暇接。我紧跟着大人们，只有用自己手中的相机想把这些异想不到带回去。
出了少数民族部落，在车上看到一条峡谷。导游介绍这叫“死亡峡谷”。听着吓人的名字，心中不禁会想怎么会叫这么怕人的名字。原来这里是云南少数民族相爱的恋人自***殉情的地方。我虽然不明白，但却感到一种凄凉压抑。
爬上玉龙雪山，心情才豁然开朗，来到茂密的原始森林，呼吸着新鲜的空气，看着牛马成群，看着蔚蓝的天空是离我们那么近，更有比天比海还要蓝的湖，我仿佛走进了大自然母亲的怀抱。要不是爸妈拉着我，我都不愿意离开了。
在云南我还看到了银山、看到了丽江古城、看到了石林……一个感觉那是一个仙境。
中考英语作文押题2023云南【五】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
