则,有时要求谈论个人观点;二是根据内容提示写谈论规则的短文,这种文体通常
是夹叙夹议。写作本话题常用的结构除了课本上的含有情态动词的被动语态结构
should(notbeallowedto之外,haveto,must,can’t,should,shouldn’t,you’dbetter
等也很实用,大家应根据需要灵活应用。
OurSchoolRules
Istudyinastrictschool,andtherearemanyrulesinourschool.disagreewithit.Theoftheuniformsisbadandtheymakeusfeel
uncomfortable.Ithinkstudentsshouldbeallowedtoweartheirownclothes.Wewant
tobedifferent.Atourschool,evengirlsarenotallowedtohavelonghair.Thatis
reallystrange.Longhairmakesgirlslookmorebeautiful,andinChineseculturegirls
shouldhavelonghair.
Ofcourse,therearesomerulesIagreewith.Youngerstudentsarenotallowedto
ridebikes.Itisdangerousforthemtoridebikesduringtherushhours.Wearen't
allowedtoeatsnacksatschool.Ithinkmostsnacksarebadforourhealth.The
studentsshouldn’tbeallowedtogettheirearspierced.
My favourite swimmer is Sun Yang.He swims very fast.He took part in the last Olympic Games.He is my hero.
He is 21 years oid.He is very tall.He is 198cm tall.He is cute.I love him.
He is good at swingming very much, He has had all-round success in his study olypic games.
岳飞有一句千古名言:“文臣不爱钱,武臣不惜死,天下太平矣。”即使是高官,但岳飞依然一生简朴度日。
有一次,吴玠属官出差到岳飞军营,对于岳家军中别无姬妾、歌童、舞女等劝酒作陪,颇感惊讶。回去报告吴玠后,吴玠特别为岳飞送来一个四川名姝,并置办许多金玉珠宝做妆奁,然却被岳飞打发回去。试问这样的一代伟人,难道在死后的800多年后却不能被称作“民族英雄”么?我们现在的历史书上介绍岳飞是民族英雄,但是教育部就是不希望因为宣扬岳飞的民族英雄地位而导致民族间感情的对立而干脆去掉岳飞这个“民族英雄”的称号!毁掉了这一民族英雄的原因简单得令人发笑。仅是因为岳飞当年抗金时期的女真族,现在也是华夏子女的一部分。岳飞在抗金时期是一名民族英雄,在21世纪,也是我们心中的一名民族英雄!如果当年岳飞不抗金,女真族就会大规模抢掠百姓,边进攻大宋。岳家军的出现无疑是保护了黎民百姓。他们英勇战斗,击退了一批又一批的女真族,在百姓心中扎下了深根,要不,为什么岳飞被处死时,老百姓对他更多的是拥护,对朝廷的所作所为怨恨,对上苍的无情咒骂?这无疑已经是证实了岳飞在百姓心中的地位!从古至今,岳飞都是广大群众心中的英雄,即使“岳母刺字”难辨真假,但岳飞的精忠报国是有书记载的!“撼山易,撼岳家军难!”还有《满江红》,“怒发冲冠,凭栏处,萧萧雨歇,抬望眼,昂天长啸,壮怀激烈。”那是何等的激昂!难道就因为岳飞被冠名“民族战争的\'冲突者”而被摘去了“民族英雄”这一冠么?难道岳飞就是出于要屠***同胞的目的才出兵,因此才不能称为民族英雄吗?难道他就不是为了要维护自己民族的利益的吗?难道你要苛求岳飞早在几百年前就预见到女真族今天会成为我们民族的一部分吗?试问,当我们说到民族英雄岳飞的时候,有几个人会认为这是对女真族同胞的挑衅呢?没有嘛!要说岳飞称为“民族英雄”会危害在这个和平年代里的民族和平的话,那文天祥的民族英雄称号也要被剥夺么?他的千古名句:“人生自古谁无死,留取丹心照汗青。”若照此逻辑去思考,难道文先生留给我们的“丹心”就不危害民族和平了么?再照这个逻辑思维去想,我们将会失去更多的民族英雄!没有英雄的民族是悲哀的,而拥有英雄的民族却不去珍惜的,是没有前途的!
岳飞是民族英雄,不是现在我们能够改写历史的,我们不像某些人一样无耻地去从新编写历史,而正是历史见证了岳飞这个民族英雄的存在!难道我们要像某些人一样,不相信事实而幼稚地自欺欺人吗?
Therearesomephotosonthewall.They’reverybeautiful.
Inthemiddleoftheroom,thereismybed.It’snotsobig,butit’svery
comfortable.Everynight,Ilayonthebedandhaveagooddream.Ontherightofthebed,thereismydeskandchair.They’reinfrontofthewindow.Mycomputerisonthedesk.Thereisalamponthedesk,too.Icandomyhomeworkhereandplaycomputergames.
Mybookshelfisontheleftofthebed.Therearealotofstorybooksandpicturebooksintheshelf.Ilikethemverymuch.
Noteveryonehasabedroom.I’mverylucky,becauseIhaveaverybeautifulbedroom.I’lltrymybesttokeepitcleanandtidy.
1.OurSchool
Ourschoolisinthewestofthecity.Itisverybigwithatallteachingbuilding.Therearethirtyclassrooms,amodernlibrary,adinninghallandagym.Thereisabigplaygroundwhereweoftenhavesports.Therearelotsoftreesandflowersbesidetheplayground.Therearemorethanfivehundredstudentsandteachersinourschoolandweallworkhard.Ourschoolissobeautifulthatwealllikeitverymuch.
2.Howdidyouspendyoursummervacation
Ihadabusyandinterestingsummervacation.IdidmyhomeworkeverydaysoIfinisheddoingmyhomeworktendaysbeforethenewterm.Ialsoplayedtabletennisandbasketballwithmyfriendseveryday.Isometimeswent
moviesandwenttotheparkswithmyfriends.Isurfedtheinternet,readbooksandwatchedTVeveryevening.Ivisitedmygrandparentsandhelpedthemwiththehousework,too.Ihelpedmyparentscleantheroomandcookmeals.ThemostimportantwasthatmyparentsandIwenttoHannanIslandandspentaweekthere.
3..AhappyDay
Itwassunnyandveryhottoday.Igotupearlyandhelpedmyparentscookbreakfast.ThenIwashedthedishesandcleanedtheroom.AfterashortrestIdidmyhomeworkinthemorning.IntheafternoonIwentswimminginthe
nearestswimmingpoolwithmyfriends.Itwasreallycooltoswiminsuchahotday.Isurfedtheinternetandreadastorybookintheevening.Ireallyhadabusyandhappyday.今天天气晴朗比较热。我起得很早,帮父母做早饭。然后我洗碗打扫屋子。休息一会后我上午做作业。下午我和朋友去我家最近的游泳池游泳。在如此炎热的夏天游泳的确很棒。晚上我上网、看故事书。我今天很忙过得很快乐。
4.给笔友的一封信
DearLucy
Iamverygladtohearfromyou.Nowletmeintroducemyselftoyou.MynameisLiLei.Iamelevenyearsold.Iamtallwithapairofglasses.NowIam
studyingatYuyingPrimarySchool.IaminClassOne,Grade5.Ilikesingingandplayingthepianoverymuch.IamgoodatEnglishandChinese.很高兴收到你的来信。现在让我介绍我自己。我叫李雷。11岁。我高个子、带眼镜。我在育英小学。我在五年级一班。我非常喜欢唱歌和弹钢琴。我数学和语文学得都很好。
6。暑假打算
Iwillhaveabusysummervacation.Iamgoingtodomyhomeworkeveryday.Iamgoingtothelibrarytoborrowsomebooksandgototheshopstobuysomebooks.Iamgoingtodosportssuchasplayingtabletennis,swimmingandsoon.Iamgoingtovisitmygrandparentsandstaythereforaweek.Iamgoingtohelpmyparentsdosomehousework.我暑假会很忙。我每天要写作业。我打算去图书馆去借书、去商店买书。我要做运动,如:打乒乓球、游泳等。我要去看爷爷奶奶并在那住一周。我要帮父母做家务。
7.自我介绍
Hello,everyone.MynameisKelly.Iamfriendlyandhonest.IamgoodatEnglishandmaths.Ilikesurfingtheinternet,playingcomputergames,watchingTVandtraveling.IalsolikeplayingtabletennisandIamgoodatit,too.Ioftenplaytabletenniswithmyfriendsonweekends.AndIwanttobeafamoustabletennisplayerwhenIgrowup.WhatIlikemostistoseethe
seagullsflyingfreelyintheskysoIoftengototheseainsummer.MyfavouritecolouriswhitebecauseIthinkwhiteissymbolizepurity.大家好我的名字叫KELLY.我很友好、诚实。我擅长英语和数学。我爱上网、玩电脑网络游戏、看电视和旅游。我也喜欢打乒乓球。我经常和朋友们在周末打乒乓球,长大了我想当一个乒乓球运动员。最喜欢在海边看着海鸥自由自在的飞翔,因此在夏天我经常去海边。白色是我的最爱。因为我觉得白色是纯洁的象征。
8.海南之旅
wenttoHainanIslandwithmyparentsforaholidyandwestayedthereforaweek.IttookusonlymorethanthreehourstogettoHaikouairport.Weenjoyedthewarmsunshineandthesoftwind.Wewalkedonthebeachandpickedupthebeautifulshells.Wealsosufedonthewavesanditwasreallyexciting.Weplayedballgamesonthebeachaswell.IbelievedHainanwasreallyanattractivecitywithfamousbeachandmountains.WereallyenjoyedthebeautifulsceneryofHainan.
9.AniceSunday
ItisSundayanditisafinedaytoday.WecometothePeopleParkwithourEnglishteacherwhocamefromCanada.Look!Tomandotherfiveboysareplayingfootball.Cinaandsomegirlstudentsareflyingkites.AliceandIaretakingphotosnearthepark.Aliceandweareveryhappy.AlicehelpsusalotwithourEnglish.
今天是星期天,天气晴朗。我们和来自Canada的英语老师Alice来到人民公园。瞧,Tom和五个男同学在踢球;Cina和一些女同学在放风筝;我和Alice正在公园附近拍照。Alice和我们都非常高兴。Alice在英语方面帮助了我们很多。
10.Thismorning,Iwokeupwithastart:myclockwasalarming.Unwillinglyopenedmyeyes,Ifounditwas6:30already.Nevertheless,theroomwasverygloomy,foritwasrainingoutside.Whatacoldday!HowcomfortableitwouldbeifIcouldstayinbedforthewholeday,readingafavouritebookinthe
soundofrain.But,Ididhavetogotowork.Thoughitwasarushhour,ontheway,therewerefewerpeoplethanusual.Manypeoplearduouslyheldanumbrellawhichwasalwaysblowndownbyablastofwind.Fortunately,Iwasdressedinaraincoat.Severalyardsaway,apolicemanwasguidingthetrafficintherain.Iwasfilledwithdeepesteemforhisseriousness.Ikeptthinkingoftoday'splanforashortwhileand,then,Iwasinmyoffice.Abusydayisbeginning……
Dear Admission Committee:
Miss Pan Bei requested a letter of recommendation from me to support her application for graduate program at your university. As her teacher, I am pleased to comply with her request.
I first got to know Miss Pan when she enrolled at university and I was the assistant director of her class at that time. Being a professor for several years, I noticed that due to the lack of self-learning ability, it is really challenging for students, even those performing excellent in senior school, to keep up with the college speed. However, as a diligent girl without any solid background in Computer Science before college, she adapted quickly to the especially competitive environment in our department. At the end of the first year, she earned the 5th rank in her class, while ranking 1st among the girls. I was fairly impressed by her self-learning technique and exceptional efforts. Hence, I believe, goal-oriented, not afraid of inchoateness and with persistence, she has the quality to make achievements.
What distinguished her among her classmates, I think, was that she went far beyond acquiring excellent scores in the exams and instead got her range of knowledge enlarged. In spring, 2006, Miss Pan took the course I taught named Algebraic Structures and Combinatorial Mathematics. This inquisitive and assiduous young woman was sometimes the last to leave after my class, raising novel questions related to the subject. I found that she understood the knowledge in depth and detail. Furthermore, I still remember during the spring vocation in May, due to the break-down of my mail box, I missed her mails to discussing some questions. But the following week during the course time, she asked me directly. Her zeal for knowledge and the spirit to explore answers really leave me a deep impression. Finally, she was among the few students who got almost full marks in every test in class which showed her exceeding grasp of every chapter. Thus, I gave her 98/100 for the excellent performance in my course.
In summary, I have every reason to believe that Miss. Pan will make outstanding performance at your university as a graduate. I would appreciate greatly if you give her a favorable consideration. Please feel free to contact me directly if more assistance is needed. Faithfully yours,
Wanling Qu, Professor
Department of Computer Science and technology Peking University
Email: qwku.edu.cn
成员之间的关系更融洽、更和谐,每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如:
必须按时回家,不准打电子游戏等。请你结合家庭的实际情况,根据下面的提示
和要求,以“MyFamilyRules”为题,写一篇短文。
提示:1、家里有哪些家规;2、对家规的感受;3、对父母的建议。
要求:1、必须包括提示内容,可以适当发挥;2、词数:80个左右;3、文
中不得出现真实的地名和人名。
MyfamilyRules
Myparentsarestrictwithme.Therearemanyrulesinmyfamily.Letmetell
yousomeofthem.IamnotallowedtospendtoomuchtimewatchingTVorsurfing
theInternetonschooldays,andImustgotobedbefore23:00,becauseIhavetodo
myhomeworkandgetupearlythenextmorning.Ihavetocleanmyroomevery
morning.Myparentsthinkitisaverygoodhabittodoso.ButIdon’tagreewith
them,becausemyroomisnotalwaysdirty.EvenIdon’tagreewithsomeoftherules,
Iwillfollowthem.Ithinkmyparentswon’tdoanythingthatisbadforme.
Unit8ItmustbelongtoCarla
【原创习作点评】
请以Jack的身份根据下面提示帮他给他的老师Mr.Black发一封电子邮
件。词数在80词左右。
提示:1.当Jack到家时,他发现自错拿了英语书,他认为肯定是Tracy
的,因为书上有Tracy的名字。
2.Jack的书可能在Mr.Black家的书桌上。如果在,请老师帮忙保存起来,如
果不在,麻烦Mr.Black告诉他Tracy家的电话号码。
DearMr.Black,
Iamsorrytotroubleyou.Iwantyourhelp.AfterIgothome,Ifoundthatmy
Englishbookwasn’tinmybackpackandItookawrongbook.Ithinkitmustbe
Tracy’s①book,becausehernameisonit.IthinkmyEnglishbookmightbeon
yourdesk.Ifitisthere,pleasehelpmekeepit.Ifitisn’tonthedesk,pleasetellme
Tracy’stelephonenumber.Shemighttakemybook.Iamlookingforwardto
youre-mail.Thankyouverymuch.
Jack
教师点评这是一篇比较优秀的学生习作。得分点(1)内容完整,行文流畅(2)
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