小王子有一个小小的星球,星球上忽然绽放了一朵娇艳的玫瑰花。以前,这个星球上只有一些无名的小花,小王子从来没有见过这么美丽的花,他爱上这朵玫瑰,细心地呵护她。
那一段日子,他以为,这是一朵人世间唯一的花,只有他的星球上才有,其他的地方都不存在。
然而,等他来到地球上,发现仅仅一个花园里就有5000朵完全一样的这种花朵。这时,他才知道,他有的只是一朵普通的花。
一开始,这个发现,让小王子非常伤心。但最后,小王子明白,尽管世界上有无数朵玫瑰花,但他的星球上那朵,仍然是独一无二的.,因为那朵玫瑰花,他浇灌过,给她罩过花罩,用屏风保护过,除过她身上的毛虫,还倾听过她的怨艾和自诩,聆听过她的沉默……一句话,他驯服了她,她也驯服了他,她是他独一无二的玫瑰。
“正因为你为你的玫瑰花费了时间,这才使你的玫瑰变得如此重要。”一只被小王子驯服的狐狸对他说。
从前,有一对懒惰的夫妻,生活十分贫困,却整日想着不劳而获,希望天上掉馅饼下来。有一天,神奇的事情发生了,他们家的母鸡居然下了一个金蛋!
这对夫妻把金蛋拿到市集上去卖,换了一大笔钱。竟然不费吹灰之力就得到了这么一大笔钱,夫妻二人心里都喜滋滋的。就这样,他们每天都拿一个金蛋到市集上卖,不久便发了大财,买下了很多田地,又盖起了漂亮的大房子,还请了许多仆人,日子过得舒服极了。
但是他们依旧很贪心,对这一切仍然不满足。有一天,妻子对丈夫说: “既然那只母鸡每天可以下一个金蛋,那它的肚子里一定有很多很多的金蛋,说不定还藏着一个大金库呢!”
丈夫听了,十分赞同地说: “没错!我们干脆把它***了,把所有的金蛋都取出来,这样我们就不用天天那么麻烦去捡蛋了。”
说干就干,夫妻俩兴冲冲地走向鸡窝,把母鸡***了。但结果让他们大失所望,母鸡的肚子里根本没有什么金蛋,更别提金库了!夫妻俩非常后悔,但为时已晚,他们本来每天能有一个金蛋,现在什么都没有了。
很快,夫妻俩把所有的财产花光了,又过回了贫困的生活。他们住回了原来的破屋子,哀叹道:“要是我们珍惜原有的财富该多好啊!如果我们不***那只下金蛋的母鸡,现在每天还能有一个金蛋呢!”
一只八哥把孔雀换下来的羽毛装扮了自己,然后照孔雀的样子在孔雀中四处奔走炫耀,傲气十足地认为自己是个儒雅之士。孔雀识破了它的真实身份,嘲弄、讥讽之声接踵而来,一群孔雀围上来把它的装扮连同它本身的羽毛拔得一干二净,那副模样可真够吓人的了。八哥想重新回到八哥同伴中躲避,但却被其同伴拒认,并把它赶出了家门。
像这样的“八哥”还真不少,他们常常拾人牙慧来装扮自己,人们称他们为剽窃者。
我家前面有一条马路,负责清扫这条马路的是一位大概四五十岁的中年妇女,她穿着黄色的保洁服,推着一辆垃圾车,带着扫把和铲子每天去扫马路。清洁工阿姨在我们还沉浸在美梦中时,就来打扫了。她一直在那条马路上不停地穿梭着,来回忙碌着,将地面上的垃圾都扫入了垃圾车里,就连一片叶子都找不到,真的是一尘不染啊!
清洁工阿姨的敬业更是令我佩服,不管刮风下雨,她都不会迟到或不来,即使是鹅毛大雪的天气,她也会像往常一样打扫卫生,有时,树上的积雪砸到她,大雨把她全身都淋湿了,她仍然默默无闻地为我们服务,有时,晚上还要加班到很晚为了我们,每天,都能看到她忙碌的身影。为了大家,也为了高淳,清洁工阿姨付出了多少?
建设绿色高淳,需要清洁工人的`辛勤劳动,更需要园林工人的花草精心的呵护。他们在用心的打扮着我们的城市,每天风里来雨里去,都能看到他们佝偻着背,拿着一把大剪子细心地修剪花草树木,花草树木就像他的孩子一样,每天都精心呵护着它们。当太阳火辣辣的时候,就及时为它们披上一张“黑纱”,以防被晒焉;当冬天来临时,又是他们为树木裹上麻绳,以防被冻坏……
同学们,婀娜多姿的树木,碧绿如茵的芳草,绚丽多彩的鲜花,组成了这奇妙无比的世界。但是,没有这些城市美容师们的辛勤劳动,我们哪来今天这么美丽的环境;没有这些城市美容师的辛勤劳动,我们哪来今天这么健康的生活?高度的园林绿化水平,是国家富强、民族繁荣、社会文明的重要标志。让我们所有的高淳人及高淳的朋友们都积极行动起来,为高淳的绿化献出绵薄之力吧!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
仔细一看,每朵花似冰晶,像雪花。初开的“花”并不多,也不大,有含苞的腊梅大小;但再过几个小时后,那“花”开得可茂盛了,从树枝一直开到树梢,“花”也大了些,远远看去,像盛开的梅花,好看极了!我小心翼翼地为它看护了三天。到第四天时,见托盘上的水干了,树上的“花”也开始凋谢了。
尽管如此,这“圣诞树”为我的课余生活还是增添了乐趣。到圣诞节到来那天,我还要再买一树,为圣诞节增添一道美丽的风景!
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