英语作文感恩节五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语作文感恩节五年级【二】
是一个活泼开朗的男孩,今年13岁。我非常感谢我的父母,感谢他(她们把我带到这个世上,感谢他(她们给了我宝贵的生命。
小时侯,都是妈妈给我洗脚。妈妈给我洗脚时的情景到现在我还记忆忧新。记得那时侯:妈妈给我端来洗脚水,让我把脚伸进去。用她那长满茧子的手抚摸着我的脚。有时我不小心把水溅到妈妈脸上,惭愧的底下头,等着妈妈严厉的批评,可妈妈却笑了笑,然后擦擦脸上的水,继续给我洗脚。现在我长大了,也想帮妈妈洗洗脚。
就在过完年的头一晚上,我提前端来洗脚水,放在床边。妈妈正在看电视,看见我端来洗脚水,有点莫名其妙。我对妈妈说她洗脚。妈妈听了,高兴的把脚伸进水里。我听着妈妈讲着过去的事,摸着妈妈磨起水泡的脚,不禁流下了眼泪。我扑到妈妈怀里,妈妈高兴的抱住我,对我说:“我的女儿长大了!懂事了!”
我学会了感恩,学会了孝顺父母。通过这件事,我也觉的.自己长大了,懂事了。父母一手把我们拉扯大,为得就是我们有出息,长大后去大城市找好工作。不要像他们一样在地里干活,不受像他(她们一样的苦。
我长大以后,我还要做许多好事,感恩别人,感谢人们对社会的付出。让人与社会感到温暖,这样人与人之间才能充满温暖。幸福,没有战争,没有烟火的世界,让我们用人与人之间的和平。团结来回报社会,不让社会受到一点伤害,因为它已经为我们付出了太多太多,而有些人却不懂得回报,不懂得回报,不懂得感恩,有些人还在放肆的伤害、破坏社会，他们想让人与人之间充满仇恨，想让社会毁灭，想要战斗。
我们一定要打消他们的念头，用社会的温暖来化结他们心中的仇恨。
