2021届中考英语作文范文

2021届中考英语作文范文

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2021届中考英语作文范文

2021届中考英语作文范文【一】

1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。

"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

2021届中考英语作文范文【二】

今天下午的第二三节课我们观看了感动中国。

中国第一个人造卫星是孙家栋设计的。

有一次,某栋楼着火了,王锋他为了救四十多位人的生命,自己冲进火海中救了四十多人,本来自己能活下来,却因为自己冲进去救人自己去世了。

下一个是支月英,她是一个小学教师,她爱她的学生胜过她的女儿,甚至她的女儿说过她的妈妈是一个好老师,但不是一个好妈妈。她村里边的人都说她是一个傻子,她说:“我是一个傻子,山里头需要我这个傻子”。

支月英完了就是秦玥飞,他一到村里不熟悉村里的生活,村民们一开始都嫌他用水用的多,到了后面,他为了修一条水渠从他的工资里一点一点的攒了下来,最后他把这条水渠修好了,

然后就是张超。他是一名飞行员,在他第一次上舰的时候出了一次意外去世了,在他摔到地下之后问团长:“团长我还能不能上舰。”我佩服他的精神。

我从他们身上感到了很大的精神,有乐于助人的精神,还有无私奉献的精神。

我也要帮助别人,长大后像他们一样学习他们的精神,做一个勇敢、做一个无私奉献的人。

2021届中考英语作文范文【三】

今天,下午我们观看了感动中国。

我们都知道人造卫星,但是你们知道是谁设计的吗?是孙家栋,你们知道他是干什么的吗?孙家栋他是就是第一颗人造卫星的设计者,后来成为了总设计师。当嫦娥九号发射成功时,大家都互相握手拥抱时,孙家栋就却在一个角落里偷偷抹眼泪。

王峰,凌晨一点钟,一楼客厅着火了。他可以最先逃生,打他却没有。他把自己的家人救出,还把邻居救出,楼上的人也救了出来,邻居都得救了,而他却被烧成了黑人。所有人都知道了,把这个故事打在报纸上。在100多天中治疗,有人捐款,有人捐自己的皮肤。结果,在100多天的治疗中,去世了。

支月英,她是山内的一名小学的教师。她的女儿对她说:“你是给好老师,但你不是好妈妈。”她还要做一名山内的教师,一直干到自己干不到为止。

秦玥飞,他是大学生村官。他来得村里,开始建设,建设许多村民用的,吃的东西。我感觉他很了不起。

我感到这些人都很了不起,我要向这些人学习。我们祖国能有这要的人,我很欣慰。总有一双眼在注视着他们。

感动中国,就到这里就结束了。

2021届中考英语作文范文【四】

2018《感动中国》总共介绍了十位拥有不同的优秀品质的人物。其中让我印象最深的就是飞行员刘传健。他面对飞机驾驶舱挡风玻璃碎裂,飞机失去平衡,仍临危不乱,沉着冷静地完成了36个精准无误的操作,使飞机成功降落在跑道上。

成功,永远留给有准备的人,这是我在刘传健身上得到的感悟。正是刘传健用他过硬的飞行技术,才使飞机安全迫降,才能救回所有乘客的命。只有像刘传健一样,在困难来临前做好准备,在平时训练时就把基本功打扎实,才能获得成功。

比如,在我们练习火灾逃生时,就该严阵以待,把它当做火灾真的来临时那样练习,准确无误地做到捂紧口鼻,猫腰前行等动作要领。只有在训练时认真严格,掌握好逃生的方法。才能在火灾来临之际,为自己争得一线生机。如果你没有在训练时记牢逃生的方法并熟悉动作,那么,在火灾真的来临时,你就会慌乱,也就做不到正确逃生了。

只有在平时演习时用功,在危险来临前做好充足的准备,并且保持冷静才能在危难之际为自己赢得一线生机,就像飞行员刘传健一样。成功,永远留给有准备的人!

2021届中考英语作文范文【五】

导入:

第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题

Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧

正文:

第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点

Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由

第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点

Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由

结论:

第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ

2021届中考英语作文范文【六】

今天下午我们观看了感动中国,共看了两个感人的故事,其中最感人的是一位没有双臂的男孩儿的故事。

那位孩的名字叫刘伟,他正是因为电线杆倒塌压断了他的双臂,让他只能用脚吃饭,用脚写字,还能用脚刷牙,洗脸······。他并没有抱怨老天给他带来的不幸遭遇,而是努力的去学习,挑战任何困难的事情。

刘伟长大以后,母亲让他学习游泳,刘伟没有不答应,只是严谨认真地去学。几年后他取得了成功,而且得了第一名!但最不幸的是在比赛之后,刘伟的病又复发了。之后便到医院去检查,检查后得知暂时不能做剧烈运动。刘伟并没有放弃,只是开始练钢琴。刚开始时,他的脚大拇指按不下按键,每次一按就是两个按键。后来,他把大拇指侧着练,虽然练的挺好的,但是脚上总是起泡,这使刘伟十分痛苦。终于,两三个星期过去了,刘伟会弹奏小曲子了。

通过这个感人的故事,我觉得它在告诉我们不管面对什么困难,我们都要努力克服,不能当缩头乌龟。而且要有坚强不屈,顽强拼搏的意志。相信自己就能战胜困难。我认为大家应该以刘伟为榜样!

2021届中考英语作文范文【七】

I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.

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