五年级月亮英语作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级月亮英语作文【二】
你喜欢童年吗？我觉得啊！童年是一个婴儿的摇篮，摇啊摇，摇出甜甜的，稚嫩的梦话；是风铃，轻轻晃动一下，便发出悦耳的音乐；是音乐，唱出童年的欢乐；是一本书，记载着童年 的“五味瓶撒翻那种的味道；是飞船，带领我穿越时空的距离；是彩虹，让我走向世界的另一端；是幅画，画出童年的五彩生活。快乐的童年像雨后的彩虹一般，缤纷绚丽，然而童年是每个人成长过程当中最美好的一段回忆，回想起小时候干过的趣事，那是数不胜数的。童年承载着我们小时的梦想，带着我们乘风破浪、勇往直前……
大概在我五、六岁那年里，在我生日那天。我去姐姐家过夜，但是要先要玩个“泼水节，”捣蛋顽皮的我才肯睡觉。姐姐家楼上有一个咖啡色的大缸，里面装满了清澈见底的自来水，那就像一面镜子，照着我和姐姐红扑扑的苹果脸蛋。我和姐姐争先争先恐后地去抢最大的勺子。“耶！”我兴奋地欢呼起来。因为我抢到了那把最大的勺子。
大战拉开了帷幕。我大占优势，将手往上一举，手一歪，里边的水一骨碌地涌了出来，泼到了姐姐，星子四溅，姐姐又不得闭上了眼睛，但姐姐不甘拜下风，趁我发现秘密的时候偷袭我 ，我没有反攻，只是静静地站在那里比一个安静的手势。我轻轻地碰了一下水面，水面泛起了一层层淡淡的波纹，就像老爷爷笑起来时额头上的皱纹。那水面上顽皮的.月亮也微微地抖动了一下，我以为：我要养的月亮就要从我眼皮底下跑了逃跑了，我怎甘心？便猛地一下盖上了盖子。我神神秘秘的一举一动，引起了从不打破砂锅问到底的姐姐的注意力。姐姐疑惑不解地问我：“搞什么呢？”我故意搞神秘笑了笑说：“没什么！走吧，睡觉去吧！”姐姐摸摸后脑勺，用她那巴眨巴眨好似会说话的眼睛好奇的盯着我好似在想：这小鬼，到底在搞什么呢？无奈之下姐姐只好随着我下楼睡觉去了。我早早地上了床，听见姐姐下楼的声音，我便知道，她没有将我的“月亮宠物放生”，我安心地进入了甜蜜的梦乡。
第二天早晨起来，一股淡淡的花香沁入五脏六腑，让我神清气爽。我雄赳赳，气昂昂地走上楼去看我的宝贝——月亮。我偷偷摸摸地掀开盖子，生怕惊动了月亮，怕他趁机逃出我的手掌心。掀开后定睛一看，我就一屁股蹬在地上号啕大哭。我的哭声响彻云霄，惊天动地，把睡得正香的姐姐吵了起来。姐姐急急忙忙地前往来“营救，”只见她那焦急的面孔担心无比的冲着我问：“怎么了？哪儿不舒服了？”我吞吞吐吐地告诉姐姐：“昨天，我把月亮锁在水缸里，但是它长翅膀飞走了，月亮不翼而飞！”话音刚落，姐姐的嘴巴成了“O”字型，然后便捧 腹大笑。幼稚无知的我却不知道姐姐在笑什么，傻呆呆地盯着姐姐，然后不知一股什么东西让我破涕而笑，但是我不知道自己在笑什么。
童年像飘带似的小路留下了我童年的脚印，童年像蓝天碧日，留下了我童年嘹亮的歌声。童年，多么令人回味！可它却像一片片羽毛，越飘越远。偶然间，我采了一串童谣，衔在日中。
童年像一串糖葫芦，
又酸又甜。
童年像一缕缕阳光，
又亮又刺。
童年像一颗颗星星，
闪闪发光。
五年级月亮英语作文【三】
到了20xx年，那时的地球已经拥挤不堪，人口早已超过了一百亿。作为拯救地球协会的会长的我，对限制地球人口暴增有着不可推卸的一份责任。
作为科学家的我有着一些别人想不到的法宝，例如：飞龙穿梭器，极地金刚钻，气体放射机等等等等有趣又神奇的宝贝。
在八月三十一日——我的生日那一天，我向同事们进行了一次大胆的陈述，我想开发月球!同事们一律发对，只有米欣禹同意我的看法，我们背着大家，偷偷地去了月球。我用我的飞龙穿梭器，对着月球指了三秒，“唰”的一声，我和米欣禹就到了月球。
“哈哈哈，月球，我来开发你了!”我用气体放射机在十五分钟内放出了大气层，月球上的大气有了，还有一个难题——引力。月球上得引力太小，我们没有办法站稳，多亏了我的飞龙穿梭器。我们才能站稳，这时，米欣禹拿出了一块万能磁铁，我用极地金刚钻打开了月球中心，月球引力也解决了，现在，我用我的“语音变实际”机器，说出了我心中的月球“高楼大厦拔地起，绿树成荫花满地。学校公路足球场，月球就是新地球!”话音未落，月球真的变成了新地球。
经过我们的开发，月球更美了!
