写作我也一直不差,因为以前背过新概念的一些文章。雅思的其实想要提高也不是难事,我买了一本《雅思万能八分作文》,还不错,里面有很多句子值得借鉴;然后我看了一些从3G上下载的范文,又从里面挑了一些句子和表达;在最后一天的时候,把我挑的句子和表达都罗列在一起,大概也就50条左右,我背了一下,接着就计时练了一次,结果在规定时间内直接写超了,TASK1写了200多,TASK2写了350,当时把我吓了一跳,因为我怕考试的时候按这样的思路写这么多时间会不够。所以在考试的时候,我写的比较慢,控制好节奏,每句话都是想好了再下笔的,最后字数差不多。
建议:1,一定要看一定数目的
太多专业数据会给人捏造的痕迹,缺乏真实性。考官会质疑数据的出处。
例:A survey indicates that the number of people smoking has increased to as high as 65 percent in China.(一项调查显示。。。)
"65%"让文章看起来有些假,有捏造的嫌疑。"A survey"又不够具有代表性。
雅思考试有条写作指令叫做:Include relevant examples from your own experience. 所以很多考生在考试时都喜欢使用举例法(exemplification。这一扩展方式本身无可厚非,然而在使用时几种例子是不适合的。
这类考生往往缺乏刨根究底的精神,总是在主旨周围绕圈子,不达中心。这也是中国考生的通病,看似八九不离十,却总也不愿把话点破,让考官怎能不又急又气。
在所有的扩展方式之中,因果推理法是最受用也是最透彻的方法。凡事先追溯到其原由,再扩展其结果,这是将主题阐述清晰、论述有力并且具有逻辑感的最佳手段。例如在“出国留学利弊”这一题目之前,若考生单纯说“有可能会使青少年学坏”,难免缺乏说服力,但若紧接着扩展“因为孩子高中毕业后思想上还不成熟,若认识不好的朋友会难以抵抗社会上不好的诱惑”,那么此论点一定会让考官眉头舒展,点头认同。由此可见,善用此推理法会让议论文如虎添翼,事半功倍。
引出原因的表达方式主要有:Because../Since.../As....
引出结果的表达方式主要有:so.../Therefore,.../Consequently,.../Accordingly,... /As a result,.../In this way,.../result in.../Thanks to.../Due to.../ Owing to..
【写作真题】Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or ate out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss.
【名师献计】It is important to note that imports are now increasingly affordable to the general population. Thanks to the rapid development of the freight transport industry, air travel has become an economical mode of transport, resulting in the subsequent decrease in the cost of importing. Meanwhile, technical advance in the food processing industry has made it much easier to preserve fresh fruits and vegetables over a long-haul air flight. Because of the wide availability of imported crops, there are more varieties...
童年就是那些很久没有听到那些很熟悉的名字了,像什么小涣熊方便面,瓶装牛奶,等等一些很小的东西组成的回忆。
记得那个时候经常去买方便面就是为了里面的那一张小小的卡片,得到了卡片之后就不知道面要怎么办了,带回去又怕挨骂,就只有给别人吃了,别人吃完了之后会觉得很可惜,自己的东西就这样被别人吃了心痛很久。可是在和别的小朋友玩的时候,拿出自己收集的卡片的那种自豪就会取代了心痛。
关于瓶装牛奶,我映像最深的就是送牛奶的`阿姨送来的牛奶上经常飘着一层奶皮,我最讨厌喝那个了,可是每次一煮好牛奶,我还是不得不去乖乖的把它吃下去,玻璃瓶子是要留起来的,第二天就有人来回收。
那个时候小,出远门要坐公交车的,被父母带着,在永远拥挤的车子里,听那个售票员嚷,没有买票的补啊,然后一个个把他们找出来,催促着要买票。
现在的我,经常在寻找,在这个城市的角落里找寻,找和我童年有关的回忆,牛奶在超市里买的,不需要再去煮了,自然也不会有那些讨厌的奶皮,可是,不知道为什么,那些牛奶比原来的要难吃很多,味道也不纯正了,公交车换成了无人售票的,车上开始空空荡荡的,很少有人愿意去挤公交了,吃方便面的日子不少了,可是,再也不关心卡片了,焦急的扯开包装,看着表把一顿饭吃完,大概才15分钟的样子,就要象另外一个地方赶,忙碌,越来越忙碌的我,感到的是空虚,开始怀念童年的时候,时间已经不允许了,现在也很难再有那些时候的东西了吧。
2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?
3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?
4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?
5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.
7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.
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