中考英语作文甘肃省【一】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
中考英语作文甘肃省【二】
导入：
第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
中考英语作文甘肃省【三】
早上八点多，我和我的同桌从我们的'住处出发，也就是兰州市城关区庆阳路附近，前往位于兰州市七里河区的.甘肃省博物馆。两地相距六公里左右，我们本来打算步行过去的，考虑到博物馆九点就开门了，再加上我同桌的朋友中午过来，我们就选择坐公交过去，这样就会有更多的时间来参观博物馆。
于是，我们坐上了31路公交车，也许是因为早上八点多，时间有点早，又或许是由于兰州人少，一路上，整个公交的座位都没坐满，根本就不用考虑让座问题。我事先查过腾讯地图，上面显示30分钟到达目的地。然而事实上，我们只花了10分钟就抵达甘肃省博物馆了。我们拿证件领取门票后就进到馆里了。
博物馆一层未设置展厅，我们用手机拍下展厅示意图，发现整个博物馆面对参观者开放了7个展厅，第二层有三个展厅，分别是红色甘肃、丝绸之路文明展、古生物化石展，这三个展厅各有特色，展品丰富多彩，让人眼花缭乱。第三层有四个展厅，它们是黄河古象厅、恐龙展厅、甘肃彩陶展、甘肃佛教艺术展。
其中，给我留下深刻印象的是甘肃彩陶展厅，这个展厅的数字博物馆做得很好，数字化、可视化、可触摸、可创作，吸引了很多大朋友、小朋友，可以说是比较人性化的、接地气的。因为传统的博物馆是大家只能看，而且看到的只是一小部分，不可能让人去触摸、更别提创作了。如今，将数字技术运用到博物馆，不仅让人能够360全方位地欣赏展品，还能让人进行再创作。还有，有些展品旁边放置了二维码，只要扫一扫就可以听解说，等等。
就像彩陶，上面的花纹就是我绘制的。由于人们可以进行再创作，参观者完成后会有一种成就感，对展品的印象也会更加深刻，这是非常棒的。还有，恐龙展厅里有一个展品可以触摸，旁边写着“摸一摸，沾点龙气，会更幸运！”这也是很接地气的，赢得很多参观者的好评。
此外，甘肃省博物馆内还设置了博物馆书店和咖啡厅，以及博物馆纪念品专卖店，有效地利用了博物馆资源，值得称赞。
由于我同桌的朋友要来，我们要赶去接她，在博物馆参观的时间只有2个多小时，但我真的感觉非常震撼——有视觉的震撼，也有心灵的震撼。我想，如果时间允许，我能待上一天，慢慢去欣赏那些展品，以便更好地体会我们的先辈们的智慧，去联想他们是如何生活、学习和工作的。
甘肃省博物馆，下次再见！
