myholiday英语作文六年级5句话【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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myholiday英语作文六年级5句话【二】
Early morning，sun farther—in—law showed smiling face，small alarm clock “ bite the bell bites bell “ the ground cries，seem to saying：“Beautiful，should get up！Should get up！！
Li Lixing，see sun farther—in—law came out，asperse on pale green branch full bright sunshine。 Li Li wore a beautiful powdery dress，wore a sky—blue pants again。 At this moment，transmit outside the window “ chirp “ cry，li Li looks up to look，a birdie is crying，seem to saying：“Li Li has breakfast quickly，I and you go to school together。 I and you go to school together。
Li Li eats breakfast rapidly，carry small satchel on the back，go to school together with birdie。
myholiday英语作文六年级5句话【三】
在我记忆的仓库里，储藏了许许多多的名言警句，它们像一盏盏指路灯，照亮我前进的方向，其中对我影响最大的是莎士比亚说过的一句话，那就是——抛弃时间的人，时间也会抛弃他。
记得那一天晚上，我像以往一样，吃完饭后，不由自主地去看电视。可不知怎么回事，那天晚上的.动画片特别多，特别精彩，一集连着一集，我看着看着，随着时间的流逝，已超过平时规定的15分钟了，动画片太吸引我了。我像中了毒一样，无法像以前那样关掉电视，自觉地回屋做作业。脑海中，一个一身漆黑地天使支持着我说：“算了吧，好不容易碰到这么好看的电视节目，多看一会儿吧，反正就这么一次”而另一个一身洁白的天使也在提醒我说：“多看一秒也不行，小学生要有时间观念，学会控制自己。”“好不容易爸爸妈妈不在家，多看一会儿吧，没人会发现的。”第一个声音亮出了自己的观点。“可是，现在已经进入总复习阶段，电视看多了会影响学习的，快去写作业吧！”我被这两种声音搞得头昏脑胀。
就当我被这两个天使弄的心乱如麻时。忽然，我的脑海里闪现出莎士比亚说过的一句话：“抛弃时间的人，时间也会抛弃他。”我猛地一下回过神来，恍然大悟。是啊！现在我不正是那个把时间抛弃在动画片上的人吗？不行，我要得赶快做作业。我一看表，呀，我竟在这里白白浪费了40分钟，时间如流水，过得真快呀。
我急忙关掉电视，一头扎进作业的海洋。手中的笔在数学卷、作业本、作文本中来回穿梭着，把一张张空白的纸写满，把一道道题解开，终于把一项项作业做完了。虽然时间还是头也不回地向前迈着脚步，可我再也不休闲了，在知识的海洋里遨游，时间是多么充实。当我写完最后一个字时，我看了看手表我露出了满意的笑容。
时间是宝贵的，可有的人却不懂得珍惜；时间就像流水一样一去不复返，可有的人却不懂得把握；时间是短暂的，可有的人却不懂得利用……有的人把“还有时间”当做浪费青春和生命的借口，却从不知道“明日复明日，明日何其多。”生命是由无数个一分一秒组成的，我们要跟上时间的脚步，才不会被时间抛弃。莎士比亚这句名言真是蕴含了生命的意义。
我轻轻地伸了一下懒腰，晚风像一双温柔的手轻轻地抚摸着我。虽然刚才那件事没有在我平静的生活中掀起多大的波浪，莎士比亚这句名言却深深地印在我的脑海里时时给予我提醒，给予我影响。
