——小鸭子
我以前养过一只可爱的小鸭子。虽然它己经离我而去,但是我还是经常想它。想它那淘气的样子,可爱的动作,真让人忍不住想抱抱它。
它刚出生几个月就来到我家。那时,它还是个黄毛丫头,小嘴尖儿稍微黄一点。它整天昂着头,挺着胸,像个大将军。还有它的肚子很肥,软软的。从远处望小鸭,简直是个小小的蓬松的毛球。它小时候就吃碎米,时不时喝点水。
几个月过去了,小鸭鸭要换毛了。起先,是它的肚子的毛变白,然后是翅膀上的毛变白,软软的翅膀被硬硬的翅膀所代替了。我知道它现在极需营养,所以我叫姑姑买了一包饲料回来给我的鸭子拌饭。有一次,我姑姑还从中山大学拿了一条蛆叫斩成几段,喂给鸭子吃。小鸭子一见到蚯蚓,马上飞快地跑过来,大口大口地啄。
夏天,我会提供一个免费“游泳池”——大盆子给鸭子舒展筋骨。鸭子到了“泳池”里,不停地打水,好像很高兴。
小鸭走路的速度非常快,但路线不直。‘已走路时,摇摇摆摆,两只脚交叉地走,活像个醉汉,做小主人的真担心它会绊倒。
小鸭子睡觉的地方要特别留意。因为我是把它放在阳台养的,晚上蚊子多,而小鸭子又最怕眼睛给蚊子叮着。所以我把它放在一个箱
子里睡,箱子表面有好多个细小的孔,可以通通风。
我和小鸭子的感情特别好。有一次吃晚饭时,我还在做作业,妈妈三番五次地叫我出来吃饭,并叫我赶快来看看鸭子。我不耐烦地走出来。我走到饭桌前往下一看。呀!可爱的鸭子在我的凳子下来回踱步,原来是想帮我占座位。我高兴极了,连忙对鸭子说:“谢谢你,小鸭子。下次记得还要帮我占座位!”
瞧,我的小鸭子多可爱呀!
Hi! Boys and girls! My name is kelly,I am 12 years old. I am a student. I study at XiShan Primary School.I am in Class 1,Grade 5.I have three good teachers. They are Mr Lai, Miss Huang and Miss Lu.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
我最喜欢的小动物
背着一个头圆形厚重的大壳,深深浅浅的纹路在上面交错成勾勒成一幅凌乱的画,短短的四肢缓缓的踏出每一步―这就是乌龟,一个努力爬行,努力生长的动物。
在没养乌龟的以前,我认为它是一个即笨拙又贪婪的家伙,外表与众不同,性格也十分稳重。可当我十分用心喂养它们的时候也发现了他们的另一面,它们团结,美丽的那一面。
阳光温暖明媚的直射在了鱼缸透明的玻璃上,两只小乌龟懒洋洋的伸长了四肢,把原本水汪汪的大眼睛眯成了一条细缝,一动不动,仿佛在享受午后的休闲与安稳。可这样的平静没持续多久“暴风雨 ”就来了。一只小乌龟像触电了一般,前肢不停地向前划,后职业在奋力拨水,弄得鱼缸里的石沙上上下下漂浮不定,它的眼睛里顿时放射出一种从未有过的光芒。我半知半解的看了看,把一个手指头放进去动了动它的头,它竟毫不畏惧,反而伸长了脖子。原来,浴缸的另一头角落里静静遗落了一块快要融化的龟,我当时心里暗笑:这个小馋鬼,一看见食物就六神无主。而令我十分震惊的是,它跑过去并没有不管三七二十一一口就吞掉,而是用头一点一点把食物抵过去,最后抵到了另一只龟的面前,有恳求的目光看着,仿佛在说:快吃吧,快吃吧!我顿时觉得可笑,心想这个小东西还懂得“让人三分”,后来才发现,另一只乌龟受伤了,它的前掌的内掌被石粒刮去了一小块皮。
虽然没有惊艳的外表,但是有一颗善良的心,这就是我喜欢的小动物。
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
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