我们到市中心时,只见到处绿树成荫,花朵缤纷。我还没来得及细赏。就听妈妈说:\"广安是你***爷爷的出生地,城郊就是他的故居。今年是***爷爷诞辰100周年,\"***纪念馆\"即将建成,我们去看看,怎么样?\"\"好啊!\"我爽快地答应了。
来到***纪念馆,首先映入眼帘的是仿清建筑的大门,看起来古色古香。我们大约走了五十来米路,就到了第一景点——***铜像,但是由于还没有修好,只能看见上半身,邓爷爷开心地笑着。
给我印象最深刻的,就要数***爷爷的故居。他家是一个四合院。原来他家是地主,家境比较富裕,他有三个弟弟、两个妹妹,***爷爷是长子,由于母亲很早过世了,所以有了一个继母。我们又参观了他家的粮仓、厨房、卧室、蚕房院子……他家的床的`两边都有一把椅子,而且门的门槛很高。我们又看了邓家老井,这口井是当时他们搬过来时挖的,井里的水清凉、可口,而且井水涨到井口来了。
我们还参观了德政坊、翰林院子,还有神道碑。
神道碑是***爷爷的先祖邓时敏,获得功绩,当时的皇帝赐建神道碑,但是遗憾的是神道碑在文革时被毁掉了,所以我看到的这个神道碑是重建的。将近参观了二个小时,我们离开了***纪念馆。
当繁星满天的时候,我们回到广安城便直奔思源广场。说是思源广场有水幕电影,就是把电影投放到喷泉上。可惜呀,当我们赶到广场时,水幕电影已经完了,只有喷泉还随着音乐跳舞。中间那腾空而起的水柱尤如一条白龙试图飞向天空,
夜深了,我们才依依不舍地离开这美丽的广安
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My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
How time flies! Three years has passed. I will graduate from junior high school. I will enter a new school to study. What will my new head teacher be like?I imagine that she/he is not only young but also beautiful/handsome. She/He maybe both patient with us and kind to us. She/He is also strict with us. I hope she/he is outgoing. She/He can understand us and make friends with us. If she/he likes doing sports, we can play together after class. She/He can get moreknowledge from her/him.I am looking forward to seeing her/him!
我的新班主任
时间过得真快!三年过去了。我将从初中毕业。我将进入一所新学校学习。我的新班主任会是什么样的\'人?
我想她/他不仅年轻,而且漂亮/英俊。她/他也许对我们既有耐心又对我们很好。她/他对我们也很严格。我希望她/他是外向的。她/他能理解我们并与我们交朋友。如果她/他喜欢运动,我们课后可以一起玩。她/他可以从她/他那里获得更多的知识。
我期待着见到她/他!
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
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