如何取得进步作文英语初三【一】
今天返校参加散学典礼，刚进教室就听到李老师说：“张子奕、谭瑞瑶快去领奖”。我还没回过神儿，就匆匆忙忙跑到七彩厅，我们和其他班级的同学一起排队领奖了。
终于排到我们领奖了，在拍照老师的镜头下我有点害羞，可为了领奖我还是硬着头皮上台了。在领奖台上接过校长颁给我的奖状心里美滋滋的，我看了看奖状：“进步明星奖”，太棒了！我快步跑回教室，在教室里，老师又分别给我发了“语文新星杯”三等奖和“英语新星杯”三等奖的奖状，这么多的奖状太好了，妈妈一定会很开心的。
开完散学典礼后我心里还想着妈妈会怎么奖励我呢！
如何取得进步作文英语初三【二】
俗话说“一分耕耘、一分收获”。学习只要一努力就会进步。我们班就有一位同学的学习进步了。他不是王朝，也不是王永强，而是活泼幽默、调皮贪玩的亓泓润。
亓泓润个子不高，皮肤白得像面粉一样，眼睛不大，鼻子不高，是一个普普通通的男生。但是他有两个特点：一是嗓门非常洪亮，二是他非常喜欢笑。他还有一个外号是children。大概是他的名字很像这个英语单词。
原来的亓泓润是一个贪玩的男生。有一次上课时，他正在来自发愣开小差，老师叫他发言，他站起来说道“啊？干嘛呀？”教室里同学们哄堂大笑，他看到同学们笑了自己也不好意思的笑了。
可是最近，亓泓润像变了一个人似的。他上课不再发愣了，也不再开小差了，而是积极思考、大胆发言。他日记也比原来写的好了。记得写袁韶曼那篇日记，他得了四颗星。
我希望亓泓润的学习越来越好。
如何取得进步作文英语初三【三】
今天知道妈妈是我们班家委会成员，我感到很骄傲！妈妈也很开心！她说：“非常愿意为我们班级全心全意做些事情！”她不支持郭美美（我不知道她是谁），她支持班级事业！
我会像妈妈一样热心，帮助同学，帮助老师。我和妈妈共同进步！
如何取得进步作文英语初三【四】
马上我上学就有一个月了，在老师的指导下我有了很大的进步，但是还是有些不好的习惯，现在我回家写作业的效率提高了，能够独立完成完成老师布置的阅读作业。
我要向我的好的同学学习，改掉自己的坏习惯，养成好的习惯，希望老师多帮助我，让我能够茁壮成长。
如何取得进步作文英语初三【五】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
如何取得进步作文英语初三【六】
记得四年级下册领卷纸的那一次，是我最激动，最高兴，最难忘的一次。因为我那天得了一张“进步之星”奖状。那天早上，语文老师郑重的在讲台上宣布：丁家骏……几个同学因为学习进步来领“进步之星”奖！我和其他同学获奖的同学在一阵热烈的声中走上了讲台，喜滋滋的从老师手中接过了奖状。
我如获至宝的捧着奖状，爱不释手的看了又看，摸了又摸，好大一会儿，我才把它端端正正的放进书包里。常言说：一分耕耘，一分收获。只要你努力了，就一定会有收获的。我们不能一接过奖状就骄傲。一定要正确的对待每一件事情。踏踏实实的写好每一次作业。认认真真听懂每一节课。完成一个小学生应该做的一切。让我们一起努力吧！
那一张“进步之星”给我留下了第一次最难忘的印象。我清楚的知道，我还有非常多的不足，我以后一定要努力！
如何取得进步作文英语初三【七】
我们班有一个“进步之星”――孟凡恒，我是今天的新闻报导人，想听听吗？想听就为他投一票吧。
我们班真是各有千秋，比如会画画的，会书法的，会唱歌的。进步的也很多，可是进步之星，我觉得就非他莫属！
记得有一天，我们班发考卷，教室里寂静无声，连一根针落下都能听得见，我们都紧张极了。“孟凡恒！”听到自己的名字后，他就闷闷不乐的从座位上站起来，慢吞吞走到讲台上，小心翼翼地拿起卷子，老师用愤怒的眼光看着他，说：“孟凡恒，你能长点心吗？你看看你，给班里拉了多少分，本来，我们应该是年级第一名，就因为你，变成了年级第二，能不能好好学？要不，你就直接滚蛋！”
老师的一番怒吼，吓得我们汗毛立马都竖起来了。随着老师说完，他就满脸通红的回到座位，下课铃一响，同学们都一窝蜂的走到他身边，围成一个圈，一看他的分数，39分，大家都纷纷指责他，他哭了，哭的稀里哗啦，我心想：孟凡恒真可怜。
可是在最近几个月里，他变了，每天早上都能听到他朗朗的读书声，下课后，同学们都在玩耍，只有他在加强复习，别人吃饭时，他也在学习，周末他还叫别人辅导他，期末过后，他竟然取得了全班第三的好成绩，大家都对他刮目相看，不由得向他竖起来大拇指。
好啦，我的新闻报告完啦，就到此结束吧，你如果也觉得他很棒，就给他投一票吧。
