Hi! Boys and girls! My name is kelly,I am 12 years old. I am a student. I study at XiShan Primary School.I am in Class 1,Grade 5.I have three good teachers. They are Mr Lai, Miss Huang and Miss Lu.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
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My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
我读六年级了,担任过我的班主任的老师一共有三位,这里我要写的是陈老师。
陈老师,她那两道弯弯的眉毛下长着宝石般发亮的眼睛。鼻梁上架着一副眼镜,看起来既有学问又特别有精神。她平时讲话细声细语的,那柔柔的\'声音传来,似微风般不停地吹去我们心灵上的灰尘。一句话,陈老师在我心目中是一个美丽而又温柔的人,不然我们女生怎么会给她一个“good老师”的美名呢!
陈老师总是那么和蔼可亲。当我们听话时,她会笑眯眯地和我们谈话。即使我们做错了事,也不会骂我们,只会耐心地帮助我们改正错误。
前段时间,我的同桌陈浩楠又在外教课上捣蛋了。当时外教老师可谓是火冒三丈,气得直叫“魔鬼,魔鬼!”于是,那节课的课堂纪律分得了有史以来令人瞠目结舌的最低分——零分。当陈老师知道了这事后,我看见她的眼里有了泪花,我知道那时陈老师真的伤心了。接下来的那节课,陈老师含着泪极其耐心给我们讲道理,让我们明白课堂纪律的重要性。在那次以后,我们在外教课上就表现得很棒,尤其是陈浩楠,他也得到了外教老师的表扬。
“春蚕到死丝方尽,蜡炬成灰泪始干。”陈老师啊,您整天就像蜜蜂那样,辛勤采花,精心酿蜜。日复一日,年复一年,多辛苦呀!您更像那辛勤的园丁,用自己的汗水浇灌这美丽的我们这些花朵,使我们绚丽绽放。
六年级:贾梅琪
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