太多专业数据会给人捏造的痕迹,缺乏真实性。考官会质疑数据的出处。
例:A survey indicates that the number of people smoking has increased to as high as 65 percent in China.(一项调查显示。。。)
"65%"让文章看起来有些假,有捏造的嫌疑。"A survey"又不够具有代表性。
此类段落不论字数多少,都给人空虚的感觉。考生往往为了凑足篇幅而“不择手段”。表面看来扩展了许多,但仔细永远只有一个意思。不得不让考官觉得即单调又啰嗦。
1.审清题意,理解所要写作的书信是何种类型,收信人是什么身份,应采用什么语气和格式来完成写作。
2.罗列词汇,根据提示,将可能用到的词汇、短语、句型搜集整理。
3.串句成篇,适当添加连接词和过渡词,必要时增加相关细节以使行文连贯。
4.检查润色。
写作我也一直不差,因为以前背过新概念的一些文章。雅思的其实想要提高也不是难事,我买了一本《雅思万能八分作文》,还不错,里面有很多句子值得借鉴;然后我看了一些从3G上下载的范文,又从里面挑了一些句子和表达;在最后一天的时候,把我挑的句子和表达都罗列在一起,大概也就50条左右,我背了一下,接着就计时练了一次,结果在规定时间内直接写超了,TASK1写了200多,TASK2写了350,当时把我吓了一跳,因为我怕考试的时候按这样的思路写这么多时间会不够。所以在考试的时候,我写的比较慢,控制好节奏,每句话都是想好了再下笔的,最后字数差不多。
建议:1,一定要看一定数目的
邀请信:
It is my pleasure / a great honor for me to invite you to ...
I am sure that you will enjoy yourself here.
I hope that you won’t decline my invitation.
感谢信:
It was kind and generous of you to do this for me and I do appreciate it more than I can say.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for ...
道歉信:
I am terribly sorry that I have done ...
I hope that the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes.
I regret to inform you that I am unable to do ...
询问信:
I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain ...
I shall be grateful if you can offer me the information about ...
I would like some detailed information about ...
求职信:
I wish to apply for a position with your company.
I am very interested in exploring a position as a ... with your company.
I trust myself that I have the appropriate qualifications and experience for this post.
投诉信:
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with / at ...
I am completely disappointed to find ...
一个国家同样难代表世界。雅思是international的考试,不应将范围框的太局限。此外考官来自各个国家,过分使用一个国家的例子会引起他们的反感。
例:Many children in China like to play computer games for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.
只需小小改动便可成为成功范例。
因此,首先考生应了解,举例是一种常见的论述方式,特别在论述某一些比较抽象的话题的'时候(比如文化类或跟艺术相关的话题)。但是,并不是每个段落都需要例证法,举例过多或过分牵强会影响文章的正式感,甚至给考官喋喋不休的感觉。
举例是为了更加形象地叙述事情。朗阁海外考试研究中心提醒考生们要注意以下原则:
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