Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
其实很想知道这种早恋电影是怎么过审核的,还未婚先育。14,5岁未婚生育然后会这么幸福欢乐,不怕教坏小学生初中生吗。
关于抄袭《非常主播》这件事情,怎么说呢姜炯哲导演是知道了并默许,还是没发现或者发现了没发飙,不得而知。因为著作权这件事情,好像该归给编剧?还是投资方?(这方面法律知识不是很熟,莫怪
关于抄袭,网上留言不多,可能看过车太贤主演的《非常主播》的人大多是80后,90后。而现在影院主力军都是95后,00后的原因吧。
那我来说一说,《非常主播》这部电影的剧情吧,下面这一段引用自百度百科——
知名DJ南贤洙(车太贤饰曾是偶像团队的成员,想当年的情形就跟“东方神起”不相上下。尽管已经三十好几的他却仍被称为永远的少女偶像。看到娱乐圈竞争日益激烈,南贤洙开始努力朝幕后发展并且在电台拥有了自己的节目,眼看节目不断占据收听榜冠军,事业重新冒出无限生机。
然而在这个节骨眼儿上,等待他的却是一个22岁的女儿。站在南贤洙面前的女生正是自己的头号听众黄正南(朴宝英饰。黄正南坚定地告诉南贤洙自己是他在初三那年留下的骨肉。现年36岁的南贤洙怎么也无法相信自己有一个小自己14岁的女儿,然而更让他崩溃的还在后面。
早就成为未婚妈妈的黄正南身边还带着一个六岁的小孩黄基栋(王锡玄饰,也就是南贤洙的孙子。理清头绪后,南贤洙冷汗直流,关键的不是这个女儿和孙子是真是假,最关键的而是不能让广大粉丝们知道自己的丑闻。暂时收留他们不成问题,可偏偏他又是个不折不扣的工作狂,既要工作又要保守秘密防止和小孙子曝光,南贤洙开始了他忙碌得没头没脑的生活。
我们再看看外公芳龄38,下面这一段同样引用自百度百科——
38岁的明星主播何志武(佟大为饰在家中精心打扮,准备迎接性感女友“临幸”。打开家门时,外面站着的却是一对陌生母子——来自“胡建”的20岁未婚妈妈唐慧茹(陈妍希饰带着5岁的儿子唐家栋(吕云骢饰上门认亲,面对从天而降的女儿和小萌孙,正值“芳龄”的何志武无法接受,要求进行亲子鉴定。然而,结局却令人出乎意料。
抄袭不抄袭其实都不好说,因为影片未正式上映。抄袭与翻拍也只在于有没有跟原作者打好招呼。这些年来,祖国大地上也有很多翻拍得很好看的电影和电视剧,请大家客官并且耐心得等待。
而娱乐圈那么大,著名导演于麻麻拍摄了那么多作品雷同作家琼瑶阿姨的小说。打官司配的钱对其抄袭挣的钱来说更本就是九牛一毛。郭某导演写的文章雷同于庄羽童鞋的小说,赔的钱一样不及稿费的零头。
这都过于自大,也过于偏激。
知识产权,说大不大,因为对于大部分普通人来说,远没有隔壁的王老太撞衫自己来得事大。
知识产权,说小不小,因为我们对于一个公民来说,道德,不是因为我没有看到,就不重要,道德,是人之所以为人,而非牲畜的一个软性指标。
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