my favorite animals作文120词【一】
这是一个动物学校。猫鸭子。马和动物学校的狗。有些动物正在看书的英文。有些动物画鸟。
some animal are play games......Ther are very happy . sheep teacher is talling a stors.
一些动物在玩游戏......疗法很快乐。羊老师换一个故事。
This animal school is very good. I like this animal school very!Do you like this animal school?
这种动物的学校是很好的\'。我非常喜欢这个动物学校!你喜欢这只动物的学校吗?
my favorite animals作文120词【二】
要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
