oneday英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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oneday英语作文五年级【二】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
oneday英语作文五年级【三】
看完觉得one day是部好电影，达到了抒情煽情的目的，作为一部爱情片已经够格了，一帧帧美如画的电影画面也能让我这个外行人勉强把它和文艺片画上个等号了。
就剧情而言，其实很怕最后烂尾。好在他们在一起生活过了，把之前的每一天都当做了相知相恋，没有浪费，尽是浪漫。我更愿意相信他们从认识的第一天前就把对方当做了可信任的朋友，很特殊的朋友。我相信人和人之间日后有没有发展其实从第一次相遇开始就定下了结果，互相讨厌的人肯定没有下文了，勉强相处的两人即使是笑料也无法共享，这又有什么乐趣呢，就像emma和她的前男友一样，尴尬。
其实爱情有很多种打开方式，有的人无法离开爱人片刻，即使互相折磨也要在一起，这是爱。有的人需要时间给一个答案，慢慢地，好朋友变成了心中无法填补的空缺，友情经过时间的沉淀成了爱情。哪一种更感人，更像爱情，没有答案，都好吧。
至于我自己执着的.答案，我想最好的办法是给自己点时间。二十年里Emma和Dexter可以始终念念不忘，这出于爱，可要是拿走这二十年，他们无法相爱，他们的生活和观念差了太多，是时间改变了他们彼此，Emma变自由了，Dexter变成了一个值得寄托的人。或者说，故事刚开始的他们并不合适，如果在一起，一两年就是这段感情的期限，这是可预见的。Emma是聪明的，她是这段关系里的牵线者，松松扯扯，不过度亲密不过度疏离，能让对方看见她的好，也告诉对方我不是个没有自我的人，我需要尊重和倾听，这是当时花天酒地的Dexter无法给予的。经过了家庭的变故，Dexter成长了，变成了一个历经沧桑的成熟男人，他回到了Emma身边，这时候他们再合适不过了，彼此熟悉又亲密，又同时渴望一个家。那就在一起吧，为什么不呢，这是Emma向Dexter奔跑的原因，内心最后一点犹豫被冲散，她选择相信这个男人，最爱的人就在眼前，还有什么比这更值得期待呢。
oneday英语作文五年级【四】
Early morning，sun farther—in—law showed smiling face，small alarm clock “ bite the bell bites bell “ the ground cries，seem to saying：“Beautiful，should get up！Should get up！！
Li Lixing，see sun farther—in—law came out，asperse on pale green branch full bright sunshine。 Li Li wore a beautiful powdery dress，wore a sky—blue pants again。 At this moment，transmit outside the window “ chirp “ cry，li Li looks up to look，a birdie is crying，seem to saying：“Li Li has breakfast quickly，I and you go to school together。 I and you go to school together。
Li Li eats breakfast rapidly，carry small satchel on the back，go to school together with birdie。
