I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
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第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
研学之旅在我的期盼下终于与我们见面了,这次我将深入的是湘南一个叫郴州的城市,怀着激动的心情,登上巴士,启程了!
第一站——东江湖
东江湖被称做“湘南洞庭”,当经过大坝把湖面收入眼底时,果然名不虚传,用“一碧万顷”形容再贴切不过了。青绿色的水像雕琢过的玉石,阳光洒下,波光粼粼。孔子说:仁者乐山,智者乐水。东江湖水天相接,中间分布着连绵不断的青山,风光旖旎。
乘着船,来到兜率岛,进入了溶洞。由于这里独特的喀斯特地貌,里面的.熔岩奇形怪状,但这正是独特之处。这里宛如一个巨大的“地下迷宫”,直至出了洞。迎面热流吹来,我仍在感叹大自然的鬼斧神工。
在龙骨峡谷中行走,总能看到汹涌奔腾的瀑布,沿着河流逆流而上,所有人都累红了脸,但大家仍不放弃,登了顶,更为感叹青山绿水的美丽。看见瀑布从几十米高的地方飞漱下来,化为冰雾,在阳光下,便可以看出那中间隐约的七彩光芒。用心装着满满的收获,继续前行了。
第二站——湘南起义纪念馆
见到高耸在山上的纪念堂,我心中便不禁肃然起敬。有了湘南起义,才有了井冈山会师,才有了后来辉煌的中国。
进入了纪念馆,听着讲解员的讲解,仿佛回到了那战火纷飞的时代,一步步看着先辈们的感人事迹,望向山下那美丽的城市,心中一阵感慨,这也使我的决心更加坚定。
第三站——板梁古村
踏着青石块,穿梭在小村中,触摸着古老的砖墙,观赏着精湛美丽的雕刻,可以说是栩栩如生,让我仿佛回到了以前。来到了泉水源头,那清澈的水,净化了我的眼睛,更净化了我的心灵。天空中这时下起来丝丝小雨,拍打在水潭中的荷叶上,哗哗的雨声,让我感受到了村庄的宁静,我的心也平静了。
与板梁古村分别后,便踏上了回家的征程,翻看手机中一张张照片,开心的一幕幕在脑海中回放。与郴州说再见,做更好的我!
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的\',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。
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